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Henrion: I'm pretty disappointed with this story, so I'll start with the good qualities. The author has decent grammar, and knows how to proof-read. In addition to that, the story is updated very frequently. Now to the negative part. The self-insert is a total Gary Stu. The first red flag was his overly tragic backstory. I was okay with it, and I was still pretty excited because it had an interesting premise. I thought it'd be about a vigilante exposing the faulty hero society in America. Something similar to the Hero Killer Stain. Then his second family was killed off shortly after training the protagonist. It hardly had any impact as we only got to know them a few chapters beforehand. Anyways, the protagonist avenges his family then goes off to Japan to live with a bunnygirl. They stay together for a while, and our protagonist decides to join UA. He moves out, and easily passes the exam to get into UA. Once he joined the main cast, reading this stopped being enjoyable. When he moved into his new home, he instantly becomes acquainted with Mina. Within two chapters, Mina has full access to his home. She's waking him up and cooking him breakfast. Because that's how normal friendships work. Despite the protagonist's apparent strength, he's a total pushover. After he shows his power during the USJ Incident,(for some reason) the class of 1-A all come over to his house to visit him. Using his recently ordered pizza as a hostage, they get into his home and have a sleep-over. At one point during this event, he flexes on Kirishima(who he fought during the battle trial) with the golden line: "Of course I went easy on you. If I didn't you'd be dead." At that point I couldn't take the story seriously anymore. It had potential, but it quickly turned into the author's power fantasy. Some people might be into this sort of thing, but I'm not. Dropped.My Hero Academia: Killer Quirk!!
WakelessMars: So cliche beatiful sister has op power -_- might drop seems like another generic mediocre novelDark Moon Era · C23
LividEdge: Will definitly do! Thanks for your support!The Universe is Innately Just
Godking Ascending the Heavens · C1
Infractuous: I am the author of The God System, and I am rewriting this because I feel like I had messed up my previous work.
That was the first real book I had ever attempted making, and as a newbie author, of course, mistakes would be made, so I am now attempting to give it a second go.
I hope I have as good of a fanbase as I did previously, so strap yourselves in because we are going to go on an amazing ride!The God System
Reborn: Evolving From Nothing · C1
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