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ZhiroKun: First

Lilim Heritage Online · C126
1 day ago

razorlazer: Teach your ways senpai

Lilim Heritage Online · C126
1 day ago

Ethlathini: mish and the girls are all found worthy
to wield the power of the fairy
and seek vengeance for the fallen so they never are forgotten

Lilim Heritage Online · C126
1 day ago
mish and the girls are all found worthy
to wield the power of the fairy
and seek vengeance for the fallen so they never are forgotten View More
Lilim Heritage Online · C126
1 day ago

ExodusGaming555: Yeah atleast 85% of it flowed oh so smoothly.

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago

Plaxa: Y

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago

TheMeownomaly: Good idea

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago

TheMeownomaly: That was a nice chapter anyways

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago

BBWulf: That should work until Author-san gets an editor, but mostly for proofreading. If the readers were offering up ideas on how to improve things, it could get out of hand fast.

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago

Mike0Eggs: Exp

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago

Mike0Eggs: Exp

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago

Babangida_Bello: True

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago

Brezer: Just get Grammarly

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
3 days ago
also edit to the title: The search for an Editor returns! View More

Ethlathini: hi I can edit up to 7 chaps on weekend and can help with storyline. some weekends may be less, depending on my schedule. I will reword sentences to flow, add to the story without being too invasive, spell check through Grammarly, and can communicate through discord. Don't expect perfection, but expect better then what you wrote

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
5 days ago
hi I can edit up to 7 chaps on weekend and can help with storyline. some weekends may be less, depending on my schedule. I will reword sentences to flow, add to the story without being too invasive, spell check through Grammarly, and can communicate through discord. Don't expect perfection, but expect better then what you wrote View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C51
5 days ago

Darkdelusion: The guy chose the wrong target as his rival.
He will either be broken into Alec's fanatic follower/fan or be faceslapped very hard

Curse the Mainframe! · C113
1 week ago

Ethlathini: Hey Rxel,
I feel like Alec needs a Loliish big bro figure who is an amazing chef, and appears to be more mature though we all know the truth. This Clause could fit the bill well, especially since arrays can be used for food a lot. He could specialize in fire support magic and have a personality to match (no pun intended)

Curse the Mainframe! · C113
1 week ago
Hey Rxel,
I feel like Alec needs a Loliish big bro figure who is an amazing chef, and appears to be more mature though we all know the truth. This Clause could fit the bill well, especially since arrays can be used for food a lot. He could specialize in fire support magic and have a personality to match (no pun intended) View More
Curse the Mainframe! · C113
1 week ago

Skully_: The cover is terrible but the writing is excellent.

Poem about the discord bot Mee6 with swearing plugin

MEE6 is a pussee who wont letme swear
But I wull farkun find a way see if I care
S.T.F.U. MEE6 I wull change my werds
and bypass censor bots its revenge of da nerds.

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
2 weeks ago
Also don’t let aseholes get you down View More
An Epic of Snow · C1
2 weeks ago

NightCloud: See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

Curse the Mainframe! · C107
2 weeks ago

PsyberRose: See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

Curse the Mainframe! · C107
2 weeks ago

Ethlathini: Don’t worry about this sect! It’s got an MC as the leader! It will be fine

Curse the Mainframe! · C107
2 weeks ago
Don’t worry about this sect! It’s got an MC as the leader! It will be fine View More

Darkdelusion: Main characters are sect destroying magnets.
I pity the sect

Curse the Mainframe! · C107
2 weeks ago
here is something to keep in mind, if you are truly new to light novels. They are only successful because they have a release rate. if the whole novel was out there, few would finish the novel. The cliffy creates readers If you want to write higher quality, look at royal road View More

RoRoRo: That's . . . really interesting. While I'm not inspired by any writer in particular I have certainly read many of their works, so it makes sense my style reflects a bit of it.

I agree about the diarie. While I originally saw it as a chance to give more information on topics I deemed important, it is a bit much. I'll take a look back and see what I can do so as not to ruin the immersion and enjoyment of the story.

As for the Harry Potter thing, don't worry. The set up from that series has no relation with what I'm doing. It'll definitely make sense later on in the novel.

Overall, thanks for your thoughts. You might notice things get a bit more fleshed out and detailed than usual for a webnovel. This is because I'm used to traditional literature and new to the pacing and storytelling of lighter novels. Your opinions have been very valuable and I hope you stay with me.

~RoRoRo

An Epic of Snow · C1
2 weeks ago
your writing seems like charels dickens, who got paid by the letter. you also seem like you are trying to write a complete world instead of a novel, like Tolkien. However, you don't need to explain yourself in by linking everything to the diarie, as it makes the information which is inconvenient seem forced. It also seems like you are trying do do something like the beginning of harry potter 1 with the child, dumbledore, and mogonegle, however what made that effective was the mystery.
but as a lowly reader I have no knowledge of the future, and therefore this is only food for thought View More
An Epic of Snow · C1
2 weeks ago
second B-) View More
An Epic of Snow · C1
2 weeks ago
well I guess you got luvky that a commenter decided to scroll down to recent uploads at the right time View More

RoRoRo: Wow. You're quick.

Just finished making my synopsis. I just wanted to say thanks and that if there is one thing I won't do, it's make a **** story.

I'll do my best and I'm sure it won't disappoint. Neither you, myself, or any of my readers.

~RoRoRo

An Epic of Snow · C0
2 weeks ago

RoRoRo: Wow. You're quick.

Just finished making my synopsis. I just wanted to say thanks and that if there is one thing I won't do, it's make a **** story.

I'll do my best and I'm sure it won't disappoint. Neither you, myself, or any of my readers.

~RoRoRo

An Epic of Snow · C0
2 weeks ago
here are some recommendations:
THE VESRYN PULSE & Transcending Limits . two free original novels of little success but great potential View More
Lilim Heritage Online · C111
2 weeks ago
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