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Drak has always seen everyone around him as inferior. He's smarter, faster, stronger and better looking than most people. At some point he decided that he might as well take over the world. His chance finally came when he grew wings one night when a comet passed by Earth. Will his new inhuman abilities, combined with his scientific genius, allow him to achieve his prefect world domination? Or will he fail like so many others have before him?
Marlbrough: For me it something more like Lovecraft.Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS) · C222
mefisto666: yes, nightmares insured for at least a weekExtrasensory Perception System (EsPerS) · C222
Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS) · C222
Endless_Starlight: Thanks for that, I was actually doubting whether or not I'm going the right direction on how I'm creating Haruhiro. This helped me gain a bit of confidenceThe Insatiable · C42
The Insatiable · C42
Earthshaker34: "Huh, does that mean if I cancel all the attribute of my poison, then in the eye of other it will become water?" doesn't that mean that he can turn it on when others ingest the water into their own systems?White Snake · C41
SnoozySloth: Nah, it was all good feedback and info =)Steampunk Apocalypse! · C181
Aycf2411: Yo sinceramente me parecía que ibas realmente bien, pero es tu historia ,puedes hacer lo que quieras con ella. por cierto gracias por los capítulos, estuvieron bastantes buenos, lastima que fueron pocosI'll Start with World Domination · C4
trem: The concept is soooo good , hope your future you continue this story!!I'll Start with World Domination · C4
SnoozySloth: Yeah, I think we share some similar thoughts on Vol3. It's interesting since even when I plan things, the story just kind of goes its own way, haha.
I think vol4 will take us back towards a vol2 Ed personality and growth-rate.Steampunk Apocalypse! · C181
Steampunk Apocalypse! · C181
ThrustThunder: "This was extremely difficult for a princess who was merely seventeen years old."
This is not how you introduce a character in order to prop up their ability. You cant just *Say* that a 17 year old, who had been pampered their entire lives, could just pick up a sword and be a perfect leader of an entire Army. you have to show it by actually ~Showing It~.
"Such elite knights had suffered losses amounting to almost sixty percent of their number"
This in not how you show it, it is just more telling.
"The church had gotten rid of all the aristocrats who had been conferred their titles based on their accumulation of war achievements."
So all they have left are incompetent, greedy Leeches who were more then happy to sell their loyalty for Thirty pieces of silver.
How the Hell do Evil Organizations win with this kind of backing? When you surround yourself with unloyal people your foundations are very shaky. I guess Church Brainwashing ex Machina will keep the Plot going forward, yet again.
"He was afraid that Old Wilson would definitely offer them a helping hand."
In D&D this is when you call the DM out for so obviously forcing the Plot to happen, and that they should try to be more subtle about it.A Wizard's Secret · C57
SoothSayre711: I'm gonna be real here... These evolutions wouldn't provide any power. Like, at all. If they did, he would need fuel of some kind, like a crap ton of food or something. Energy is seemingly coming from nowhere, and I honestly wouldn't be surprised if even the Josagn don't understand it. Basically, standard precursor super race sci-fi trope. For what I want to see, I want a superior human race to be created by using the PED. Smarter, stronger, healthier, immortal (which is way easier than stories make it seem), and maybe some super powers like telepathy and telekinesis. Honestly, wouldn't even be as crazy as the PED. Also, with a strong enough computer, one would be able to just create genetic code. Like, create life that didn't exist before, bring about traits that hasn't appeared before or were thought to be lost (which, conveniently, can lead into super powers). Anyway, sorry for the text wall. I get a bit rambly when I'm tired.Evolutionary Prison · C52
Arigami: Then write a SciFi bookEvolutionary Prison · C52
Evolutionary Prison · C52
JORM: Oh F*CK YOU!!! this is as predictable as it can get what the flying f*ck is happening there is something like a page of templates for writers or what because if it’s like that then the next chapter is going to be more or less like this
Royal knight #1: princess there are a great quantity of knights ahead of us at least more that thousand
Princess:[are they from the church?] Prepare for battle and send a knight to inquire who they are
Royal knight #2: [there is someone ahead] hey you who you lot are and why are you blocking the pass
Merlin: I am the son of baron old Wilson
And blah blah blah the they become a much larger and powerful group then the princess gets to know that Merlin is a wizard and tell him about the ring and she promises that If he can get revenge by her then she is going to be his wife and give him the ring and Merlin will get a second wife and a possible future kingdom then he gets to the dark moon kingdom and goes to the academy of magic and enters using the ring
If all of this happens then I am going to get f*cking disappointed by the creativity of the authorA Wizard's Secret · C56
ThrustThunder: "Along with the growth of Merlin's Mind Power, he had gradually mastered the control of Fireball."
Take a shot JORM!
"Looking at this fireball, Tirath's face turned pale and stared at Merlin in fear."
Karma's a B*tch, aint it Tirath? Just last chapter you held other peoples lives in your hands while you demanded answers from them exactly like this! How's it feel to be on the other end?
"Tirath's blood-stained face also flashed a gruesome smile."
Was this a typo and supposed to be Prat? Because I don't think Tirath would be looking forward to whats about to happen to him unless the Author is going to teach Merlin another lesson about what happens when you don't immediately dispose of your enemies.A Wizard's Secret · C46
Evolutionary Prison · C51
SnoozySloth: Fun Fact: Espers in ancient times used to just relieve themselves wherever they stood instead of using a bathroom. Then they cleaned up the evidence with whichever elemental power they controlled! I guess you could say... it was lit!
Note: The above is not canon and is a bad joke poking fun at Harry Potter. For anyone who doesn't know, Rowling confirmed that before the 18th century, wizards relieved themselves wherever they stood and vanished the evidence.Steampunk Apocalypse! · C179
SoothSayre711: Is it just me, or did the way the PED speaks change? If so, I like the implications.Evolutionary Prison · C50
Evolutionary Prison · C50
Dminnie: 25 days ago. Love to read it will you be back??Ruler Of The Underworld · C66
Arigami: Please drop an F for the great author we lost last weekRuler Of The Underworld · C66
Evolutionary Prison · C44
White Snake · C37
firestorm5: Now he can go back to that poison door and hopefully get something good I'm surprised he just killed the ant queen thoWhite Snake · C34
FaLaoWang: BooooooWorld Domination System · C29
SnoozySloth: Thanks for the balloon Sooth!Steampunk Apocalypse! · C1
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