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Some contained matters not “convenient to mention “ 😏

ch 312 0311 The Press Conference (Part-2)

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A homunculus or poly juice?

ch 226 Chapter 226: Wisdom Incarnate

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Its well written but it is also just recycling Harry potter tropes.

ch 38 Talk with the Head of Gryffindor House

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This just seems forced

ch 209 Chapter 209: Nevermore

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Thanks for the chapter, but why is the actual content lesser than the announcements and other auxiliary stuff?

ch 129 Chapter 129: The Duel Part 2

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Thanks for the chapter. A bit of feedback, the Last crouch, as a form of address was used too frequently. Though I guess from the ending it doesn’t matter much now, does it?

ch 198 Chapter 198: Crouching Tiger

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Is this dead?

ch 199 Chapter 199 "Banned Words"

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Thanks for the chapter. Wishing you a speedy recovery. Yes the pacing is a bit slow, but its still better than the druid arc. What would be nice to see if there can be more powerful characters added in. Raising Bryan to Dumbeldore’s level means that once he is OP the story will lose meaning. Bringing back Grindelwald, Voldemort and Herpo etc might keep it interesting enough.

ch 240 0239 Thoughts

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To the author, Thanks for the chapter. The story is going too slow. Please move it along .

ch 744 Chapter – 737 Akatsuki Appears?

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All this foreshadowing needs to end and the entire fiction at least needs to get to shippuden arc.

ch 194 CH_6.23 (194)

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First anbu was created by Tobirama. I believe it’s cannon.

ch 192 CH_6.21 (192)

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Great chapter. Bring out more.

ch 171 Chapter 171: Of Dystopian Declarations

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👏👏👏👏

ch 184 CH_6.13 (184)

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Tfc.

ch 75 Chapter 75: The deeps

Harry Potter: Another Chance

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This is dead for sure now.

ch 47 When Winter Comes

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No mermaid, but maybe taking complete khalasars

ch 57 Mermaid Waifu

Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear

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James potter or Sirius black?

ch 161 Chapter 161: A Good Man Goes to War

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Author kun has made Danzo too strong, now it would be very difficult to reign him in since the protagonist is not using the Tensigan anytime soon.

ch 715 Chapter – 708 The Loss of Raikage

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Harry Potter…the serial killer

ch 58 Chapter 58: Seven Arkstones Array

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Pulling a kakashi

ch 154 Chapter 154: One Step At a Time

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