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This story is stolen, the original author is NotAHero and he mainly posts on another site. He has said that this was not posted by him so it’s stolen. Please don’t read it here and look for the other post, also leave a review saying the same once you confirm what I am saying is true.

I was going to read this story after reading a review that it’s no harem and no devil peerage, since I thought the author would develop the world and have better character development/interactions. But I guess that’s not going to happen. Massive power creeps ruin gamer fic. Honestly I think creat instance dungeon should not be a skill, since it ruins most stories.

Well I am going to start reading it, if it’s no harem and no devil peerage. DxD has an amazing world to work with, but usually it gets over shadowed by harem’s, or focuses too much on the devils (like in canon). I have no problem with a harem story, but usually it trains the story. The author would not have time to flesh out the characters in the harem, and the characters that are not part of the harem almost never get character development. As for why I am not a big fan of devil peerage fanfic, is that people almost always shy away from the darker side of devils. They are not human, and should not be treated with human standards. To them power is everything, and those in power make it hard for others to reach their level. And peerages are just a collection of slaves. There would have been much better systems to implement the evil piece system if they just wanted to increase the population. And it would have been done in a way that best supports the devil society. Allow high class devils to own a peerage is another privilege for them, yet people don’t treat it with the gravity it is due. If I was a human with a sacred gear or another skill a devil would want and they offered me to turn me into a devil, and I wanted to, I would write a lengthy contract, detailing what I my duties as, what my restrictions are, and what are the things that I am not willing to do. Then I would ask for the price of my service. Since I will be agreeing to be a slave. Of course the price would not be needed if the devil gives me more concessions in the contract. Sadly most fanfic treat a devil’s peerage as a *** slave harem.

Your answer is not clear. Though I hope it is not a harem story, as those tend to have shallow character development.

Advice is purely that. Advice. It’s up to the author what they decide to do with that advice. If I like it I read and if I don’t I say thank you for the ride and stop reading. Feed back is an important part of improving. It doesn’t mean you need to follow everything or even anything people say.