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BurntCabbage: What pathway is the Cliffhanging Evil God? Is it Marauder for stealing the crucial last few words straight out of the chapter or Hunter as He provokes, inflames, and conspires to keep the readers hooked through this worn-out writing tactic?Lord of the Mysteries · C751
burntpotato: So Klein hired both Teacher and Student for protection.
Miss Bodyguard= 1K pounds
Miss Messenger= 10K gold coinsLord of the Mysteries · C751
tekite: ??????? Dude wtf? He was an actor for over 20 years in his past life and he hadnt seen anyone pretty? Wtf? Dude stop with this cliche chinese novel ****, its ruining the story. Like the most peerless and exquisite beauty that pops up every 50 chapters in those novels, this will ruin the story if you kept doing this. The MC was almost 40 if I am right, and he is surprised as a veteran actor at some meat and skin? What hasnt he seen throughout his career lol, even if he wasnt that famous or good, he was still an actor.Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C17
476667: Klein : why are you running, why are you running!Lord of the Mysteries · C673
Slesk: He does have a way with words, I guess is the Fool's charm he sometimes stumbles at the perfect place.Lord of the Mysteries · C669
Randompasserby: Ooohh that's gotta be some spicy, sweet and sour drama happening between Cattleya and Bernadette for her to be banished from her side and actually joined her enemies?
My wishful thinking Yuri senses are tingling ufufu 😏Lord of the Mysteries · C669
BurntCabbage: With a name like Queen Mystic, she might be able to peer into and unravel a few mysterious secrets surrounding the crazy hunter Gehrman Sparrow but she can't out-troll The Fool. He'll always have the last laugh.Lord of the Mysteries · C669
Alessan: Such sweet sweet revenge. Klein is truly a god of posturing.Lord of the Mysteries · C669
Ozwin: “Bernadette.” Beautiful one up Klein, masterfully done. *golf claps*Lord of the Mysteries · C669
Alessan: Black Emperor sounds so much worse than Dark Emperor. Not sure what the reason for the switch was but if possible it would be better to go back and have Black refer to whatever appears in the future.Lord of the Mysteries · C663
Bellmount: Modern Chinese has more than 3000 frequently-used single symbols, and each one has many different meanings when combing with others to form a word. Therefore, Klein just need to add some subtle changes to his translation in order to make the diary impossible to decipher.Lord of the Mysteries · C663
Randompasserby: Ahhh a clever Main Character who's not too full of himself thinking he's the only one in the world with brains AND characters that did not disappoint that expectation.
This novel should be put on the goddamn endangered species list dammit 👍👍👍Lord of the Mysteries · C663
UnrivaledSolicitor: Arrodes is quickly becoming my favorite character. I can’t wait for the day Arrodes meets the Tarot Club. Arrodes finna be asskissing Klein till he has a permanent lip-print on his derrière. Then turn around and ask Emlyn, “Which doll(s) do you fornicate with?” Huehuehue i kant w8Lord of the Mysteries · C608
Aby55: Lmao Klein is a true role player/murderhobo.
Klein: I draw my gun and fire.
DM: Are you sure? You're in the middle of a crowded bar, you have no backup, and there's an unknown amount of enemies.
Klein: Yeah ok I'll make an illusion of firing my gun. I don't want to hit innocents.
DM: Um, are you sure?
Klein: Yes, it's what my character would do.Lord of the Mysteries · C598
Randompasserby: The hell? You have this sheltered ass, obnoxious vampire who prefer playing with dolls than using that money and time to strengthen himself DESPITE his delusions of grandeur as the savior of his race and you want her to face tragedy? 🤔
By the by, Audrey have come face for face with mortal danger TWICE already. First spotting Qilangos and second as Klein's messenger on the case of Death Smog. Both times she performed admirably and matured quite considerably. That she still maintains her youthful cheerfulness and sincerity is a net positive for me.Lord of the Mysteries · C594
GoodWithAToaster: Maybe Klein can give the Sun God another call through divination and try to purify the eyeball through the tiny instant of exposure before he has to hang up :) nah....that would be too “death-seeking” for Klein’s cautious mind....Lord of the Mysteries · C593
Alya_Melancholia: You forgot the killed a sea god and stole his believers part 😂Lord of the Mysteries · C591
GoodWithAToaster: Klein just figured out how to instant message a sequence 1 beyonder lolLord of the Mysteries · C591
PotatOS: Klein : "I've found your teacher! He's being held by the authorities! I've asked the Snake of Mercury (who everyone is currently searching for) what to do about this and 'He' told me to hand this matter to you. So now you handle it! Your boss's boss's boss believes in you! Gambatte! "Lord of the Mysteries · C591
Retsura: Klein: i need to be more than careful when dealing with pirate admiral.
Also klein: lets call this snake of mercury, will auceptinLord of the Mysteries · C590
Randompasserby: So Arrodes is basically just a male alpaca, asskissing version of Siri to Klein? Dammit so convenient lol
Also those poor, poor, Machinery Hivemind team stuck as Arrodes' handlers 😅😂🤣Lord of the Mysteries · C590
Downery: This is coming from someone who's entire family speaks broken English. Barely able to read because I have to constantly pause and mentally rearrange, add, subtract and replace words to make the story understandable.Holy Akashic Conqueror
Downery: Already dropped but other potential readers deserve to have an honest review, that's what a review is, you experience the product then let others know what your experience was like.
Why is there always some idiot that says "drop it then". A review system is there for both good and bad reviews depending on what they thought of the product not just mindless praises.Holy Akashic Conqueror
Wallabalooza: The writer has a lot of issues and, honestly, doesn't feel ready to write stories in English yet. There are a -lot- of grammar issues, and massive perspective problems in every single chapter.
As for the story itself.. the self-insert is a fairly successful novel writer (yeaaahhhh.. no) who acts pretty unnaturally given his reincarnated situation; the reincarnated part of his character seems mostly glossed over and forgotten. He doesn't use it for anything, and the relationship with his sister is exactly the same as in canon, even though there is an older, completely different person in the body of this character.
In fact, all of the characters feel extremely unnatural as a whole. People who should have no concept of technology or anime or anything just pick up on it without explanation and act like it's the most normal thing in the world. Characters' thought processes are unbelievable at best.
Very clearly written in one sitting, putting thoughts into words and then isn't properly edited, and it makes it feel incoherent and is difficult to read.
It's often written like the writer assumes we know what he's thinking and why he's thinking it, and jumps two or three steps in the buildup and explanation, only to land on something that feels completely out of place as a result.
An example would be the different characters sending information over the phone. How? It's never explained. First off, how are these technologically stupid people just sending "magic" and "swordsplay" over a phone? How is he receiving it? It's never even explored or explained a little bit, but just taken completely for granted and passed over. It's absolutely ridiculous.
Then there's the ghosts. He brings them cakes, but when the girl tries to hug them, she passes through them? Are they solid or not? The logic of the story's world is completely screwed. Not to mention that the kids weren't actually used for anything at all other than getting every character to say "G-g-g-ghost!" like they're Scooby Doo and forcing an interaction with that one girl. Even the set up emotional reunion was completely ruined by them just disappearing the second they saw her, and nothing further was explored about it.
Not to mention how the character learns "swordplay" by.. getting a manual about it(? somehow it changes to paper from his phone?) and then swinging his sword the same way 1000 times, like that is supposed to teach him anything. When you know nothing about the sword, you have a thousand things to learn before you even start swinging that thing around. Your posture, movement, grip, etc. etc. You don't just go and start swinging a sword and become a swordsman, and even then, swinging just one way isn't going to make you any better at anything; it's so silly.
The protagonist starts talking about opening up a restaurant out of absolutely nowhere. Like, it wasn't built up in any way, and the writer clearly just wanted to do it for whatever reason, even if it made no sense in-universe. It was justified because the character "knew a guy with a restaurant" and that he would get recipes sent over. Like that solves more than one or two out of a thousand problems with opening up a restaurant, and prepares him for that chaos in any way whatsoever
These are a few examples, but already this soon in the story there are even more I could pull from, and I'm positive it will continue throughout the whole thing.
Basically, it feels like whoever writes this doesn't live in the real world. Their logic is completely off in so many ways. It really feels like the writer has gotten too deeply integrated in the universe of anime himself and has forgotten how actual people think, act and speak, and it really shows in the writing. Overall, it just comes off as disconnected and childish.
I don't know why this story is rated 4.6. Either the negative reviews are deleted or you guys just have insanely low standards. 2.4 was already generous for me.
For the writer: Work harder on your basics. Spend some time figuring out your English grammar and read some well-written, published stories to try and get a better feel for how to actually present a decent story. Your ideas aren't terrible, but your execution is very lacking; especially for someone clearly wanting to make money off of this. It takes a lot of hard work to get good at something, and writing is no different.
Good luck.Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group
Hasu_Yodd: The worst characters in this novel is not a villain like riser but the main character he fucks up entire plot line then for stability of an non existent plot he doesn't let kuroka meet his sister kiba his friends and forces akeno his GF to be slave of rias.
Despite of being an OP character his is a sissy who always hides.
The harem is too forcefull and author clearly lack and creative brain power.Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic
TheHiddenSword: The writing quality is horrible, nothing else to say about this.
The story development .... there isn't one, there's no point in this novel.
The characters are horrible, the already made characters don't follow the original work, and are worst. The MC is simply trash, to throw in the toilet, he is dumb, scared of everything, uninteresting and so on .... As the author likes to justify, he isn't cunning or manipulative, you clearly don't know how to write these traits, or write at all. He is stupid, the other characters are simply put on such a low level that he seems intelligent. But even that doesn't work due to poor writing.
The story has no purpose, and even fails at being a wish-fulfillment story. There is no conflict, no comedy, no interesting point.
The world background isn't yours to begin with, and isn't exploited at all to begin with. Even in the original work nothing was exploited in that aspect so this novel follow the trend I guess.Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic
CrimsonMoon: So this is what it feels like to have a yandere in your shadow...My House of Horrors · C400
MisMe: Thank you Chen Ge. For making us think that being single is a good thing as well.😅My House of Horrors · C400
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