MrPhoenix - Profile

Hey man, great novel, u need to improve your writing quality, but is really better than most novels from here, so I'm not complaining to much there, the story is pretty good, I hope you can expand your world more so it's not complex, but isn't being build while you do the chapters, the system is excelent, it has many possibilitys and I hope there aren't much OP characters, so good luck!