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Also i forgot to mention that we need a main problem, like what is the main problem? Her fears of men or that the female lead is a threat? View More

BlobMan: I read through this in like 15 minutes and I shocked at how good this was. I was surprised that this isn't more popular, but I'm sure if you keep in with the updates you would be able to make this popular since I believe right now all you need is time. For the reason why I gave the Character design 4 stars is because we can see that the Female Lead's background is thoroughly designed but we still cannot confirm her "true" personality yet(Like her views and ideas on her future and her environment, etc). And the fact that the other characters aren't fully developed yet since what we need is some fillers right now on the characters and environment(Like the politics in the Kingdom right now) and if she is going to meet a noble(or common) lady as a friend. Usually, we see in these villainess transmigrations is politics and the situation they're in, but right now she doesn't seem too worried even though she has a bad end and the FL right now would usually be gaining powers instead of watching their fates unfold. I understand that this may focus on romance more but other topics are equally important, you don't need to develop too much into politics but in these situations, with nobles, politics are definitely needed. I understand that the FL might be scared but here you can add in a character development of overcoming fears and becoming stronger. But overall this is very good and would be even better if you would just address some of the smaller issues. I have high expectations for this novel but don't feel pressured because what the audience wants is quality over quantity. So take it at your own pace, omg I've been typing for 10 minutes. ANYWAYS ahem it would be good if you would please address some of these issues in my opinion, like maybe edit the earlier chapter and add it in. Tbh just do what you want because only when you do that it will be your style with your own uniqueness. uh what else,... Good Luck then!

1 year ago
Reading Status: C10
I read through this in like 15 minutes and I shocked at how good this was. I was surprised that this isn't more popular, but I'm sure if you keep in with the updates you would be able to make this popular since I believe right now all you need is time. For the reason why I gave the Character design 4 stars is because we can see that the Female Lead's background is thoroughly designed but we still cannot confirm her "true" personality yet(Like her views and ideas on her future and her environment, etc). And the fact that the other characters aren't fully developed yet since what we need is some fillers right now on the characters and environment(Like the politics in the Kingdom right now) and if she is going to meet a noble(or common) lady as a friend. Usually, we see in these villainess transmigrations is politics and the situation they're in, but right now she doesn't seem too worried even though she has a bad end and the FL right now would usually be gaining powers instead of watching their fates unfold. I understand that this may focus on romance more but other topics are equally important, you don't need to develop too much into politics but in these situations, with nobles, politics are definitely needed. I understand that the FL might be scared but here you can add in a character development of overcoming fears and becoming stronger. But overall this is very good and would be even better if you would just address some of the smaller issues. I have high expectations for this novel but don't feel pressured because what the audience wants is quality over quantity. So take it at your own pace, omg I've been typing for 10 minutes. ANYWAYS ahem it would be good if you would please address some of these issues in my opinion, like maybe edit the earlier chapter and add it in. Tbh just do what you want because only when you do that it will be your style with your own uniqueness. uh what else,... Good Luck then! View More
1 year ago
Again, Genus-> Genius View More
In One Piece as Zoro · C0
1 year ago
Btw again, genus-> Genius View More
In One Piece as Zoro · C0
1 year ago
How does the system even sleep anyways? View More
In One Piece as Zoro · C0
1 year ago
Author, you should try using Grammarly, also Genus -> Genius View More
In One Piece as Zoro · C0
1 year ago
Che, if this guy can talk and make Rose blush why was he still a virgin View More
In One Piece as Zoro · C0
1 year ago
Pffff, this system is too funny! Usually, it's the host mistreating the system but this time the system got its revenge! View More
In One Piece as Zoro · C0
1 year ago
I want to see a chill OP character who knows about the world View More
An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods - TDG Fanfic · C71
1 year ago

JammC: No harem please, lemme explain why I do want harem
First it'll be a mess.
One women is hard enough to handle as we can see how insecure the wifey already is then imagine the women multiplied!
Second how would their daughter feel about this, she has one mom then all of the sudden another women comes in and wants her to call her mom!
Third it'll create a power struggle with the women, it is unrealistic for the women to all get along and the most realistic situation isbfor them to fight for power in the house and have a pecking order
Fourth how would the servants and disciples feel about this, the first wife knows then and gets along well with then but then another wife comes in and makes the first wife unhappy I dont think they would like the second wife
This is just my reasoning you can write what you think best author

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C73
1 year ago

KillerHemboy: Thanks for reading anyway, sorry you didn't like it.

World Domination System
1 year ago
Pfff instead of Mr and Mrs Li buying him a house he turned the tables and is buying them a house View More
Treasure Hunt Tycoon · C711
1 year ago
HAHA JUST WAIT UNTIL THEY SEE ZHANG YE'S DESIGNED DRESS
THE NETIZENS WERE SHOOK
THE MEDIA WERE SHOOK
THE COMPANIES WERE SHOOK View More
I’m Really a Superstar · C1291
1 year ago
scissors? really? I'm worried for your future child Jay View More
Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top · C34
1 year ago
There a typo in the last sentence "Li, I am ruined by you rascal! Compensate for my sunshine and beautiful ladies! Compensate FOR my warm holiday!" View More
Treasure Hunt Tycoon · C690
1 year ago

Yuuu: I have a question! How long ZY streaming already??

I’m Really a Superstar · C1277
1 year ago

Maite04149: This Zhang Ye, I wonder what he's going to do next. Will he break the server with all the views he's getting? If so, that would be hilarious!😂😂😂😂

I’m Really a Superstar · C1277
1 year ago

trixiee: Zhang Ye and Zhang Xuan both wrecking havoc on korea and Ancient Domain. The zhangs are godly

I’m Really a Superstar · C1277
1 year ago

Yami_Yumyum: Lmao... Usually when someone said 'I'm your father' it's a mockery... To be able to use this sentence in real situation is so funny... Darn kid have no manners just coz he's an Obocchama... Anyway, thanks for the chapter Translator Sama!!

A Valiant Life · C300
1 year ago

Kiroza: This has to be the first time i seen the line "I am your father" used literally instead of an insult in a chinese novel. Best scene ever

A Valiant Life · C300
1 year ago
Lil' Ye is such a good friend View More
I’m Really a Superstar · C1264
1 year ago
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