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Why did I just imagine that afterwards there would be a geated review on the others saliva? View More

CrossEdge: =awesome kissing lol.

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C156
1 day ago
Blackbeard ate his heart... View More

ChikaYo: Use zipper to steal gura gura no mi when blackbeard got it :3

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C75
3 days ago
I just remembered. Doesnt Robin get tortured when Kuma seperates the crew? View More
A New Path · C145
3 days ago
No they are twins. They were reborn as twins. View More

Diseda: Nikasu is younger by 2 years if I am right.

I Freakin` Reincarnated With A System · C149
3 days ago
He should have been incapavle of using magic for 15 mins after that barrier spell. After he put it up he was teleported away and started to speak to Nikasu. Shortly after that the girl arrived. That doesnt make sense after all no more than 8 minutes couldve past since then. Yet he was able to cast the black void spell. Soo mqny inconsistencies. Just one proof read and this will be extremely noticeable. Atleast for me. View More
I Freakin` Reincarnated With A System · C149
4 days ago
If Nikasu and Ichizu are twins and they have three sisters and one is older that Ichizu, the other older than Nikasu and one young than both. The doesnt really make sense unless the 2nd sister was born on the same day as the Nikasu and Ichizu and just after Ichizu came out. View More
I Freakin` Reincarnated With A System · C149
4 days ago
... im disappointed. The atomic nuclei splits into protons, neutron and electrons...
An atom consists of a positive nucleus surrounded by an cloud of electrons. The atomic nucleus is made of composite particles called the proton and neutron. The proton and neutrons are not fused just bound together next to eachother. Like puttinf 2 footballs so they touch side by side.
The protons and neutrons are made from elementary particles called quarks which are bound permananetly by gluons.
A proton consists of 2 up quarks and one down quark.
A neutron consists of 1 up quark and 2 down quarks.

An atomic nuclei can only be split into protons and neutron.... A neutron can be decayed into a proton by releasing a beta particle and anti-electron neutrino. View More
I Freakin` Reincarnated With A System · C148
4 days ago
I know what you mean. In Bleach System with in Bleach, the MC Sora just walks up to like 5 different girls and proceeds to kiss them when they literally just met and yet they all somehow fall in love with him and dont even care about the blatant sexual assault. View More

Goyya: I want the girls to have a more compelling reason to like the MC instead of them just jumping right into his arms for almost no reason.

It's also why I don't want a large number of girls even if this is a harem fic

Playing with other Supernaturals · C43
6 days ago
About Draco, he was raised in a strict manner by his father to despise everyone around him and treat them like insects. He grew up with superiority indoctrinated into him by his father. So it's not his entire fault that he is extremely condescending to others and is Harry's antagonist. He grew up scared of his father. The fact that he joined Voldemort was because he was scared by his father's shadow and Lord Voldemorts threats towards his mother. The only one who showed him any care. Yes I hate him, but that doesn't mean I blame him for his actions. Growing up in a harsh environment despite being priveledged would make many to give up hope quickly and take the safest route. So That's why he left at the end. It's because his family shaped him into a cowardly person. View More
Wizardry System · C40
2 weeks ago
I appreciate that. Not every novel has to have sex. I would much rather have 1 chapter of detailed emotional development rather than 10 chapters of a male indulging in sexual pleasures with females who rarely make an appearance and are only trophies who only exist for sexual satisfaction. View More

The_Auditor: Its ok, mc will be laid but no H scenes about it, i suck at that category...

Ex-True God in Animeverse
3 weeks ago
Spoiling a piece of fiction for others us a low move a person can do. It shows that you have no regards for the feelings of others and also implies that you can not be trusted because there is an unspoken 'rule' where you do not ruin others fun for you own satisfaction. Any human with a shred of compassion would understand this. This is called being selfless. Something you clearly lack, especially since you started to attack him when he responded with an emotional reply to a comment you posted, this action is commonly known as misdirection and involves a party targeting another in order to shift the blame away from them. This proves that you understand that what you did was wrong. Also you talked about being 'professional' language (unsure about the specific topic or comment due to terrible grammar) but you response to him shows a lack of acknowledgement to the fact that what you did was wrong so if you were to be 'professional' you would be able to clearly see that you was wrong. Don't go digging at people for your own mistakes. Accept it and move on. It can do wonders in life. View More

Vm19: Omg so are u calling me sick bc that rlly ,just u can say can u pls not give spoiler or something else ,u need just to use a word for someone who need professional help and i guess is for u so ,stop with the drama , sorry for ppl who i offend im not gonna say more 🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

Reincarnation Of The Businesswoman At School · C50
3 weeks ago
About Hermione. He assumed that she would be able to help with the science magic but to do that it would require degree level knowledge. There is no way she has that knowledge. View More
Taking on the Magical World · C25
3 weeks ago
Hermione liked Ron for a really long time. Like it was since their 1st or 2nd year. View More

Wanderer: Ehhh I think Hermione belongs with ron she was definitely the Molly to his Arthur

Taking on the Magical World · C25
3 weeks ago
Since he went to Hogwarts 70% has just been a copy if the actual novel... View More

yahska: Keep on doing the good work. It is leagues ahead of generic harry potter fanfic.

Taking on the Magical World · C25
3 weeks ago
A wizard can not defeat the muggles after WW2. That war paved way for Nuclear research as well as extreme weaponry. A wizard force of 1000 would be annihilated in 10 minutes by an onslaught of tanks. This is ignoring their battleships which would absolutely demolish them in minutes. Wizards are weak against muggles. Its a fact. View More

After_Wing: Would you do that or not in the future?
Best not since everything can turn ugly which muggles would go crazy in engaging a bloodied war against the wizards. Which in reflect could caused a nuclear annihilation.

Taking on the Magical World · C21
3 weeks ago
Ha! You want an OC to kill Voldemort? More like a blatant copy of the Deathly Hallows with Harry potter changed to the MC's name.
The author is stupid. His mother gave him the book yet instead of asking her if it works he decides to get others to become test subjects and potentially exposing himself to Dumbledore which will allow him plenty of time to create precautions against him. Also why would his mother give him something that could turn him into a beastman? View More

After_Wing: Oh dang.
Though who would defeat the dark lord?
Your MC or the boy who lived Harry Potter?
Even I can't choose who would who but best let MC defeat him since for Harry Potter case took long and created more damage to the good side.
And man don't removed MC's mother.
She's not only scary and badass but a lovable, caring mother to her son. And mc here is not showing really how much he is lucky to have the best mom in the world.
Make her lived! Make her the supporting power for MC!

Taking on the Magical World · C21
3 weeks ago
This is just stupid. Humans would not discriminate against wizards because they have powers. Especially since the top authorities know their existence. In fact scientists and wizards would probably join hands together in order to advance both science and magic thus creating a new branch of magic which may be called Scientific Magic which main principle is combining the input of magic and the output if science in order to achieve impossible feats. View More
Taking on the Magical World · C21
3 weeks ago
True evil will be so corrupting that even the thought of his name strikes fear. A true overlords requires no allies as he alone is able to keep the balance in his territory. In other words at the peak of evilness no one would even think of going against him thus requiring no allies to keep others in check. Sure he fan have slaves but he does not need allies. View More

Abdirahman101: every evil boss needs his minions

Taking on the Magical World · C20
3 weeks ago

birdyful: Author, I am disappointed in you. You literally copy and pasted the scenes from Philosopher's Stone, just changing names and adding your own spin, which is the OP mc. I have no problems with a OP mc, I have problems with an OP mc with a superiority complex and budding manipulation tendencies he accuses Dumbledore of. Hipocrisy is hard to like in a character unless the character acknowledges it and makes some effort to change or is blatantly unashamed. But that is a minor issue because it seems to be a part of the mainstream mc image, so you don't have to focus on changing it or anything. What bothered me is the following:
Aside from copyright issues and the repetitive, painful predictability in your latest chapters, I understand that the curriculum in Hogwarts likely hasn't changed for a long time unless there were significant breakthroughs. However, the lessons shouldn't take up the majority of the chapters since we already know what happens due to it being a fanfiction. We're supposed to be familiar with the source material.
I am saddened as a reader to find that your own original parts are VASTLY overshadowed by the slightly edited copy-pasted (or ad verbatim) passages. Even when the original spins arrived, I didn't feel any excitement or anticipation because I was already dampened. I came to read YOUR story, not a rewrite of HP's main series. Your story had many appealing factors that made me add this to my library, and lately they don't seem to appear or even stand out. Please don't tell me that Hogwarts' lessons take up so much of the MCs time that he can't even socialize, explore the castle, train, further your original plot, make progress on his goals, get a hobby, write a letter home... Anything!
Maybe you don't want to change your approach due to entirely valid reasons, which perfectly fine, e.g. to keep going with the current posting schedule. (Webnovels have a high posting frequency to keep the audience hooked, as it is quite literary one of their main characteristics. You have my full sympathies with the demands of the reader market.) Then it's just a conflict of interest as a writer and an individual reader, and I'd might then leave. Please don't be disheartened if that happens, as you can't keep every customer in the store, so to say.
Whatever happens, continue writing.
Best regards!

Taking on the Magical World · C20
3 weeks ago
He has. View More

Dao_Master211: I feel like some scenes is from the original harry potter then he just changed the characters with. Lol

Taking on the Magical World · C20
3 weeks ago
Plus she is pretty stalkerish at the start. And her original motivation for loving Harry was because he was famous. She adored him before they even met. View More

Plutonium: No Ginny Weasley, I don't like her.
I seriously think she have love potion to be with Harry on Canon.

Taking on the Magical World · C15
3 weeks ago
Exactly. She has absolutely no character development. She doesn't appear much but someone how they end up together. Like wtf. She does even try and woo him. He literally falls right into her lap. View More

Plutonium: No Ginny Weasley, I don't like her.
I seriously think she have love potion to be with Harry on Canon.

Taking on the Magical World · C15
3 weeks ago
The MC is ruthless. His personality would put him in Slytherin. View More

Yanorth: Hermione ou Fleury, and the mc have to go to Ravenclaw is the unique house that make sense, if he go to grinffydor is going to be really forced

Taking on the Magical World · C15
3 weeks ago
I didn't say it was his power. I said it was his goal. He wanted to reach a state of immortality without relying on external forces. I never said it was his power. View More

frangky: He is still died in the end. That just the meaning his name not his power.

I Freakin` Reincarnated With A System · C137
3 weeks ago
Did you know that Voldemort means to flee death which is his main goal. To reach a state in which not even death can touch him. View More

frangky: Lord moldymorts can't sense the intention when someone say his name. So nikasu is more powerful than him

I Freakin` Reincarnated With A System · C137
3 weeks ago
True, but the way he cooked the fish shows he is better View More

Daoisttian_03: Im saying hoe is he supposed to show us he is a better cook than that world if he is relying on op ingredients

Journey of Gourmet · C6
3 weeks ago
Meat looks like meat. Vegetables look like vegetables. Also he is too fast to see. View More

Duck_God: toriko ingredients too op doesn't people get suspicious? from never seeing the ingredients

Journey of Gourmet · C6
3 weeks ago
If you fought in a medieval war and you had a tank. Then wouldn't you use the tank? View More

Daoisttian_03: Thats what im wondering

Journey of Gourmet · C6
3 weeks ago
If you fought in a medieval war and you had a tank then wouldn't you use the tank? View More

ResurrecTH: why would he use toriko world ingredient when people in this world only have normal ingredient? even a child can be god chef with this

Journey of Gourmet · C6
3 weeks ago
I kinda said it to comfort you. Like to say no one else can so don't beat yourself up. View More

JeffreyDO: Like I said getting a scholarship at my school is like getting 6 figure pay a year after grad. It's probably just not possible for me, but like you said it is very possible which is to start a business then sell it.

Wizardry System · C0
3 weeks ago
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