Polik098 - Profile

Story is good so far, world and system is fairly interesting, went premium at chapter 17 which is bad. Some things can be inconsistent which is annoying, I suspect the Author might be mostly making it up as they write without much planning. - Like in chapter 1 they imply that monsters are fairly common outside the city. - Then a few chapters later in chapter 5 we're told that most of the monsters have been killed off over the years except for some in the old forests in the mountains. - Then later but still in chapter 5 it's also too dangerous for normal people to go outside the city at all because of all the monsters outside. - Then in chapter 7, there are once again almost no monsters outside the city and you can only find them far away from the city in the old forests. It's a small thing, but to have so much conflicting information so early into a novel isn't a good sign to me for the long term.

The story is fairly interesting and well written until around chapter 60. After this point, it changes from either a fairly well edited MTL or proper translation to what seems like RAW MTL. If this novel was properly translated, I would probably give give it a solid 4/5. Below are some chapter 62 MTL lines you can start to expect from chapter 61 forward: - In the ring, Gu Changge appeared, who was going to be two unhelpful Yan Ji. - "Since then, this one has been severed. You have joined Gu Changge to deal with me. Now that you finally show your true colors?" - Gu Changge owns are very possessive. I feel it's quite unfortunate that the first 60 chapters are fairly well translated, because it means the punch to the brain that is trying to read chapters 61 onwards hurts more. If you hate raw machine translated content, stay away. I'm dropping at chapter 62.