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In a dim and dreary night, in one inconspicuous cave, lay an ancient and desolate transparent flame, flickering crimson through the night. This small and innocent flame lazed there, seemingly devoid of life and the essence of 'being'. Just behind it stood an upright simple looking man, staring at this flame, flashing with madness, He muttered dryly in a haggard voice "Beast!"
Welcome to a story told through countless aeon; a story about a ragged boy who most would say is at the bottom of the barrel in life. He has nothing but a tattered apartment, yet this seemingly simple and pitiful boy one day finds a book under his sofa, and although it looked like any other antique, such a book will bring him on a path beyond!
Noah, a typical boy, a typical life he has lived up to now. His mother works hard, his father is nowhere to be found. He wants to become a cultivator, to help his family. Yet, he finds himself to be talentless, useless. Someone without a spirit root. Someone who will forever be a mortal. Like a collapsing tide, he watched his friend grow, all as he was left behind... He washed up as a nobody, and he will forever be that to the grand world. But he was unwilling! He will try, try to go against the unchanging fate tieing him down! ---- This is a story I am writing for my enjoyment. I plan for one chapter everyday, however I am making no guarantees. I just hope some people may be able to enjoy the journey this story will take. It won't be amazing, but hopefully it can strike something within your heart. :).
Grum: Someone was maliciously reporting Monster paradise author and his story needed to go on a
Manual review and it passed it there is no problem only some small revisions in previous chapters and the story can continue normallyMonster Paradise · C1012
The Martial Master · C0
Gillstar: Thank u for the chapter Hope u get back to daily uplaodsThe Martial Master · C0
vkg313: Instead of starting over, you may want to rewrite the early chapters. I tried hard to continue reading, but it just got too hard to keep going. If you like your story, and enjoy writing more chapters for it, then I would continue to do so. If you find it too difficult to keep going on, start from fresh. I apologize, but I just can't continue to keep reading this story.
Writing a basic outline for each arc is necessary. You need to plan for this arc AND the next one, otherwise your writing will get stuck. You should also make a quick basic outline of what is going to happen in each chapter and then write. It helps a lot.The Martial Master
vkg313: I don't like the direct you took the story starting chapter 36. It's a bit disappointing. Without emotions, the MC is just a psychopath. Also, there isn't any character development for the MC, other than he feels hurt and in pain all of the time, and he hates the world.
Also, throughout the chapters, there are a number of unexplained things that the MC can just do somehow with no explanation in the actual story of how he learned to do so. There are a lot of jumps in logic and sometimes you can't understand what the author is trying to get across in the moment. Also, Writing quality isn't very high, and it feels like it is written by someone who has English as a second language.
It's an okay ******* story, but it's very difficult to give it a high rating.The Martial Master
vkg313: How is he healing from all of the damage he is doing to his body without food or medicine or something? He was already severely weak from before, and intent shouldn't be able to heal all of that...The Martial Master · C0
vkg313: Too much unexplained stuff. Su Min can somehow read peoples auras to discover a trace of Yu Yan and figure out she is dead? How the hell can he do that all of a sudden?The Martial Master · C0
vkg313: ANGER is an EMOTION. If he asks for all emotions, then the MC shouldn't feel anger either.The Martial Master · C0
Gillstar: Thank you for the chaptetThe Martial Master · C0
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Gillstar: Get better and fast Thks for the chaptetThe Martial Master · C0
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Gillstar: Thank you for the chapter keep them comingThe Martial Master · C0
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