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Oh, he understands the importance of kindness when holding too much power. Else, it's a very slippery slid down the various degrees of psychopathy and sadism. View More
Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4 · C67
7 hours ago

Polkageist: I have to be honest author, I really don't like this chapter. I almost hate how this chapter turned out, but let me explain why, instead of just hating on the chapter.

You see, I usually don't like romance in novels, because 9/10 times, I feel like the authors don't develop the romantic feelings or relationships in good ways. And sadly, I don't think you developed Gaara's feelings for Yui well in this instance either.

I saw your comment about love at first sight, and let me tell you, you don't just suddenly fall in love with someone at first sight. Sure, LUST or ATTRACTION at first sight are totally real and tangible things, but they're not love, and it seems a lot of people confuse these different emotions. It takes longer to develop any kind of meaningful romantic feelings for someone else, not just a few days. I don't think there's any real basis for Gaara to be this deeply hurt in this situation.

Sure, he could be upset at the development, and regret killing Yui, but there's no way he would be this devastated. There has simply not been enough time to develop these kinds of feelings you give Gaara.

To me it feels like you did this to twist Gaara in some way. Maybe he'll keep this in mind and cooperate with the Land of Snow/Spring due to a guilty conscience. Maybe this will motivate him to train even harder, so he can protect everyone he loves in the future. Whatever your reasons are, I still don't like this chapter, and this forced development. It just seems so forced and cheap to me. You're better than some cheap forced relationship for plot twists.

In any case, I'll still read your story. I won't lie and say I'm not disappointed in this chapter, but I still like your story too much for me to just drop it. And you still have my support with your story, despite my negative review.

I just hope we won't see something like this again. Almost everyone hates this kind of plot development, so I don't see any reason to use it.

I'd like to hear your opinion on my points, and maybe an explanation or reason for your decisions in this chapter, if it won't spoil future chapters.

Have a nice day author.

Gaara · C88
1 day ago

Flammenwurfer: Wait a second. This Lost Immortal Sutra seems perfect for Zhou Wen. It automatically circulates itself, and he can just spend his time gaming all day while also reaping the benefits of cultivation!

Let Me Game in Peace · C34
2 days ago

KONO_DIO_DA: Zhou Wen: Alright time to sleep.

Sleep Paralysis Demon: To be, or not to be, that is the question:
Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
Or to take arms against a sea of troubles
And by opposing end them. To die—to sleep,
No more; and by a sleep to say we end
The heart-ache and the thousand natural shocks
That flesh is heir to: 'tis a consummation
Devoutly to be wish'd. To die, to sleep;
To sleep, perchance to dream—ay, there's the rub:
For in that sleep of death what dreams may come,
When we have shuffled off this mortal coil,
Must give us pause—there's the respect
That makes calamity of so long life.
For who would bear the whips and scorns of time,
Th'oppressor's wrong, the proud man's contumely,
The pangs of dispriz'd love, the law's delay,
The insolence of office, and the spurns
That patient merit of th'unworthy takes,
When he himself might his quietus make
With a bare bodkin? Who would fardels bear,
To grunt and sweat under a weary life,
But that the dread of something after death,
The undiscovere'd country, from whose bourn
No traveller returns, puzzles the will,
And makes us rather bear those ills we have
Than fly to others that we know not of?
Thus conscience does make cowards of us all,
And thus the native hue of resolution
Is sicklied o'er with the pale cast of thought,
And enterprises of great pitch and moment
With this regard their currents turn awry
And lose the name of action.

Let Me Game in Peace · C34
2 days ago
I wonder about how those organs' means of assault. View More
Let Me Game in Peace · C32
3 days ago
If it were me, I'd think twice about pairing Kazuki with my daughter. While he's indeed excellent, he is probably not going to live a peaceful, safe life. View More

PixelKid: Way to to mother in law xD

The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C136
3 days ago

PixelKid: Way to to mother in law xD

The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C136
3 days ago
Red string is for a fated one, isn't it? View More
The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C135
4 days ago
Sure...why not? At least all the slaps one inevitably earns afterwards will be hilarious. View More

DaoOfTheLonely: Wow, that seems legit! But before I try it, I have a few questions. I've heard rumors about this website, can it really stop erectile dysfunction? Will it truly make me taller and increase my dick size? Can it actually teach me how to be irresistible to women?

Let Me Game in Peace · C15
1 week ago

Tagnk: Well this exam will decide his future and even if he wouldn't need that. I would feel bad using my newly acquainted family connections and hi father put the date of marriage on the same date. Fuck he even forgot that his son isgraduating this year...

Let Me Game in Peace · C13
1 week ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Summoner Sovereign · C298
1 week ago

Ryouha: ...uh oh

The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C122
1 week ago
Prime blackmail material. View More
The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C120
1 week ago
Contemplating the use of a shield too heavy to carry with any ease. Is mobility too trivial? View More

Plato: He struggled to carry the metal shield and then struggled on the same level with the wooden shield. Do they weigh the same?

Transmigrated Into a Fantasy World as a Paladin · C0
2 weeks ago

Plato: He struggled to carry the metal shield and then struggled on the same level with the wooden shield. Do they weigh the same?

Transmigrated Into a Fantasy World as a Paladin · C0
2 weeks ago
He's going to a forest, no? He may not have the space to swing a long weapon, but it is certainly a safer choice for a beginner, against beasts that is. View More
Transmigrated Into a Fantasy World as a Paladin · C0
2 weeks ago
Well, sometimes people treat those who truly matter worse than the way they treat strangers. View More

kelpshake: Gaara treats a stranger better than his sister lol

Gaara · C85
2 weeks ago

Primordial_Phoenix: Yeah and you would think that this Gaara would have enough brain power to try and dodge instead of giving up when anything gets slightly difficult

Gaara · C84
2 weeks ago
About time. I reckon anyone who's actually known both of the cousins and knows better than choosing junk food for a lifetime, should develop a preference for Autumn over Brooke. View More
Cultivator in a Zombie Apocalypse · C65
2 weeks ago
They're high school students with the ability of average elementary 6 graders, more or less. Reading web novels should still be within their ability. View More

Vigilantly_Gone: They can read?!?!

The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C112
2 weeks ago
So.. Aoki is the one locking the door? View More
The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C106
2 weeks ago
That's Japan, I think. View More

m2lk: guilty until proven innocent, was that how the British courts worked?

A Bend in Time · C12
2 weeks ago
He could eat metals, right? Next evolution: car - house - mountain - town - city - metropolis - country - continent - planet. View More

BluebellBerry: I expect him to catch and filet a kraken lol

Superstars of Tomorrow · C448
3 weeks ago

BluebellBerry: I expect him to catch and filet a kraken lol

Superstars of Tomorrow · C448
3 weeks ago
I hope he will get his catastrophic low wisdom healed. View More

equinx13: I hope he will get his eyes healed. :<

Fire Emblem: The Lion's Blade · C3
3 weeks ago

oscar1234: stupidity at its finest

Fire Emblem: The Lion's Blade · C3
3 weeks ago

Laxus_D: Let me get this straight, Did you choose lose an eye for the sake of aesthetics?

Fire Emblem: The Lion's Blade · C3
3 weeks ago

Sandwhich: Really?

The Sword Deity in Tokyo
4 weeks ago
👌😃 Priceless moment. No malevolent ghost can compare to the sheer horrifying rabid passion of fan girls. View More
The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C88
4 weeks ago

HanRyang5: Some other ladies in the background:
"Hey, don't you think this two swords boys ship well together??"

Fujos' uprising!

The Sword Deity in Tokyo · C86
4 weeks ago
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