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TerrestrialOverlor: I got rule law by accident...you see I was banging my girl here and had been going for a while and suddenly I understood the thrust rule and she got the swallowing rule... now we're here...Monster Integration · C342
hersheytemple: Are u ever going to touch back on the lady that made that promise earlier about him reaching the tenth level of that body refining technique, within 5 years or whatever was the promiseMonster Integration · C336
Shoto1003: I think Ellen will be very good for MC, imagine if Michael and Ellen start dating, I believe Ellen won't want to leave her lesbian side, she is literally the door to Harem. I say harem because Michael as an *****, he must start liking women and the author so far has only made a point of playing several women in the story, Ellen, Jill, Rhea, and there's that girl Michael met in the first apartment, the author said they were going to have some relationship, but so far the girl hasn't even appeared in the story again, there's also that girl who became friends with Michael before the competition, be it the two sisters who had powerful rules, the one with the spear rule and the oldest. So many girls appear, occupy an entire chapter, and nothing happens.Monster Integration · C327
Raidan: if the grammar was better, this novel would be at top 20 at leastMonster Integration · C302
Shoto1003: I think the way Michael is training, using a monster's energy core and combining a monster's berserk energy with his own energy must be the path that of the first fighters of mankind, which over time, to be a very dangerous method adapted to a safer way. So we can say that the MC is training in the form of primordial Super elite, and the reason he is weaker than a super elite is just because he used a core of a Master level beast while the other super elites have the energy of. a Duke that would be of better quality.Monster Integration · C278
Soltice: When Ashlyn become Phoenix?? Her attitude like the PhoenixMonster Integration · C273
Akshay007: Did he don't want to check those fatty brothers watch.....
To see is there any skill in them....
Even it may not fire type....
But will be costly......
Maybe a hybrid type...
Just check it.....Monster Integration · C273
pheonixea: I think I remember the author saying that Ashlyn belonged to one of those few monsters that didn't have a blodline. So maybe she evolves into something new?Monster Integration · C269
Shoto1003: stop complaining, the author improved a lot after he asked readers for their opinion. MC's personality is much better, more mature, the author rescued the importance of Ashley's mutation, brought back the lion's flames creating a good connection with the past and best of all is the ability of the analog motor, a motor that can refining core energies, this feature is likely to become the MC's asset. creating the tenth seal would already be an achievement, if you forget that with only 1 stamp his power grew immensely, he now has 17 seals, outside he became Corporal and it seems that Ashley's flames had some qualitative mutation, he is several times strongest who has entered the kingdom and he will have significant help from Ashley. And it is much better for him to become only Corporal, he only entered this realm for 2 days, still has plenty of time to get stronger.Monster Integration · C267
GreedyGlutton: I am so proud at how you did that great save with the engine i nearly forgpt it was said to be special i figured it would play a part when makimg totems because of those symbol thingies each one has! You make me want to wait to read and jeep reading all at thr same time!Monster Integration · C264
Shoto1003: author you asked for opinions to improve your story, I will give some suggestions.
1- I do not know English, I use translation application for reading, so grammar does not affect me much, because I already read with several errors, but I appreciate when she is at a nice level. But bother me is the contradictory information, for example the MC was already in the sixth level of the exercise, but you mentioned many times that it was in the fifth level, and it was previously said that if they practiced the maximum training it was possible to create at least 2 seals, but the MC only completed 1 and in several times you change the names of the characters, and this happened other times, I recommend you pay attention to this.
2 - We understand that ashley is a low level beast, but she is very boring and arrogant and it is time for the MC to discover the truth about many things, mainly how to increase his strength and ashley, since his friends hide, I recommend you do this soon, before it becomes Corporal.
3. I do not know what you plan for the novel, whether it will be harem or not. You presented 10 different girls with the potential to stay with the MC, but nothing happened. I recommend harem, the MC does not seem to have a personality to stay with just one person and the world context does not seem to help, and even if the story is not harem, you could at least start the novel, it may be a little cliché but no one hates it, and it's an outrage that the MC does not like anyone in the whole story, and you've introduced a lot of girls, personally I want Ellen, Rhea, and Jill if you're a harem.
4 - you could speed up the story a little bit in general.
5-You could invest more in scenes of people's struggles along with their beasts, not only they fighting apart, but training techniques where one supports the other, do not forget that this is the theme of the novel.
6 - There is something I almost forget, the great differential of the MC, the engine of refinement super complicated, so far has not served anything, and did not appear in history again, I recommend you do something about, perhaps interlinking the devil's exercise to the engine .
6 - I really want harem, but do not make a harem of 20 women, do with max
6 women, or at least start with romance.
Well, I guess that's it,
p.s.: I really want a MC harem to have Ellen, Rhea and Jill, just to make it clear.Monster Integration · C226
Shoto1003: for a harem story with Ellen, Rhea, and Jill, I'll give you a present.Monster Integration · C190
Shoto1003: Author I hope this story is a harem, the reason is that I really liked Rhea and Ellen, so I'll start campaigning in the chapters and sometimes send a bonus.Monster Integration · C188
Shoto1003: I do not know why, but I want Ellen to stay with MC. It's so natural, both of them, and it would be nice if MC's girlfriend was a lesbian, she could open a lot of doors with other girls ...Monster Integration · C186
VardorStormDragon: It is worse than you think. Often a single sentence that has the word in it twice will have it spelled both ways. The spelling/grammar issues not just constant but also very consistent. A suspicious person would think it is deliberate.Monster Integration · C163
ottospens: Saddly this novel went premium, and after reading/paying the first 3 chapter (after premiun) i see no improvement in quality, grammar or development in the story, so ill drop the novel.
Cya GlMonster Integration · C147
Shoto1003: author because rhea is so far from the MC, like, they barely spoke of this one arrived at the camp, even if it is stronger than the MC, if it were not for him, she would have died in the forest, or by the beasts and certainly by those two who attacked them. I thought there was some atmosphere between them, now it's the same weather between MC and Jill.Monster Integration · C134
mayouki: Some word seem to be missing...
Anyway thanks for the chapterMonster Integration · C116
zefura: You should fix the language mistakes. İt's killing all the pleasureMonster Integration · C116
endless: Is anyone else pissed at Rhea for just disappearing. Michael literally saved her life in that cave. And when the food was poisoned. And they get to safety and a camp with a friend of hers and she is gone.Monster Integration · C114
mayouki: Um so what happened to bear girl I feel like mc should be way closer to her than like jil and her brother... Feels unnatural that they don't even talk to each other or she isn't even mentioned..Monster Integration · C114
Nim_Skoll: I can’t agree. I come back because he is learning more and more. It doesn’t seem obvious but it’s thereMonster Integration · C43
TheWaifuHunter: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) "I said softly and no one paying attention to us but Micheal didn't know he will see those breast in near future." ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)Monster Integration · C26
Kadish_Vel: Your bagged loli comment is still legendary for this novel. Well doneThe Legendary Mechanic · C512
Imbreak: I hope he visits or meets the people he met in the 1st arc like Old Man Lu and his daughter Lu Qing. Also his team back in Division 13, especially Li Yalin 😅The Legendary Mechanic · C512
Arkard: Haha sparks are already flying between the girls!The Legendary Mechanic · C512
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