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So he stole the only vault that can be connected to him then went and used that money to buy ingredients after telling lilly that he made the potion....so far your MC have been an extremely unpleasant read even though your writing itslef is great

Not gonna lie, this whole arc feels rrally boring. since not only is it in a game world we dont know if he is going to keep those skills in real life or not. plus for me personally i dont know the world this arc is in so i kep just skimming chapters.

I think he is trying to make kenichi somehow relative since non of the canon MCs can really compare with the MC whether its talent or determination wise...

Hopefully he will copy her powers...I noticed he stopped doing that lately is that intentional to not make him too OP or what??

It's all good...DC. And marvel like to give freaking fifty names to just one person so it's always confusing and annoying lol

Though robot Superman is another name for cosmic armor Superman...they are the same lol

Bro he is just plain weird lol....how old was he when he died? Like 7?

And that's how he created James Keller and how he killed him and consumed him...so don't know why he even needs to multiply.

Wondering whether the last wish is always on like a passive skill where any future skill or ability the weakness will be removed as well. Or a one time deal.

Honestly can't figure out your MC....one sec he feels bad that he might steal the news he goes around this chapter and pretty much mindbreaks a women into a slave and acts like it is nothing. So is he like crazy or what?

While you find it funny, it did make you lose a lot of readers...since you choose a world and wishes and then pretty much handeled everything like you are forced into it...

What is happening 0.0

The story is kind of getting out of hand with the timelines...like he was talking to the clan heads to open a restaurant then suddenly he buying slaves who he found out are the mothers of some of the strongest people in konoha and instead of giving them back to konoha he is trying to make a secret base?? Or am I missing something?

I love the fruit power....since most fruits in one piece is kind of conceptual so the drain fruit can drain pretty much everything and add it to him, like stats, skills, even other devil fruits and he pretty much immortal since he can drain lifespan and so on...it's pretty good. Guess all that when's he awakens though.

I don't get why the skill got nerfed...it already exist so it is not breaking the rule of the world or whatever the system based the nerf on.

And nope sadly removing the endbringers and even killing scion will not stop the conflict since the golden morning aftereffect was even worst if you read the original...other earth open portals to earth bet and the shards were trying to evolve into the new entities and warlords and so on...worm is like a weird death world where it's a lose-lose situation you just pick the one that doesn't hurt as much.

I do trust that you have a specific vision for the story, just hopefully you don't forget that any superpowered hero and villain is driven to conflict by his shard...it's like a weird amplification of negTive and conflict drive in their host...and the amount of people with thinker powers that kind of control the world from the background is huge, so even though he is a blind spot and anything he make sure has the same blind spot the effect of those items on the people is not hidden since whatever he sells will have a national effect to global effect depending on what he is doing.