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Monge_BR: Water? Empoleon. 🤔

Pokemon: An Adventure · C14
6 months ago

Monge_BR: Gible 🙏🙏🙏

Pokemon: An Adventure · C14
6 months ago

Slycerr: I think if you used Grotle instead of Torterra the fight would be a lot more believable, althought there was nothing wrong with the fight itself. It is good that you used a timeskip of a month to train his Pokemon, but that amount of experience shouldn't be more then someone who has a Torterra as his Pokemon. You covered some flaws that would have been in the story, for example how you heal your Pokemon in a forest, but please keep in mind the stats off a Pokemon when you make a battle scene.
And I don't say that you need to follow the stats of Pokemon, but use them as guidelines for the future.

This is obviously just my opinion, so I'm just giving you it, it is your choice what you do with it.

Anyway I like the story so far :D.

Pokemon: An Adventure · C8
6 months ago
Thanks for the Chapter View More
Pokemon: An Adventure · C12
6 months ago

kopolok: i like their friendship

Pokemon: An Adventure · C12
6 months ago

adjust: Great Fan-Fic...................Love the way you are trying to do the character and story development but please increase the pace a little.

Pokemon: An Adventure
6 months ago

kopolok: Great.....................Pokemon Gotta Catch them all............
It's nice story.,...........................but need more world background AND DON'T YOU DARE DROP THIS BEFORE HE BECOMES A CHAMPION

Pokemon: An Adventure
6 months ago

RajaJee: Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Don't drop this and make him collect Uber Psedudo Legendary or legendary Pokemon...

And make sure he is in Ash's timeline and let him beat up ASH's stupid ass.

Pokemon: An Adventure
6 months ago

YameteAuthorSan: this is my first review in pokemon fan-fic so i give you 5 star and i hope you Don't draft this cuzz i will H..U...N....T.....Y......O.......U in your DREAMS!...
And i wish you a big success this novel!.
**:PLSS NO HAREM AND GET HIM A LEGENDARY OR SOMETHING LIKE MYTHOLOGY POKEMON.
SORRY ENGLISH IS MY 2ND LAGUAGE AND IM STILL LERNING!

Pokemon: An Adventure
6 months ago

opolo: Just giving a review based on first chapter....

I will like it to be a little slow paced with huge character building and make sure he catches some good pokemon...maybe some legendary ones too...

also I would love it if he has any companions on journey too...don't make me feel this is not the pokemon world that I know of....Fan-fic is good as long it stays true to the original story...

Pokemon: An Adventure
6 months ago

Evilkingjoker: Very good........................................................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pokemon: An Adventure
6 months ago

opolo: Ok back after 8 chapters....It's a nice story...The MC is cute with a deep background story and a clear goal for now..

Story development is a little slow...but I like that.
Fight scenes are good but we need a little more info about the world time line....


And DONT DROP THIS

Pokemon: An Adventure
6 months ago
Reading Status: C8
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Don't drop this and make him collect Uber Psedudo Legendary or legendary Pokemon...

And make sure he is in Ash's timeline and let him beat up ASH's stupid ass. View More
Pokemon: An Adventure
6 months ago
Thanks for the chapter View More
Pokemon: An Adventure · C8
6 months ago
hahahaha View More

Veryice: I feel the system is female or mother to him 😅😅

Bewitching Eyes · C8
9 months ago
Reading Status: C4
Well, i can see that you are a newbie, but i hope that you can improve. The story looks a little cliche but i expect you to bring some uniqueness..

The character looks a little from what i expected after reading the synopsis but it is a good thing. I hope that instead of focusing on harem you will focus on developing a story View More
Bewitching Eyes
9 months ago
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