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MoonDragonWolfe3: Hey that is a grate point!!! I'm new to writing so I didnt think about it that hard, I'll revamp this at some point. My thinking was more, surprise plot twist, plus he always felt like a female, sort of thing but I must have forgot to add that.... This store kind of got away from me and off my plot line so it must have missed it .

Nova Black
3 months ago

Cev2018: Thanks for the chapter, is this Morgana going to be like a what’s the term again Idk but like albedo from overlord anime?? Idk but would be cool. Thanks again.

I'm just an 'Ordinary' Human (Marvel fanfic) · C35
4 months ago

Starbreaker: It's funny how there is always a guy in the comments section of novels, no matter what genre asking for harem

The Most Talented Zoldyck · C1
4 months ago

Ruan_Sueidyson: The story and +/- is not a story that leaves you eager to read more, it's more a story to relax. I personally gave up on the story because I think there is a mistake in character development. I think in a bender story where the MC is straight and when he turns into a girl and starts falling in love with a male character (simply because he's a girl) it's completely meaningless if that's planned, so do not do male direct protagonist makes a female progenitor

Life Of The Vampire Girl
4 months ago
jaykay you have perfectly detailed the problems that i also have with the novel thank you very much. View More

Jaykay2307: I'm only reviewing it so harshly because you can't have somebody change a part of somebody's fundamental person and just have that person say "cool guess that's a thing now" Like imagine if Voldemort suddenly became a muggle, he wouldn't be okay with that. And whilst people say well Voldemorts thing is being a wizard and as such it's not a fair comparison but LIKE IM A MALE AND IF I TURNED INTO A FEMALE ID FREAK THE FUCK OUT! Like why not just make her/his previous life female like it just seems unnecessary and makes it seem like you have a disconnect and again people might say oh maybe he didn't react like that cause he didn't care about his gender, but let me tell you something the different chemicals in her/his body would make him/her care about it like gender isn't just what's between your legs or what you think you are it depends on genetics and chemicals and say those chemicals suddenly change so would your emotion, it's like when people say oh I'm still addicted to coffee even in this new body, which could just be a coincidence in the chemicals but let me tell you this, MALE AND FEMALE SPECIFIC CHEMICALS ARE SPECIFIC TO EACH GENDER. Like I wouldn't care about this if to me it seemed like you are trying to make some sort of political statement with the gender thing and you can call me stupid or transphobic, but Kyle Jenner still has the chemicals of the male he can call himself a female but he is a male. And your main character is now a female which would change her personality like I said before so like could you just change pre dead gender cause otherwise it seems like you made this character just to fit your political views which in my standpoint is as bad as making a Mary Sue.

Nova Black
4 months ago

Jaykay2307: I'm only reviewing it so harshly because you can't have somebody change a part of somebody's fundamental person and just have that person say "cool guess that's a thing now" Like imagine if Voldemort suddenly became a muggle, he wouldn't be okay with that. And whilst people say well Voldemorts thing is being a wizard and as such it's not a fair comparison but LIKE IM A MALE AND IF I TURNED INTO A FEMALE ID FREAK THE FUCK OUT! Like why not just make her/his previous life female like it just seems unnecessary and makes it seem like you have a disconnect and again people might say oh maybe he didn't react like that cause he didn't care about his gender, but let me tell you something the different chemicals in her/his body would make him/her care about it like gender isn't just what's between your legs or what you think you are it depends on genetics and chemicals and say those chemicals suddenly change so would your emotion, it's like when people say oh I'm still addicted to coffee even in this new body, which could just be a coincidence in the chemicals but let me tell you this, MALE AND FEMALE SPECIFIC CHEMICALS ARE SPECIFIC TO EACH GENDER. Like I wouldn't care about this if to me it seemed like you are trying to make some sort of political statement with the gender thing and you can call me stupid or transphobic, but Kyle Jenner still has the chemicals of the male he can call himself a female but he is a male. And your main character is now a female which would change her personality like I said before so like could you just change pre dead gender cause otherwise it seems like you made this character just to fit your political views which in my standpoint is as bad as making a Mary Sue.

Nova Black
4 months ago

Mystogrigen: We have to rescue the shota cat!

Hellsing: I Reincarnated as Seras Victoria · C45
5 months ago

Arachnid: so i guess you completely forgot his/her first life.

Hellsing: I Reincarnated as Seras Victoria · C45
5 months ago

ICESCORPION: First and subscribe to pewdiepie

A Knight's Will. · C31
5 months ago
Reading Status: C27
very good.

the novel has a lovely writing style and a multiverse and who doesn't love a multiverse.

i love the main character as hes smart and isnt dense as hell nor is he pursuing or even stumbling into a harem(only 1 waifu). View More
A Knight's Will.
5 months ago
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A Knight's Will. · C27
5 months ago

Brenin: i would personally prefer my hero academia however i would like to just say that having him meet face to face with a god might actually be a good way to expand on the multiverse so maybe after my hero you can send him to danmachi, konosuba or any other worlds where that would be possible.

A Knight's Will. · C27
6 months ago
i would personally prefer my hero academia however i would like to just say that having him meet face to face with a god might actually be a good way to expand on the multiverse so maybe after my hero you can send him to danmachi, konosuba or any other worlds where that would be possible. View More
A Knight's Will. · C27
6 months ago
the MC talks too much i hope that this drags on less in later chapters. View More
Re:Death - Reincarnated Dead into Another World · C2
6 months ago

Wolf_God: +1

Beast Cultivating System · C15
7 months ago

Brenin: during invasion for both
no karin
remove kyuubi
no frogs
uzukaze...? (was just thinking of if itd sound good combined and it surprisingly does)

Naruto The Shadow (temp hiatus) · C0
7 months ago

thebook100_: Thanks for the chapter . I vote keep it to just the two.

Naruto The Shadow (temp hiatus) · C0
7 months ago

Daoist_Lightning99: okay,here is my honest and best opinion. 1. revealing the past and truths one after the other is problematic and is better revealed in one go. 2. the scenario should be of orochimaru's invasion as it would be peak pandemonium and also extra peaceful afterwards. 3.(my personal opinion) pls don't keep karin in the harem.so has too little redeeming qualities. if you're reading this, thank you.

Naruto The Shadow (temp hiatus) · C0
7 months ago

DDclash: 1.during invasion
2.during invasion
3.puck the fangirl
4.puck the fox

Naruto The Shadow (temp hiatus) · C0
7 months ago

DnBVirus: Shit this blew up in my face, Imma go sleep, you guys can keep discussing and come to a conclusion, send me to the top with likes.!!!

Naruto The Shadow (temp hiatus) · C0
7 months ago
during invasion for both
no karin
remove kyuubi
no frogs
uzukaze...? (was just thinking of if itd sound good combined and it surprisingly does) View More
Naruto The Shadow (temp hiatus) · C0
7 months ago
try not to feel stressed about it man just post at your own pace and dont rush yourself or you might burn yourself out. View More

JHarper: I am majorly sorry about lacking updates after you posted that, I didn't expect work to catch up but I do hope to focus on this again maybe with a few less updates than 2 chapters a day, maybe a chapter every other day with a few extra on the weekend or something. First I need to make up for the chapters I missed.

Waking to Dragons and Elves
7 months ago

Lord_of_Winter: It's stock market, not stalk market

Entering the World of HSDxD · C1
7 months ago

ErozothDraeor: You mean stock market? Whats a stalk market.

Entering the World of HSDxD · C1
7 months ago

Brenin: if the story still focuses on action then a little romance is fine. (please avoid the wuxia r#pey type of romance though, i seriously dont know whats wrong with wuxia writers and am starting to suspect that they as a whole have some moral problems.)

I died, but came back ... as a wolf · C23
7 months ago

Brenin: or that and regretably most of the time the prince charming is either forceful or arrogant or both which just ruins a female MC.

Beast Cultivating System · C15
7 months ago

GodxOwn: make her a yuri

Beast Cultivating System · C15
7 months ago

Abyssmoon: Or she meets her Prince charming and you beginn to doubt if she is even the mc or the guy is the mc

Beast Cultivating System · C15
7 months ago
or that and regretably most of the time the prince charming is either forceful or arrogant or both which just ruins a female MC. View More

Abyssmoon: Or she meets her Prince charming and you beginn to doubt if she is even the mc or the guy is the mc

Beast Cultivating System · C15
7 months ago

MadSuperintendent: Thanks for the chapter

RE: A Wanderer's Origin · C2
7 months ago
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