ShuYme

1d

Replied to TheUltimateP1e

[A/N: Skeevers are large rats, very large that if you are afraid of rats like me then all you can do is just spam Fireballs at them from afar]

ShuYme

9d

Replied to W_D_3766

Its atleast more than some other fics Where the mc is an actual midget for the world like 160cm, hopefully he grows to like 2,80

The boy, Wilhelm, was dressed gorgeously and had a slightly youthful appearance, appearing around fifteen years old. However, his height was not that of an average fifteen-year-old, as he stood at just above 2.3 meters tall, towering over even most adults.

One Piece: Prince Of The Charlotte Family

Anime & Comics · ParagonOfChaos

ShuYme

9d

Posted

The writing is soulless and convoluted, the paragraphs drag on and on endlesslesly while nothing happens plot wise. It is an absolute chore to read, the characters are devoid of personality and the mc is as two dimensional as they come. It also read like an AI story

One Piece: Crossed Flames

Anime & Comics · GhostofTaurus

ShuYme

10d

Posted

Nothing has really happened so far, no plot progression at all, so its hella slow paced, writing is meh, but the author says english isnt his first language so that can be forgiven, updating stability is good, characters are bland, and the humor is pretty juvenile, hopefully that changes. World background hasnt rlly come into play yet so🤷‍♂️

Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale

TV · Inkbot

ShuYme

13d

Posted

Started good, quickly went downhill, mc lacks agency and the fic is just drama drama drama and nothing else. It is a chore to read

The Healer Prince : HOTD SI

Book&Literature · Drkest

ShuYme

19d

Commented

I never Get why pokemon fics seem to rush the journey, mc is 11 hes not gonna die anytime soon so why the rush, he could just accumulate powerful pokemon and try when he is older

Jason was stumped at that while giving a complex look towards me but I was thinking internally until It struck me then, and I replied, "Time."

Pokemon: Trainer SI

Anime & Comics · KK9494

ShuYme

30d

Replied to marcoo

I did read the rest of it aswell, while there were more interactions between characters it also felt very rushed and shallow, andfor the most part it still read allot like a report of events, rather than us being there «following» the events through the eyes of the mc, maybe thats What ur going for idk. ILl follow the story until the mc gets to kingslanding and i guess ill see if it changes anything

ch 0 1 Galladon Tarth (1)

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

ShuYme

1mth

Posted

1 star because this is obvs written by a ChatGPT, and the author not mentioning it is wrong. Its not Even his work because he obvs didnt write it

Naruto : Shadows of Resurgence

Anime & Comics · Silent_stiele

ShuYme

1mth

Commented

It reads like a synopsis, no character interactions at all

ch 0 1 Galladon Tarth (1)

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

ShuYme

1mth

Commented

Theres can’t be more than like 5 chapters left at lost, just finish it

ch 43 update

Degenerate Reborn In House Of The Dragon

Book&Literature · SERBMADHAUS

ShuYme

1mth

Replied to Alfiemooon

The typos he can fix pretty easily with AI, idk bout the rest tho

Naruto The Shadow King

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

ShuYme

1mth

Replied to Venerable_Read3r

Are you being deliberately obtuse? He has knowledge from the anime,the bounties have pictures, and dragon has a distinctive face tattoo, I.e he would be able to recognize dragons bounty poster

Luffy smiled, before frowning, when he opened the book. And then looked at Garp, "But I can't read."

One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

ShuYme

1mth

Replied to Venerable_Read3r

He has knowledge from the anime so he will know dragons face

Luffy smiled, before frowning, when he opened the book. And then looked at Garp, "But I can't read."

One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

ShuYme

1mth

Posted

The world bends over backwards to accomodate the mc, He is the worlds little special boy. Gary sue who masters everything instantly. It is mind numbingly boring to resd about

Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon

Anime & Comics · lazarus898

ShuYme

1mth

Replied to Horny_Gentleman

Did u drop this?

ch 65 Ch-65

Becoming Usopp

Anime & Comics · Horny_Gentleman

ShuYme

1mth

Commented

"You're finally awake!" I heard a feminine voice beside me.

One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Captain_Erebus

ShuYme

1mth

Commented

1cm smaller than shanks

The young man had medium-length black hair and piercing blue eyes that stood out against his slightly tanned skin. He was also quite tall, standing at an impressive height of 1.98m, and had a well-toned physique that indicated his physical training.