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Randompasserby: The Second Commandment :
Thou shalt give alms to the church of the Sea God according to each person's piety and capability.

The transfer account shall be known to you by a Divine revelation each month, Loen currency preferred 😁

Lord of the Mysteries · C550
1 week ago

Damick: It would certainly be a blast to play as a tabletop rpg

Lord of the Mysteries · C529
2 weeks ago

Keyweilder: Hope this hasn’t been dropped

Rebirth in a Magical World · C22
3 weeks ago

Knight_Sky: I like this. Are you still writing?

Rebirth in a Magical World · C22
3 weeks ago

HeadDragon: thanks for the novel, plis don't leave it

Rebirth in a Magical World · C22
3 weeks ago

Keyweilder: Hope this hasn’t been dropped

Rebirth in a Magical World · C22
3 weeks ago

mimikim469: Nutty

Scholar's Advanced Technological System · C124
3 weeks ago

Senjuro: Man, I'd love to see a tabletop RPG with this novel's Mysticism/Beyonder Pathways/God Pantheon, there's just so much to do there

Lord of the Mysteries · C515
3 weeks ago

WeavingSpider: Read it. New, more realistic approach than insta overpowerd or "know-it-all" MC storys.
The MC in this Nocel doesnt learn the Spells like eating popcorn. Trial by error and learning.
No golden Trio so far -> No Ron (major +)
Mc is in the same year as Gred and Forge but is in Ravenclaw instead the beaten Horse Griffindor.
The characters are written in a way which you think how normal humans would act or how "wizards" would act.
Furthermore ( muhaha *sip from cup of tea ) is the story more inclined to the books than the movies.

Who ever read this review, have a nice Day and a warm Cup of Tea.

Rebirth in a Magical World
3 weeks ago
By this I mean continue doing a good work. No need to forcefully rush anything View More

hhhhz45: I hope you will continue to write this story and not just drop it. I like the fact that the mc is older than harry is because it gives a different perspective to the whole plot. Him(mc) not being able to read the 7th book is a nice idea beacuse he will not be able to distrupt the cannon. I hope you will not make the progagonist overpowered by stupid means(students after 7 years at hogwarts are not so powerful magician, i dont think even voldemort would be powerful enough to take an good auror in a 1v1) You shoul take into considiration the abilities of wizards from FBAWTFD 2 movies beacause the portray what a wizard is capeable of better than the origional story. My suggestions are to show through this story a magical world not seen with the books(its really narrowly portrayed) but that u still stay into "logical" boundaries of what jk envisioned, also i hope you dont make him the triwizard tournament champ or some "good" slytherin.

Rebirth in a Magical World
3 weeks ago
I would add that, there are no rules saying that the book has to end after the 7 years in Hogwarts or the 8 years until Voldemort’s defeat in Harry’s hands, especially since we have a story that is not exclusively tied in with Harry’s story. View More

hhhhz45: I hope you will continue to write this story and not just drop it. I like the fact that the mc is older than harry is because it gives a different perspective to the whole plot. Him(mc) not being able to read the 7th book is a nice idea beacuse he will not be able to distrupt the cannon. I hope you will not make the progagonist overpowered by stupid means(students after 7 years at hogwarts are not so powerful magician, i dont think even voldemort would be powerful enough to take an good auror in a 1v1) You shoul take into considiration the abilities of wizards from FBAWTFD 2 movies beacause the portray what a wizard is capeable of better than the origional story. My suggestions are to show through this story a magical world not seen with the books(its really narrowly portrayed) but that u still stay into "logical" boundaries of what jk envisioned, also i hope you dont make him the triwizard tournament champ or some "good" slytherin.

Rebirth in a Magical World
3 weeks ago

hhhhz45: I hope you will continue to write this story and not just drop it. I like the fact that the mc is older than harry is because it gives a different perspective to the whole plot. Him(mc) not being able to read the 7th book is a nice idea beacuse he will not be able to distrupt the cannon. I hope you will not make the progagonist overpowered by stupid means(students after 7 years at hogwarts are not so powerful magician, i dont think even voldemort would be powerful enough to take an good auror in a 1v1) You shoul take into considiration the abilities of wizards from FBAWTFD 2 movies beacause the portray what a wizard is capeable of better than the origional story. My suggestions are to show through this story a magical world not seen with the books(its really narrowly portrayed) but that u still stay into "logical" boundaries of what jk envisioned, also i hope you dont make him the triwizard tournament champ or some "good" slytherin.

Rebirth in a Magical World
3 weeks ago

Jmwells2003: I definitely want to stay within the power levels that J.K Rowling described, Nothing drives me crazier when people break the rules of a novel in a fanfic. Although I would be willing to bet Lord Voldemort could take a auror on by his 7th year. Anyways I am glad you are enjoying the novel so far, no plans to drop it, I already have thought out overall story plot.

Rebirth in a Magical World
3 weeks ago

Jmwells2003: So I'm not planing on making any changes to book 1 or 2, in book 3 there will be a few changes, by the time we get to the time period of the 5th and 6th books, many things will have changed, some for the better, others may be worse. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Rebirth in a Magical World
3 weeks ago

Nirvanic_Sun: Honestly, It's better than Harry Potter. It isn't like all of the other stories where the only content and development in the fan fiction is things that happened in the original. His family is well developed and makes you feel hostility for the noble family that is their enemy. His grandfather is mistakenly believed to have died as voldemorts follower since voldemort killed him before he could denounce to the public how crazy voldemorts ideals are getting. He has multiple goals that make sense and are based on things that have happened to him and his family. The only desire he has from his first life is to learn more about the mystery of magic, he doesn't want to become god or desire having more power than all others. He wants to fulfil his grandfathers goal of creating the best and fastest flying broom since the way to create the nimbus was basically stolen from his family. While he is strong for his age, he is nowhere near op. He is talented and will surpass others, but he couldn't cast wandless spells before getting his wand and only knew a handfull of year one spells when school started and learned two year two spells that are easier due to necessity. No becoming a master Occlumens way to easily, though I assume his first life can't be seen since he has almost forgotten it. A story that is developed well in all aspects, from the chatecters personalities and goals, to magic, and even politics and grudges between houses. One of my favorite parts though is that the protagonists 3 closest friends are all sorted to different houses than him and each other and the author is witing about the struggles and peer pressure they go through due to it.

TLDR:Actual story and development other than the "Practice magic secretly until Im stronger than someone two years older than me, then skulk around like an oriole behind a mantis, only making moves during crucial moments since I'm a pu$$y without knowing the future." That every other author uses. Just remember, If your reading this author, I want the future we know to be all fu<ked up by the time we get to it.

Rebirth in a Magical World
3 weeks ago
Don’t forget that the mc wasn’t a genius in the other life and that he didn’t have any connection to magic at all. He was a sick kid, who didn’t go to school.
His only opness is his family, a mature mind, a general knowledge of what is going to happen and the desire to strive to be better. His only advantage in magic is studying it in advance,having a tutor in the magic portrait and being smart. All believable and nothing too op.

He has no reason to be paranoiac or to expect things he has no reason to expect at all.

And you can’t compare Malfoy with the vilain in this story. It’s not because Malfoy chose to return something broken that this is the way all people do it.

He didn’t keep the ring, which means it can’t be proven he stole it. He just made sure it was lost. View More

seob97: Honestly I am little bit down since the nemesis chap. Thought with all the knowledge and mature mind he would be better than the ppl there. And the ring part was just stupid, he could have used charms to hide it or just hide it as wear it as necklace or something. And as u saw in the movie pure blood don't just take it and never return. Even malfoy returned it although it was broken, especially heirloom or their family. This book was fun at the beginning but then u made so big as a background but the characters and development bad like real bad. That's the reason why u r ranking is not high. Not real worth wasting the stone. To read yes definitely, when u have read all your updates here, but stones NAH.

Rebirth in a Magical World · C22
3 weeks ago
I agree it’s a design flaw of the ring, except if you consider that maybe the reason the ring is not retrievable could be because it goes back to the tower when lost by a family member.
I assumed the creator of the tower had it on him when he died too.
And any family member can get in the tower through the biting statue.
Like you lost the key? Suffer the peck. View More

Grey1902: Although I don't agree about the stones I'm a little confused on how the ring wasn't charmed or something I mean the guy was super paranoid right it's kind of a huge design flaw to make a hidden tower with a key that's so easy to steal

Rebirth in a Magical World · C22
3 weeks ago
As far as I am concerned, this is the most well written and interesting HP fan fict on Webnovel.
It leaves me craving for more.
Contrary to what the other guy said, the other character development is very good and I would pay stones for this story.
Keep up the good work. View More
Rebirth in a Magical World · C22
3 weeks ago
I agree that that’s what the chapter said, but we also saw that it wasn’t fixed rules and that haggling was permitted.
We can only assumed that Duan Juan was bargained for, probably in exchange of a lower grade student and some other cultivation ressources.
Poor him. View More

byaduria: In chapter 246, demon lord and duan jian shouldn't have the same master since only one master can choose a disciple(well, ling yun is an exception since she gave up on choosing the supposedly "most talented" person in exchange of choosing 2 people). Demon lord should be chosen by the hidden cloud sect but duan jian isn't

Tales of Demons and Gods · C254
1 month ago

gtfantasy: At the end of volume 2 Faceless author summarised the volume and I will put a brief translation here. The volume Faceless meant in three ways. First was the potion’s name, this was the easiest to guess. Second was the Klein’s status in the capital, using fake face, fake name, fake identity to meet with people, to solve problems, to get involved in different matters, he seemed busy all the time but still felt lonely when he returned to his house. Third indicated those people formed foundation of the country, in history book they have no name, no face, no past and no life only exists as numbers or as simple description. In this way aren’t they are faceless as well, the walk on of a show, the cannon fodders, who cares what they looks like. In this volume authors tried to portrait these faceless people, old Kohler, Liv family their hope, they hardship and their tragedy, to make them more human than numbers, although the stories seemed shatter, it followed this hidden theme. When some of these people die, more of them come, they are the footstone of the era but they are essential.
To consider all of these elements author discarded the more shocking ending to conclude the volume, using the worst era, the best era is good enough to express the volume name Faceless. Third volume name will be Traveller, main story line will be more clear than volume two. But when we think about the volume two Becklund there are still many stories to be told, for example royal family’s goal, 0-17, vampires, psychology alchemist, the stage is there for Audrey, Fors, Xio and Emlyn to show themselves. Klein will be back, and will be there for long.
Second volume’s plots seems very shattered but it still attractive, the main problem was the main plots was very compacted, incident after incident, Klein never got time to breath, he was always busy to solve problems, and lack of time to relax. It probably make some readers unable to relax and anxiety. Timeline was separated by Tarot meeting each week, so every week there must be beyonder events to keep the story entertaining, author tried to jump some less important meetings and make the timeline under control.
Of course Tarot meeting is an important element as well, author won’t forget the first meeting when Emlyn attend. Author also happy with the characters he built, because readers like them. Using 0-17 to close the fight to show that church is still powerful otherwise they won’t rule for long. Other than that there are more stories about it in the future.
At last after years of writing author is aiming to use simple, easy words to tell the stories, no needs to exaggerate and long description about something, leave spaces to readers, when at the right moment even the simple words can penetrate readers hearts and shock them. Even he is still not master the skill, he thinks he is on the correct track. And please anticipate volume three Traveller and it will be more fun and excitement.

Lord of the Mysteries · C482
1 month ago

Daoistarofa: What a great novel, im so happy to have a novel of this level translated, and at same time im so sad that good novels, like this one, are a rarity

Lord of the Mysteries · C482
1 month ago

Tichaosius: this is far beyond what you can expect for a webnovel.
definitely a masterpiece.
Hard to express my feelings after this chp, just like the end of first volume.

Lord of the Mysteries · C482
1 month ago

wellmet: Hands down this comment was the best way to end this volume. Hats off to you, sir.

Lord of the Mysteries · C482
1 month ago
It should be
-Just remember to let me borrow your notes.
And
-I’ll lend you my notes, as long as you return them View More

Mute: "Just remember to borrow me your notes"

"I'll borrow you my notes, as long as you return them"

Borrow isn't used like this, both instances he was say lend/loan

Scholar's Advanced Technological System · C82
1 month ago
Black god! Is he a traitor?? Or is he just everywhere? View More
MMORPG: The Elementalist · C530
1 month ago
Well said!
Of course we’re all brainwashed readers partial to Ves and the Vandals so this interpretation is kinda flawed, but what the hell... View More

Taranis: No you are not the only one. But what would you expect of a brainwashed + stubborn Character with no character development ?

The Mech Touch · C642
1 month ago

Ozwin: Klein we really have to talk about how your curiosity in combination to your genre awareness and accidental attention to details, while having saved your life a few times, ultimately place you in danger to begin with. Rather, they have actually killed you before. Curiosity killed the cat, and while satisfaction brought it back, it has nine lives to live and we aren’t terrible confident in how many more you have.

Unfortunately you won’t listen to me, so at least make a good show of it.

Lord of the Mysteries · C443
1 month ago

Lastear: The future spelling of steak is at stake

Rise of The Undead Legion · C272
2 months ago
I find it funny how in all these short novel, whenever food is ordered, the waiters always bring all the plates together, AT THE SAME TIME!
I don’t think the concept of the western meal sequence has been correctly understood... View More

Senelcar: Soupe a l'oignon ... Thoses nobles people would feel strange when they understand that it is supposed to be a poor people's food in France :D and that it cost approximatively 0.1$ per plate to make XD

Rise of The Undead Legion · C272
2 months ago
You forget the EMP wave View More

Zug: You're forgetting that the com they all have practicly doubles as a body cam that is almost always on. Everything that ves did has been recorded by the coms on the more than 1000 of them. Even though he saved the majority of the vandals the paper pushers will probably want to see him punished for the death of the mech pilot meat shield.

The Mech Touch · C605
2 months ago
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