Kzar

3yr

Commented

Finally someone who don't hide his name 😆😆😆

Hide his name? He just fought for almost a whole day! Let the world know about what he did!

Kzar

3yr

Replied to Angry_Sheep

I forgive you 😜

[Physical Defense: 53]

Kzar

3yr

Commented

Feel, as if most employees would be female ones... 😉

"Stop eating canned food; tonight let’s eat a fresh meal! For celebrating my first employee." Jiang Chen laughed and dashed into the kitchen, filled with an overwhelming amount of joy.

I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World

Sci-fi · Morning Star LL

Kzar

3yr

Replied to DensyCloudy

It's correct, I completely forgot this rule, my bad.

"Didn't saw your faces right...I believe you." He then pulls out some sort of paper from his cloak and shows the paper to them. It was both of the men wanted posters.

Kzar

3yr

Replied to DensyCloudy

First off : Subordinates : the two thiefs actually call him boss, which make them his subordinates; If you tell me about my error on "subordonates" instead of "subordinates", then the letter "I" is just left to "O". Typping mistakes happen you know. Morever I use a french keyboard which mean I don't have access to auto-correction. Morever I don't really mind grammaticals errors when I'm typping. It's different in a book tho. Second : Past events : I'm talking about the context, they were talking about what happened in the Past : some guardsmen "saw" them. Wich mean that "Saw" is correct because it's the "Past". Thirdly : Well I didn't knew about sarcasm grammatical rules. And if that's true then I'm glqd to learn it. Thought, I'm not sure about that because the context is still : "What happened in the past" which mean "Saw" can be correct.

"Didn't saw your faces right...I believe you." He then pulls out some sort of paper from his cloak and shows the paper to them. It was both of the men wanted posters.

Kzar

3yr

Replied to DensyCloudy

It's a past event and he also repeat the sentence of his subordonates.

"Didn't saw your faces right...I believe you." He then pulls out some sort of paper from his cloak and shows the paper to them. It was both of the men wanted posters.

Kzar

3yr

Replied to DensyCloudy

Not sure about this tho...

"Didn't saw your faces right...I believe you." He then pulls out some sort of paper from his cloak and shows the paper to them. It was both of the men wanted posters.

Kzar

3yr

Replied to Mudd

I also did some errors here and here tho its sad :'( like ponctuation (forgot one ", ") and possisiv (daughter' "s" daughter) maybe more that I hadnt notice but, I wanted to confuse ppl more 😜

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Divinity: Against the Godly System

Games · Demonic_angel

Kzar

3yr

Commented

I just have a question tho, in the first chapter, he already had some stats in the ring [Lyon] wich where better than the stats he actually got, what happenned to thouse stats ?

ch 0 6 Creation

Kzar

3yr

Replied to Sadarsa

True

"Tell me more about this Destroyed Era? What happens."

Kzar

3yr

Replied to ExChaser

I don't find the grammar "that horrible" it's pretty greet I think... But well maybe you edited your chapter so idk ?

ch 0 3 World of Acres

Kzar

3yr

Commented

Wtf is wrong with all of u dudes. Its just a question of viewpoint in reality, doesn't really matter if you say you are reincarnated, morever the dude must be bored as hell and can't do anything, he pretty much don't care already.

I explain my story to Vicar as he listens to it. He says that reincarnation does exist in this world, but according to history, it happened 100 thousand years ago. People call it the Destroyed Era because that were when most of the human died fighting the Demons and the destruction of the world.

Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

Fantasy · ExChaser

Kzar

3yr

Replied to HolyStick

Same here ^^

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Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

Fantasy · ExChaser

Kzar

3yr

Commented

Lmao everyone talk about robbers but I found this situation pretty hilarious, good job autor, you did come up with something original 😆👍

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Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

Fantasy · ExChaser

Kzar

3yr

Replied to

You forgot that it's not the paternal grandfather, but the friends of his mother's dad who'd a granddaughter whose mother was like an aunt to her mother's dad grandson of his bestfriend namely the cohabitant of his daughter daughter. Do you get it now ?