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I have two points, 1. The system is forcing the MC to change character wise against his own will making him into a completely different person then who he is orginally. 2. The "System" should be an extension of the MC not the other way around. the punishment SHOULD not have been this and is the wrong way to go, it could have been something like a lower cap on in energy or disabling certain abilities, given a task to do in a certain amount of time, anything but this. It feels really forced and unpleasant to read. Will continue to read, but if it continues in this fashion I may give up on it unfortunately.

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