mistergod

1yr

Posted

so this story is beyond garbage. the plot moves GLACIALLY slow... the mc is a beta male loser beyond helping that somehow is still a virgin 500 chapters in....

I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo

Anime & Comics · akikan40

mistergod

2yr

Replied to Granville4554

the author liked your comment but didn't correct it. what a prick.

Her father's betrayal's, Jonah's manipulations, her mother's suffering… she didn't know about any of it. That was one of reasons he had Susan extracted, because it was the only way to change her perspective. Another was for his own piece of mind. Ward could never live with himself if such truths remained buried.

MCU: Darkseid(Dropped)

Movies · Endless_Crow

mistergod

2yr

Replied to Draugzel

since your not specifying we can only assume all eyes are opened abruptly and her eyes were clenched shut... the structuring of the sentence is aweful.

Her eyes opened abruptly. She was breathing heavily and her eyes were clenched shut. Drops of sweat ran down her forehead. It was always a shock the first few times around, but she would get used to it. With this kind of training, she would be formidable in no time at all, even her hand-to-hand combat would improve in leaps and bounds.

Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Anime & Comics · Draugzel

mistergod

2yr

Replied to

shouldn't you specify then? "her other eyes were clenched shut." for example? wouldn't have make more sense?

Her eyes opened abruptly. She was breathing heavily and her eyes were clenched shut. Drops of sweat ran down her forehead. It was always a shock the first few times around, but she would get used to it. With this kind of training, she would be formidable in no time at all, even her hand-to-hand combat would improve in leaps and bounds.

Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Anime & Comics · Draugzel

mistergod

2yr

Replied to ZOMBIEWARZ

bruhhhh

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Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

mistergod

2yr

Replied to Jocom

angellmn basically replied to you, "you wanna go mother fucker?!" followed up by, "i got covid right now, so bite me if you dare bitch"

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Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

mistergod

2yr

Replied to NWOK

yea its complete bullshit, 8 hours in the hardcore gamer friends who always make a guild together in new games would have destroyed the low level bosses like this through the power of a mob of players.

[Individual Adam crystal you have killed the Boss monster for the first time in [Horizon].

Rebirth: Over the Horizon

Games · Stylish_Demon

mistergod

2yr

Replied to Stylish_Demon

[Priest] is also a classic RPG role which is basically the healer of the group. The priest has different skills depending on which god they choose to serve.

Rebirth: Over the Horizon

Games · Stylish_Demon

mistergod

2yr

Replied to Stylish_Demon

...but you could literally just edit the chapters that mention the population... also you said 83% of the people on earth disappear, and then a second later say over half of humanity is playing the game 3 months in, i must ask, doesn't that mean a large number of players who played the game, also disappeared in real life? could it be they were the players that reached endgame before the game became real? you could theoretically add a twist into this story that the mc after trying hard in the game, became one of those players and got summoned to another world or something...then he has to work together with the other players that reached endgame in order to complete some crazy feat that kills most of them, in order for them to return back to earth.... then it would be almost like one-punch man on earth, as mc and a small handful of other people all about as strong as mc are completely invincible on earth. and then you could have fights for political power and stuff.... you could really make a story like this branch out a little into every direction as far as story is concerned.

Within a week of its introduction, [Horizon] drew a large number of individuals; by the end of three months, roughly 4.7 billion people out of a total population of 7.6 billion had registered as [Horizon] players.

Rebirth: Over the Horizon

Games · Stylish_Demon

mistergod

2yr

Posted

the worst kind of chinese trash I've ever read. 13 chapters in and NOTHING makes any sense. mc is a max level 80 character, but he can apparently be instantly killed in one hit by a level 5 boss. even though in every rpg ever made levels make a huge difference and his sheer stats as a level 80 should allow him to one punch the boss. furthermore hes playing vr like what we have in real life right now, not actual full diver virtual reality. yet hes able to do things and regularly talks about tastes and sounds and feelings you could only experience in a full dive virtual reality. author uses this as a way to introduce his female landlord who demands his 3 months overdue rent, and just comes into his room while hes playing the game and shes impressed and thinks he's like "an awakened lion" because of his perfect control of his character as he slowly whittles the boss to death with his ranged attack and staff that come out of nowhere.... this story has more plot-holes in the first 13 chapters then all of the top 10 stories on this site combined in their entirety.

I Was Reborn With All Max-Leveled Classes of Mage, Warrior, Rogue, and Healer!

Games · Flavored Lollipop

mistergod

2yr

Replied to DarkWagg

way bigger

It was quadrupedal, supporting its enormous, six thousand plus ton weight on skyscraper-like legs muscled with the densest, most efficient ultrafibers and sheathed in ashen carapace impervious to even the strongest of blasters.

Alien Evolution System

Fantasy · John_Doever

mistergod

2yr

Commented

this is the most AMA-teur writing i've ever seen on a novel with over 1000 chapters.

ch 0 9 The Ranks Just Keep Ascending

Abe the Wizard

Fantasy · The Mass of Eating Melon Seeds

mistergod

2yr

Commented

this still doesnt make any sense. mc could just send a letter to literally every noble in the kingdom with a copy of the blueprint along with another such letter to every merchant group or construction group out there, and then its literally impossible for anyone to get mad at them for it, he might even get commendations and have his families noble title upgraded to a higher rank like marquis or baron or something.

Hence, the blueprint of the wooden irrigation system was locked inside the Bennet family vault. As a nobleman who grew up knowing a fair share of things, the Knight of Bennett knew how life-threatening this device could be. If some high lord happened to know about it, he would most likely keep it all in his own family collection, meanwhile killing anyone who happened to know something about it. The Knight of Bennett was all too familiar with this sort of thing.