I_love_magic

1yr

Commented

Hey Author, i'm just at the start of the story... and I'm wondering. Will there be Character Growth to a positive direction? Or something? Because what i have seen so far is not really to my liking, personality wise and about the MC. Thanks for the answers in advance!

'It also doesn't hurt that fact that I could manipulate their emotions through his recently created technique, but that would only be there to reinforce absolute loyalty and make sure they would follow my law and order.'

Star Wars: Skywalker

Movies · Link_Id

I_love_magic

1yr

Commented

Is this going to turn into a non-con, mind rapery, slave fest? Please NO?!

'Interesting nonetheless, as this tells me I do not have to worry about not being able to enter the minds of others. It would still be a challenge to breach the minds on force-sensitive individuals and would be much harder if they learn my Force technique based off of reading another's memories.'

Star Wars: Skywalker

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I_love_magic

1yr

Commented

I really hope this ability will have immense restrictions.... for example, security system strength should matter, along with how hardy the hardware is. This could easily become hella OP, and if not considered and thought out carefully, could even RUIN the story. At least that is what i think. I will see i guess...

In fact the ship itself could be controlled.

Star Wars: Skywalker

Movies · Link_Id

I_love_magic

2yr

Replied to PhantomMedjay

He was curious about where this Kage guy came from... i think... whether he was just summoned by the system or if has a background in the real world.

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Fantasy · PhantomMedjay

I_love_magic

2yr

Commented

"Pia" is a slang for drink/shot/alcohol in my country/language lol... so he is purchasing shit with shots... cool haha.

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Fantasy · PhantomMedjay

I_love_magic

2yr

Replied to THE_WORDSMITH

In one of the first few chapters when he was introduced... i think... it was like that as the other guy said. The Jenkins guy is supposed to be only 3 stars, but close to 4, and definitely not 5.

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Ace Of Terrans

Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH

I_love_magic

2yr

Commented

This is out of the books of some Demon, or a "god" of Greek mythology.

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Fantasy · PhantomMedjay

I_love_magic

2yr

Commented

Why the hell did she not just wait another day? The death from the planet exploding would have been relatively swift and painless... and they could have been together for the last day and die in each others arms. That would have been a SO MUCH BETTER FATE. Not this lol.... this is just stupid and sad.

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Fantasy · PhantomMedjay

I_love_magic

2yr

Commented

Two days more and she could have joined him.... now, she traumatized her own daughter instead... "good" job!

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Fantasy · PhantomMedjay

I_love_magic

2yr

Replied to MoshuiDaoist

Look at the other comments i wrote and judge after that... maybe it is you that should look for more knowledge, about what others really mean, and not just answer to a "straw man" you built out of my first comment. Have a Happy New Year!

Berengar shuddered as he heard the sentence; from what he knew of Medieval medicine, he was more likely to be harmed by the treatment than cured from what ailed him. However, his throat was dreadfully dry, and he found himself unable to stop his little sister as she fled the scene. Leaving Berengar alone with nothing but his thoughts and an ever-increasing headache...

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

I_love_magic

2yr

Replied to Eric_Fanguy

Thanks! I like being labelled retarded for pointing out the fact that Medieval Physicians in the 15th century were somewhat competent, compared to the past and their counterparts in many other places, and that they were not just quacks that killed everyone they touched. It was the best they had back then. You can't even imagine how many lives such a "quack" saved, because while their knowledge was incomplete by modern standards it was still a hundred times better than having no chance at all. I was saying exactly this, that for the time even such "shallow" knowledge might have been the deciding factor over life or death, and we should not look down on them too much for that. They tried their best. Everyone is acting like they were maliciously murdering everyone with stupid shit, like they had the internet and a global community of doctors to commune with for every case but did not use it or listen, like they deliberately didn't use better cures and techniques. NO, they simply did not know better, but they tried. THEY are the forefathers of OUR MODERN TIMES, it is THEM that eventually lead us to modern medicine and everyone is only looking at them with scorn and judgment. It is shameful!

Berengar shuddered as he heard the sentence; from what he knew of Medieval medicine, he was more likely to be harmed by the treatment than cured from what ailed him. However, his throat was dreadfully dry, and he found himself unable to stop his little sister as she fled the scene. Leaving Berengar alone with nothing but his thoughts and an ever-increasing headache...

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

I_love_magic

2yr

Commented

Self preservation? Arguably the feeling of fear was and is one of the most important to us humans as it let/lets us survive for hundreds of years. Most of us at least lol. Not super dumb people apparently... and do you know why? Because they are too dumb to see danger as it is, as dangerous, and a healthy amount of fear is always necessary to face the unknown and other adversaries or you will walk into it without any preparation or thinking.

Huh? As long as I kept tight and made sure that I didn't slip out, guess that there was nothing to fear from heights. Wow, being able to think clearly in such situations was amazing. It made all fears sound irrational, after all, what was the use of being afraid?

Avatar: Awakened Gamer

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

I_love_magic

2yr

Replied to Apocalypse_

You mean, the king of cold weapons... that is quite an important distinction lol.

Currently, the only skill I was going to concentrate on leveling up would be <Spear Mastery> because it was the best combat skill available to me that offered both long-range, short-range, and damage attacks. One can just throw a spear and it will become long-range. Also, they are easy to make.

Avatar: Awakened Gamer

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

I_love_magic

2yr

Commented

Bro, if there are fireworks then they have gunpowder, so make a gun for God's sake... later on of course when he has the resources, but still. I had enough about Modern inserts completely forgetting abut modern technology the moment they get inserted into a lover tech setting.

At the end of it, I got some spears, a couple of swords, and two bows. That behaviour lasted till I remembered that I have something called <Inventory>... and took every damn thing in here. Fireworks? Weapons? Fishing equipment? Boats? Maps? Armour? Yep, I took every single thing that I got my hands on.

Avatar: Awakened Gamer

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

I_love_magic

2yr

Commented

Shouldn't he miss his own mother, that was left behind on Earth? Or other family? He should not be indifferent, lol, he should at least feel something about being snatched away from home and placed in an uncivilized and quite backwards place like the Avatar world. Gamer mind should not turn off emotions, just help him manage them, and stop them from overwhelming him.

Sokka frowned at that, truthfully he didn't mean to hurt his sister with words so much. He didn't have Sokka's memories so to him any mention of his mother will get the same emotional response as if you told him that a woman on the other side of the world died… complete indifference.