Webnovel Author: PennieWagner

PennieWagner

2yr

Commented

"fixed her intensely"? Uh, what? Did you mean "faced"? I'm so lost. 😑

The princess went through the questions she had prepared for me. I was so nervous that my whole body was trembling. The princess finally spoke out and I fixed her intensely.

PennieWagner

2yr

Commented

....'As dazzling as a feather.' Huh? Are feathers normally associated with "dazzling"? Bright, colorful, soft, gentle. Those things, sure I can imagine. But "dazzling"? Eeeeh?

As soon as we all got our numbers, we heard fireworks meaning the imperial selection had begun. A stunning young lady showed up in front of us. She was as dazzling as a feather. Wearing her blue moon dress and her white jade hairpin, she was astonishingly beautiful. She must be royalty, I thought to myself.

Imperial Nanny Ying Yue

Fantasy · Dominique1412

PennieWagner

2yr

Commented

I think the plot idea is interesting, but the format is...VERY off-putting. I shall continue reading in the hope that things smooth out after some chapters with the story progressing. So far, though, it's sadly awkward to read. Every time a character's name would be listed, it would sort of jolt me out of getting to a state of immersion. Then, the manner in which the characters actually converse is incredibly...stilted. Even though it says that the Author is from an English-speaking country, I have to wonder if English is the Author's second or third language. If it is, that's okay. Perfectly understandable in that case. But if it's not, it honestly seems like the Author is INTENTIONALLY writing the story like they've done a bad translation job. It's...truly strange. I really do hope it gets better because I really do enjoy the idea of the story with what I'm seeing so far. 😣

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Imperial Selection

Imperial Nanny Ying Yue

Fantasy · Dominique1412

PennieWagner

2yr

Posted

If you're going to have the MC adopt another child, what was the point if said child is constantly being left out?! So many times MC mentions how she's a mother of 3 (you mean 4, remember the other child?!). Said child disappears and reappears constantly, with 30-40 chapters passing with no mention of where he is or anything. So far she's left him behind in a market, during a raid of rioters, and the in the mountains! Like, I don't understand! The idea of the original storylines protagonist becoming the adopted brother of the three villains isn't bad, I like it! But the the author just continuously ignores or deletes his presence from existence in the story! What was the point? Personally, if I was that child, I'd go straight to the police and report my adopted mother for abandoned and neglect! Is the author trying to say adopted children matter less than blood-related ones?!

I Transmigrate as a Single Mother of the Three Antagonists

General · Wen Xiao

PennieWagner

2yr

Replied to Nerd_Next_Door

Same, girl, same....😭😑

Which was why she jumped on Wang Tao's wagon at the slightest show of gentleness from him, she didn't even know him that well only two months and yet she handed him her entire life just because she thought he was kind to her. By the time she woke up from her obsession, she was an old woman in her thirties with a cheating husband on her back and lots of broken pieces of her heart that she had to pick up from the start.