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2018-04-03 Joined United States

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It has potential but here are too many things that annoys me like hell. 1- The "¿System?": The System is just a voice the serves to put comments in certain moments to put a little of humour or act like as the MC psychologo. So where does MC strenght come from? From a "pact" witha god he made in chapter 5 or 6, a with that he have another voice in his head. And from hes overpowered bloodlines So the system has some information about the game [characters], or weakness of the creatures or how to grow strong? No, literally nothing. So how much did the system aport? Well, it gave the MC a basic sword at the start, and then the MC buys a Mask and thats ALL. At the start looked like it would be a "Dat sim" System, who gives choices about the heroines and "points of affection" but that function seems to have dissapear. And in a moment the system came with a new "great function" but in next chapter is forgotten. 2. The "original" villain, wich MC takes his body: He is a lustful person and everybody hates him but when he was a kid he was the biggest genius, all de heroines loved him and was a kind a handsome boy. So when the MC show his talent is like: "oh, he is back at what he was". What a bullshit. 3- There are too many plotholes 4- He loved a single women in his 1st life (and she died). When he transmigrates obviusly he miss her, and is a logic thing. And he has the original body memory (16 years old). Why Im saying this? Suddenly when the MC is thinking about love he is "oh a didnt have luck.. the only GIRLS I have loved..." And starts naming girls from the original body chilhood body when he had 7 years old. Come on men, you loved deeply, 3 girls, and when you had 7 years?
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