Jtnn

2mth

Commented

Wouldn’t it make more sense to create a system where they let 1 goblin in at a time and level up the people? Traps are humans best weapons sadly author didnt think about this lol

ch 10 Chapter 8: The Power of Ma Ziye

A farm that breeds gods and demons

Sci-fi · Black Eyed King

Jtnn

4mth

Commented

if you have to insist there is no problem, then there is a problem.

"If you're curious, you can also copy all the phone numbers in my phone book. You can carry out secret investigations whenever you have spare time," Yigol suggested.

My Trillion-Dollar Assets is Exposed by My Wife's Bragging!

Urban · Rainbow Bubble Fish

Jtnn

6mth

Commented

Hi. If you're reading this: Yes I am new to writing. Yes I like to troll. If you enjoyed this, then my mission is accomplished. If you didn't enjoy this, you can suck...popsicles.

ch 0 1 Unholy beginning

Jtnn

6mth

Commented

present tense and then past tense

If he wasn't careful, his feet slipped, and he fell, face planting in the mud.

Dungeon King: My Goblins Have Captured Countless Female Players

Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck

Jtnn

1yr

Commented

Probably metal manipulation -> gravity manipulation

Darius continued, "...Make no mistake, however. The earth element isn't only to defend one's self. We also have a spell that can pull an unimaginable force of destruction that could threaten all life in one world. In fact, this spell was so terrible that it wiped out the previous inhabitants of a whole world."