I have started reading light novels recently I usually Read Manga and watch animes but after starting to read light novels I fell deeply in love with them because they are more detailed ^•^
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Balor: Well the greedy pigs removed my remaining spirit coins saying that they expired. So even with already purchased privilege I can't read chapters unless I'm willing to spend more money.Profane Prince of Domination · C526
Soawn: Water. Water. One water.
20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering.
Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions.
The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel.
And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for?
From the pros, MC. Nice world.
But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.Abyss Domination
PettyOfficer: I wrote this with no sleep in the morning while super hungry, so I’m sorry that the review is wrong at a few details, like how the fatty shot a warning instead of killing someone. However, the core of my criticism still stands.
I told you the main reason for my super low score was the spam of 5 stars from 2-3 people. Your fiction’s rating is highly misleading. It’s not perfect. It’s full of clichés. That means it is decent, but it isn’t exceptional.
My complaints were all summed up in too many clichés, too much emphasis on “plans,” too many useless extras that are *sspulls for their survival, and too many POV shifts.
When you have a narrative, readers like consistency. Readers like being able to see progression. Your characters seem like cardboard cutouts taken from mangas or heroes in light novels. They are customized with your personal touch, but they are still cardboard cutouts.
Now, for your explanation? It’s the modern world.
How can cell service be cut off so easily? Also, how can’t officials issue an emergency warning? I’m pretty sure the Philippines has their own methods to declare a national emergency. How hard is it to send out a message? Better yet, broadcast on radio and over speakers?
Then there’s the guards getting killed. I call horse s*** on your logic. There are swarms of screaming and panicking civilians. Why do they target the far away noise instead of the nearby roar of the people? Zombies are supposed to be killing those defenseless people, but somehow they bypass all of the crowd? The guards can’t kill the zombies?
You already said fast zombies feel pain and can die. How are the zombies bum rushing them so easily? With the number of people, the zombies are not only congested by civilians, but by their own numbers. You add in the zombies that fall down when shot. It’s impossible for the guards to die so easily.
Now the shooting skill. The MC holds a shotgun one-handed and hasn’t failed to hit a target with each shot from what I know. You can’t miss a shot up close, okay, but not only that, he’s not hurt by the bucking of the gun. He’s rapidly firing it. Not only that, he handles it easily with his Otaku knowledge instead of actual knowledge of handling a gun. It’s a huge stretch for me at this point.
Then there’s how he gets the gun. Like most encounters he has, it’s by pure luck. How lucky is he for everything to go his way?
I don’t care if you try to smooth out the side characters later on. Your introduction of them was outrageous. Egregious to a jaw-dropping fault. You wonder why no one likes it further from the intro because they hate this stale sort of coincidences. The only ones left are people who can swallow this mess.
Their survival was again due to luck. The rescue scenario was cliché. You even got the “woman holds everyone back” cliché, but did it through a one-dimensional throwaway character.
The daughter surviving? Bullsh*t! You’re telling me that a mom carrying a child of about 30-50 lbs ran away from zombies, but it was the men who couldn’t outrun zombies? Again, it’s the contrivances of plot armor. You use too much luck to force their characters in.
Then the mom is carried by the unnamed employee. This again is where I’m angry since you can flesh out all the women, but failed to give a paragraph for the man. At least give him a name.
Anyway, Paula carries the kid. This 30-50 lbs kid. She manages to outrun the zombies with this burden? What is she, superhuman? She already ran away from zombies. Where’s her fatigue?
Then you have the gall to say the mom carries the kid? With a sprained foot? It takes at least a few days to treat. She should be exhausted. She should be in pain. She shouldn’t be able to muscle on through.
I doubt if you read anything about what a sprain does to a person.
Now the gangsters. Oh God the gangster scene. You told us he knew they had a gun. He could predict the Boss had a gun. What doMutagen
Arun_Prasath_X: There are 15chapters in previlage but there is NO chapters for the rest of us UNLESS U SPENT MORE SS!! WTF!!Rise of The Undead Legion · C383
Stardust_Breaker: He did go in the future and the result... You can look at it.
Your question is already answered in the latter chapters of the novel.
There's too much for him to risk by meeting an higher level existence.Divine Emperor of Death · C160
DaoDxD: So, the system isn't going to back him up this time? Damn system! Always saying that the system is the Host's greatest backing & now this is how it's going to back him up?!Gourmet of Another World · C43
Indulgence: What a disappointment. This novel lost something important here. The girl tried to kill a well behaved costumer, disregarded him and even attacked white, not only he didn't punish her as per usual, he even feel guilty about it; eve if he don't have the strength to confront her grandfather now, he should have the intention blacklist her as soon as possible. But i bet she will benefit great of all of this in the end.Gourmet of Another World · C43
Carter: f***k the rules, and there is no more blacklist, this is a biased hypocrite systemGourmet of Another World · C43
Divine Emperor of Death · C160
Maxime: (This is an entirely personal review)
Honestly, novels like this make me puke.
The beginning was too vague, don't know if it was intentional or not, but it confuses me. There was just an information bomb, I killed my mortal enemy, yes! Oh look! A Transmigration stone out of nowhere, let me use it because I want to go to another world!
I'd love to know why he did it, at least explain that, or just don't use it at all. It just makes the story look bland, it's very boring to read. I guess people read it because it contains cultivation elements, but the prologue is just a mess.
And then... Parents.
What the absolute hell.
The author just glosses over the fact how he somehow got intimate with them. Playing for less than two weeks with a random woman could make you love her like it's the only you can do. I get that he didn't have a mother figure in his previous life, but seriously.
I mean, I really don't get the mindset of the MC.
He is supposed to be mentally old? Why does he act like a fucking 7 year old brat? He cries about ten times in just two chapters about how sorry he is for his mother that he knows for how long, two weeks? He loves her so dearly, but that kid is a mentally older than his mother, and yet....
Nevermind, it just makes no sense.
Either the author doesn't know how human emotions work, or the MC is just mentally retarted. No wait, the MC definitely is mentally retarted,
Everything that I have read so far, comes way too abruptly, without any explanation. This story misses some serious details, and common sense. This is a cultivation novel, they usually are ****ty in terms of background, but this one is beyond that.
I guess the stability of updates is amazing, a chapter a day is top notch. Good job.
Character development is decent..... I guess? He advances in cultivation and the like. The rest is just trash though, no information at all.
The world he is in, no clue on what the hell it is supposed to be. It could have been explained in later chapters, don't feel like reading it though, it should have been explained earlier on.
Basically, this novel is somewhat good, for people who want to see some typical, but worse cultivation aspects.
This novel isn't for me, and for anyone else who actually wants to read a decent story.Divine Emperor of Death
Zeca: I hate that one of the women of mc melt away, and for him to recover, it takes several chapters, this novel is no longer for me, good luck for those who readDivine Emperor of Death · C120
Ascend: What the **** is wrong with his personality.cant he have fucking back bone.he needs to get his priority right .he is so dumb he is glaring at his mom for testing her , what a absurd situationDivine Emperor of Death · C120
Maddox9: For someone thats thinking of killing emperors thats friends with his father doesnt want to kill a girl that attempted to kill him and could possibly kill his entire family the same way she killed thousands of people the same day. Man am really getting pissed of by this mc and his stupid ideology. Its almost as if his little sister father and mother are no longer important to himDivine Emperor of Death · C120
Devil_Paragon: No, I'm not shameless. It is only shameless if it is not true and I dare say that if you know what you came for, my novel will provide you with entertainment and delightful surprises. Thus, I give myself five stars.
(But really I'm just another shameless author giving himself five stars to boost his overall rating *yikes*)Profane Prince of Domination
Daoistunderlord: Annoying system/guide, idiotic mc, forced plot armour, and missions that cant be refused or death no freedom he should've just died at beginning and stayed dead would've saved you the trouble of having to read this below average novelEndless Journey: Infinite Realms
SamStrike: Good, but the MC sucks.
Typical good MC that want to save people even if he may die (hero-complex).
Can't even kill people just because they had a bad past or were influeced by others.
Dont even want to sacrifice other people for himself, Im starting to get annoyed to all this 'good' annoying MC that don't even have a little of prideEndless Journey: Infinite Realms
Endless Journey: Infinite Realms · C18
Imrael: There is a plot hole as big as someone's head in here why does he give a s*** about the world he came from since he has the ability to travel worlds he can stay away from that guy and not be detected while growing stronger it's not like that being could locate him and chase after him if he goes to another worldCarefree Path of Dreams · C725
Carefree Path of Dreams · C725
Imrael: So instead of cashing in the favor of the dream realm by giving it this Earth he is trying to prevent it and lose benefits (the author is starting to lose sight of the MC)Carefree Path of Dreams · C464
Carefree Path of Dreams · C464
Imrael: Chinese this Chinese that why do you have to bring your propaganda to the f****** noval I'm here to be entertained by a good novel let's read your b******* propaganda about your country I believe there are sites to do prefer genda go to one of them don't ruin the f****** story much more than you already did with your stupid ass explanations compared to the warlock of the Magus world this this story is c*** out of a donkey's a** almost made me suspect that someone else wrote this one (if you going to say don't breathe if you don't like it I will tell you to shove all what you're thinking about up your A** and shut it I am not interested in your opinion)Carefree Path of Dreams · C442
Carefree Path of Dreams · C442
Imrael: Whoever wrote this part of the novel got too much propaganda shoved up his ass and this is not the only chapterCarefree Path of Dreams · C440
Carefree Path of Dreams · C440
Hide: Man. It’s annoying reading “China is #1 in everything! West is corrupt!” NarrativeCarefree Path of Dreams · C420
Arkai: Well, China actually has strange laws to manage the reincarnation of Buddha.
Article 2: Reincarnating living Buddhas should respect and protect the principles of the unification of the state, protecting the unity of the minorities, protecting religious concord and social harmony, and protecting the normal order of Tibetan Buddhism.
Article 4: Applicants to be reincarnating living Buddhas who have any of the following conditions may not be reincarnated:
(2) Those in city-level people's governments and above with delineated districts, which ordered no reincarnations to be permitted.
This law basically says: if China suspects a Tibetan Buddha will disagree with China’s rule over Tibet in his after life, then reincarnation will not be authorizedCarefree Path of Dreams · C411
Imrael: Why do you have to bring all the crap of the countries from The real world in to the novel seriously I hate it when author's do thisCarefree Path of Dreams · C406
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