JooH

7d

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I have a question, was his body altered from his original body to toji's or was the body created from scratch? I don't know if you know what I mean, I ask because if it's the former in a sense the chemistry in his brain as well as toji's memory or instincts are there that's why he doesn't feel hesitation or am I thinking too much haha.

The girl began crying, hoping for The Flash, the hero of Central City, to come to her aid. However, Victor jumped out from the shadows with a cold look on his face. Although he had not been a trained killer in his past life, he didn't feel the hesitation he expected.

Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

JooH

13d

Commented

Will you continue it someday?

ch 61 (Not a Chap)(Remake) StrawPoll for April Stories

Trying to Survive in a World Full of FUTA’S!

Others · OneMoreScore

JooH

20d

Commented

he can also tell a partial truth, that there are times when he sleeps he receives knowledge from other beings is not a lie plus it would allow him to be much freer to train his powers and batman gets a partner to train with and improve.

One of the best martial artists in the DC universe, on par with the likes of Lady Shiva, Batman, and several others. Includes his knowledge on martial arts, meditation, philosophy, and all other helpful/important knowledge.

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_

JooH

23d

Commented

it would have been better if you showed the first meeting with every important villain, it feels like a waste not to do it. i like it a lot even though it's just starting so far the novel i'm most looking forward to reading.

Those trafficking rings alone had given her over 2000 criminals, due to the sheer size of each of them. She had also gotten 2 for the every 5 major gotham villains. With the villains being Joker, Harley Quinn…twice for those two. As well as Mr. Freeze once, the Riddler, Scarecrow, Killer Croc, Condiment King…who counted for some reason, and finally Penguin.

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_

JooH

28d

Commented

now that you said all that I hope she has an encounter with the original gwen or a variant, it would be very very interesting.

Potential harem members: Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, Amity Blight (if you know, you know, AU), Luz Noceda (AU obv), Hinata Hyuga (or Tsunade), Catra, Adora, Jean Grey.

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_

JooH

1mth

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they didn't suspect garaki? right after they left the hospital he is kidnapped and not only that but they also had information about his peculiarity, it makes you wonder where they got it from? in general the kidnapping scene is fine but not perfect the police should have investigated the sounds of gunshots but they were hidden for an hour without the police or a hero appearing, you should have specified the area where it happens for example it is unpopulated, no heroes are circulating, it is far away from people etc.

ch 12 Chapter 12: The chase and escape ( 3 )

MHA Quirk: Calling Critters

Anime & Comics · Jingle303

JooH

1mth

Replied to Jingle303

if you have time you could edit it, put in the title of the chapter that it was edited and give a little explanation in the next chapter.

MHA Quirk: Calling Critters

Anime & Comics · Jingle303

JooH

1mth

Replied to _Wint3r_

I saw it in the original language, I hadn't thought about the dubbing.

"Itachi!" A bright smile bloomed on Sasuke's face as he ran towards his brother, arms open to hug him.

Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

JooH

1mth

Commented

what was the mc's appearance like? I forgot.

'I feel like I'm too poor to be here...' I thought, removing my slippers and walking in. I didn't know the words to describe it well enough, but the house was made in a Japanese-Tatami style; the minimal, almost spartan decorations on the walls served to accentuate its charm. The best way to describe it would be "measured opulence".

Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

JooH

1mth

Commented

when sasuke was a child he called him nii-san not by his first name

"Itachi!" A bright smile bloomed on Sasuke's face as he ran towards his brother, arms open to hug him.

Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

JooH

1mth

Commented

this point is one where many readers don't fully understand, the body affects the mind whether it be thoughts or emotions all because of the chemistry that is produced in the brain as a child so it is normal for him to be reckless, for his thoughts to leak out to others either verbally or by changes he doesn't notice in his face, to be controlled by emotions and therefore show immature behavior no matter what mental age he has had unless he has had some training to control himself in his past life. I personally like a mix of both, showing his thoughts and his immature side as he changes throughout the novel, seeing a child being totally logical and controlled is boring.

Personally, I like writing both. What do you guys like to read? The rampant and chaotic thoughts of Aoki, or a chapter like this; objective and reasonable with hints of Aoki's personality seeping through? Currently, it's been a mixed bag of both with a focus on the first person, but I may do more of this if you all enjoy this more.

Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

JooH

1mth

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in the future you could make an auxiliary chapter showing the information of the mc as well as his belongings (weapons, clothes, armor etc) as well as images of his appearance of the mc and his belongings? if possible only. so far i really like the novel, whenever there is a naruto fic they always give everything to make them op and go from fight to fight, this one i like a lot because of the rhythm, showing how is his life and the interactions with the others.

I grabbed everything I needed, donned my altered outfit, strapped on my armour and tightened my headband.

Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

JooH

2mth

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almost all the female members and some male members towards the end of shippuden, i think it was mentioned in some chapters that hinata had potential but she was too nice and shy, plus she is one of my favorite characters. i could choose rock lee or neji but i would like to see a female member who is described as a powerful person. (traslater)

P.S. Who's a side character in Naruto that you think was underutilised? Tell me your favourites, maybe I can add them in ;)

Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

JooH

3mth

Commented

Personally I liked it better when Tanya could detect when Anya was reading her mind, although this isn't bad either.

Tanya just stared at Anya with a confused expression of shock on her face as all she could think was 'I haven't even done anything!'

Mage×Family

Anime & Comics · SwissChocolatess

JooH

3mth

Commented

You used the information from the novel for the following sequences? it's already over 500 chapters long so there must be a lot of information that you didn't have before about this Pathways and Demoness Sect. welcome back and I wish you luck so that something like this doesn't happen again.

ch 284 IM BACK

Lord of Mysteries:Fire of Destruction

Book&Literature · TheWitnes

JooH

3mth

Commented

se agradecen las imagenes y muy buen capitulo!!

ch 0 3 Chapter - 2

DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Demon_King22

JooH

3mth

Commented

raven tiene que quedar con el, siempre fue mi personaje femenino favorito en dc, la historia me encanta, ya me gustaba la anterior y en esta se nota la mejora en el mc mas que nada, en el anterior simplemente fue con ellas sin mucha resistencia y era muy complaciente con ellas. espero mucho las interacciones con la liga y espero que no los termines retratando como unos idiotas, y por ultimo la forma en que corrompe es mejor que la anterior, realmente no me gusto que pasara a ser su mascota ahora esta mejor

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DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Demon_King22

JooH

3mth

Commented

me gusta mas este que el otro, en el otro era demasiado complaciente con las mujeres y un caliente que se perdia cada vez que veía a una mujer ademas de que las relaciones en el otro estaban muy apresuradas, espero que haya un desarrollo en esta reescritura

"No." I answered this time, looking directly at the two girls. At the end of the day, I didn't care if they were lying to me or had a plan to use me in some way.

DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Demon_King22

JooH

3mth

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the first version I loved it until you introduced the justice league and I gave up on it really they always make them look bad in fanfic they never show their good sides and that's annoying, as for the hypocrisy that's more the writers fault because if the league did their job right they would have to create new villains all the time so they use the jailbreak card all the time and I think there's politics in between? the league more or less sticks to the laws of the land so they can't do much when they catch the villains i don't know if this is so since i don't see the comics but it can be used as an excuse for the jailbreak problem. as for the alliances well they can't just eliminate them after they introduce them it would be a waste so they make them become good or neutral to use them from time to time in their stories.

This direction appeals to me, especially given the alterations I've made to Justice League members, portraying them as somewhat oc (out of character). My perspective highlights their alliance with races that have previously sought to conquer their world, revealing a degree of hypocrisy.

DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Demon_King22

JooH

3mth

Commented

are you going to continue your other stories like oni and scp's? i liked them a lot but i don't know if they are on pause or you abandoned them.

In crafting the file for the Zero monster, I've strived to emulate the style of the SCP fandom, drawing inspiration from its distinctive narrative approach. As a devoted fan of SCP, as evidenced in the last story, I've endeavored to capture the essence of that community's storytelling style.

DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Demon_King22

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