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This is a actually a good story, the characters development is better in time. Every character involved gt the flow how they start and how they end with. The only down on this book is how the author hv to repeatedly describe on every tiny detail of the particular situation that is not important , which make it drag it to more chapter than is supposed to be. Like how the fl gambling, or how and why the relative hate fl and her mother to the core and how fl is so good at gambling and martial art bcoz of her jade eye. We get it at the 1st time u explain it, no need to explain in every time in every chapter. It frustrating how the chapter should hv end within 3-4 chapters was drag on and on to almost 10 chapter. It too time and coin consuming. We pay for something that already know. Really hope author can be more focus on the story flow instead of tiny detail like that.