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Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C133
fkb: i don't know what to say this story is fuc"ing amazing keep it wish you all the best kkkkkkkkkkkeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppp iiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttt uuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppLeading system
BlaqueLyte: Constructive criticism, hope you don't take it badly. First though - I like your novel. It has enough difference from other novels of the same type, yet keeps lots of the things you would love from those novels. Fast paced, timely updates. I enjoy reading it. However, you write your story like it's a draft of the actual novel. Similar to how an author would prepare the points and events you want in a chapter before writing the actual thing. I'm not saying to write "filler" and "fluff" material just to flesh-out the chapter. I'm glad this novel does NOT do that, but you need to develop situations and events more. Practice that, then do it on this novel, and I think you'll grow as an author, and have a great novel on your hands. Lastly - I'm going to vote for your novel. I think it has massive potentialLeading system
MadAtPlagirism: This novel is still still incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.Leading system
SoToasty: This chapter is pushing the limit of the MC's abilities a bit. His library told him what was wrong with the girl's leg, but as stated previously, the book doesn't give solutions to problems. Also, he just because powerful enough to use the zephyr technique, so he obviously hasn't made time to study any of this crap, yet he casually executed it like an expert. This could be accredited to his perfect cultivation technique, but does not explain his knowledge on acupuncture.Library of Heaven's Path · C21
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