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Redfar

1 months ago

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6. Why are you such a cutie pie? (Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar

1 months ago

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I mean I would not say 'No' to more longer since I like the story :3 But only if you can do it, you should not get tired of making chapters if you want to make it[img=recommend] longer.

5. Are the chapter sizes to your liking? (Y/N)

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar

1 months ago

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YES, I like how it goes, you build surely nicely this relationship between them it help me to get more involved into the story. I mean that it's seems more realistic.

4. Is the pace enjoyable for you? (Y/N)

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar

1 months ago

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Current pace seems nice to me but If you think it gonna too slow or too fast you can adjust as you wish I mean it's your story.

3. The story to move away from canon faster, or slowly deviate? (Y/N/Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar

1 months ago

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Yes, I mean it can allowed you to have more "space" to do what you want with that story and it can help to not finish this story too fast ;)

2. Have another franchise in the novel, and if so, what would you choose? (Y/N/Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar

1 months ago

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No, I think story is good with one female lead, it would be "too much" to add one more!

1. To see the MC have an additional partner later in the novel? (Y/N/Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar

1 months ago

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If you can, this one + plan 3. It don't mind me to give you my stone since story seems good for now.

Plan 1: Two chapters every day. A simple yet efficient plan, I think. People love having more to read, and adding an extra chapter would double the amount they normally read.

Naruto: Faint Smile.

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Redfar

4 months ago

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Pretty cool, I can clearly imagine him running through a battlefield and killin' monsters & co at high speed.

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