Zanix - Profile

Also, not everyone is Noah, there are many skills that cost a different amount off mana in the same stage and some used as "trump cards" becouse their consumption.

the more power the user is. If the soul and body is destroyed, it can live as the "Will Of The World". The Will can make another host(body) for itself but it will weaken the control over the world. The body can enter a "One With The World" state but that takes a "moment" witch is a weakness. {PS: In general the story is good, but there are certain defficiencies. I sugest you reread once a weak and also look at the comments so that you can improve. The skills proficiency are a little vague. If you don't have ideas about it I suggest you put the price of using and time. For example, a certain skill cost 100 mana and 10 seconds to cast, after 100% it will cost 50 mana and 5 seconds to cast. PSS: English isn't my mother tongue so I might have made some mistakes.}

You can also make "sets" like: - Physical Strengthening [Same as the speed enchant, but in place of speed is strength.] - Agility Strengthening [Passive increase of the speed to the Manifestation of the stage. Should the user have a Manifestation, the speed will increase to the next stage. By using mana, the user will have the speed of Manifestation of the next stage.]{ I will appreciate if you amend things a little when it comes here, you only say that :"Black Hole" grade are weaker then "Quasar", but the Black Hole shouldn't even easily detect a Quasar at it's full speed lest they are specialized in it.} - Physical Damage Resistance [Can resist physical attacks from the same stage and weaken the effect from the ones above depending with the difference.] - Vitality Strengthening [Passive regeneration of 100 times. By using mana it can increase to 100 000 times. Not only does it regenerate the body but also the stamina, mana and the soul.]{Not everyone has Vitality Dao.} When stacked togather, can form the "Immortal Cultivator Path", .making the user "pseudo" immortal. It's effect is to passively absorb energy from it's environment and constantly regenerate and strengthen. If the soul is destroyed, it will regenerate another soul from the memories implanted in the body witch is why it is considered "pseudo". As long as a single drop of blood remain, it can endlessly regenerate. <---> - Soul Damage Resistance [Can resist soul attacks from the same stage and weaken the ones above depending of the difference.] - Soul Energy Absortion [Can absorb enemies souls, memories and experiences as well as convert other energies.(Noah has most of them, but the other people don't), but it's important to note that the experiences can interfere with the user. Absorbing memories is like gaining the knowledge, but absorbing experiences is like using your purest will to clash with the other and a firm will and path is required. In a way, the demons that are hated by everyone are so becouse this ability, if you don't have an overwhelming will, the personality can change, making the user have mental problems and worst case scenarios when the will of both parties on the same level mental breakdowns.] - Soul Memory Strengthening [Increase the capacity of the memory, making it easier to remember things. Effect depends on the stage of the user.] - Soul Perception Strengthening [It makes easier for the user to sense energies, presences and understandthings faster. Effects depend on the stage of the user.] When stacked togather, can form the "Demonic Soul Path", this path beeing one of the most dangerous paths that exist. The user is likely to become a monster that can destroy everything for power in exchange for fast progress regardless of stages as long as energy exists. Once reaching a certain level, can devour everything including the world itself. <---> - Mana Strengthening [Same as agility, but works on mana.] - Mana Sensing Strengthening [Better control with mana, lowering the mana requirements on the skills.] - Law Comprehension Strengthening [Not only rises the effect of the user's comprehension on the laws, but it also allows the user to create and modify the laws that govern the world in his own territory.] {I know that it might be confusing, but explaining is hard. I will put it this way, if the world is the territory, then the laws are the rules put by the country.If you're not caugth they don't know. If you are there are consequences(Heavenly Tribulations is an example). The same as the country can put rules, the lords of territories can do the same as long as the royal family(Heavens) doesn't know and can also bend them in a favorable way. - Dao Comprehension Strengthening [The same as above.] Togather they form "God's Ascension Path", enabling them to create they're own world, being "immortal" as long as they're inner world isn't destroyed. The more "complete" the rules are, the more stable. The bigger the world and richer, the