Nahllo

8mth

Commented

Law's eyes glow bright blue and begin releasing blue energy vapor as he opens a Room spanning 20km total, 10km in any direction from him.

Nahllo

11mth

Commented

I really hate those spoilers you put at the end of each chapter. I glance over them each time and it takes away from the surprise.

ch 108 Chapter 108: Axel Hunt... I think he broke Quidditch

Nahllo

1yr

Replied to One_Winged_Angel

Did not smile. I am dead inside.

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Games · Galanar

Nahllo

1yr

Posted

Generic as fxck and terrible English. You guys really have been fed so much shxt that you think this is any good.

Returning From The Magic World

Urban · Dark_Crow1111

Nahllo

1yr

Commented

I, too, tried to make sense of this sentence but alas, I have failed.

"So did Wolfram was them to build him something..." Law wonders as he tries to make sense of this.

Nahllo

1yr

Posted

Okay. Let me get this straight: It is a fairly decent story in this sea of dog doo doo that is this website/app. But. BUT. Please stop with the god damned filler chapters just for the fun of it. For an example, on the most recent event of the meeting of supernaturals, my man dragged that stuff through at least 10 chapters that were purely filler and brought nothing at all to the story. So yeah, read it but wait 20-30 chapters between each reading session to avoid being frustrated to death. Cya.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

Nahllo

1yr

Posted

Meh. I have no idea how good the novel actually is; the grammar makes it really hard (for me) to get into it. Past tense becomes present and future also becomes present but present sometimes becomes past for no fucking reason and all that in the first 5 paragraphs. I will pass.

What? Why do people like this shxt? 3 chapters in and more stuff happened than you'd expect in 50+ chapters. "haha I'm 10 let me just go and beat gods for the fun of it hahahahahha...". Are we just gonna brush over that? Yes, it's a fiction. BUT. You can't (I certainly can't) relate to ANYTHING in this story so far. (3 chapters in is where I'll drop this turd of a 'story') Plus that has to be one of the most generic, (and delusional) storyline I've read on that site; and I've read quite a lot of filler. You people have some shxt taste to think this story is remotely good. Yes, I'm judging you. I know Webnovel is filled with questionable stories but come on people, please try to find something else.