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Galdaen

Galdaen

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2018-04-18 Joined United States

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Galdaen
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I like the authors use of logic. It is very refreshing and makes the world feel more coherently bound by rules even though it is fantasy. I can slightly sympathize with the previous paragraphs lengthy comment because it does seem like, with as much logic that not only the author has put into the story, but the main character uses as well, that the oversight of a rational plan in the face of obvious coming of events is frustrating. I appreciate the logic of the space ring or the struggle the MC has with the border, but it would have been nice to have an internal monologue going over the chain of events beforehand. For example, before he leaves the sect, have him think of the plan in his head and the problems that will occur, like reentering the territory that is guarded by an enemy sect. And by the end of it have the MC come to the conclusion of "well, I need to get this done as fast as possible for my disciple, so there will be unavoidable risks. I'll just have to go for it". Maybe that will take away too much of the suspense, but having the MC take a few L's will make him seem more human, and hide other instances of plot armor behind "luck". So i guess what my recommendation would have been for this is potentially have him fail to acquire the ingredient and some close call event happen, or something with a more definite loss. now that may yet happen, but if i skip this comment and move on to read more, i will forget to come back to leave a comment. take this with a grain of salt. TLDR, I love the logic being applied to these tropes. keep on keeping on.

Sadly, such things required a Domain Lord to use his domain to carve out a part of space and bind it together with something like a bag or a ring.

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

Galdaen
Commented
you telling me i can think of a thousand boobas at once now?

*Your thought process has evolved. You have learned the skill 'Thousand Thoughts'*

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Games · Galanar

Galdaen
Commented
One might say he needs to kill 1000

"That is a good amount. You will need to kill many dire wolves to get that many souls." The old mage said, his face scrunching a little.

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Games · Galanar

Galdaen
Commented
this bipolarism and hypocrisy is giving me whiplash.

"Is that so? But don't worry, I don't mind if you really fall in love with my nephew. As long as you're an obedient wife, of course."

Returning From The Magic World

Returning From The Magic World

Urban · Dark_Crow1111

Galdaen
Commented
This author needs an editor. But not to correct some of his mistakes and check grammar, but to tell him to stop writing.

She had already seen how flames appeared above his palm, how something like taming a wild tiger could stun her.

Returning From The Magic World

Returning From The Magic World

Urban · Dark_Crow1111

Galdaen
Commented
... I don't think this author talks to people much. Something tells me he is extremely inexperienced with every type of human contact. Someone please give him a hug.

Bella was silent for a while and then she laughed, holding her stomach to keep the sound from spreading too far. She said "you seem to think of yourself as a boss, good, I like that, if you are, then I don't mind being even your mistress!"

Returning From The Magic World

Returning From The Magic World

Urban · Dark_Crow1111

Galdaen
Galdaen
Commented
If my priest started healing the enemies, I would rage quit

She had an A level talent—[Overhealing] (When healing the opponent, she could increase the opponent's spell strength by 50%. When attacking, she could increase her spell damage by 30%). With her talent, even if she did not become a full-time priest and became a mage, she could still go far.

Online Game: You Call Him A Newbie?

Online Game: You Call Him A Newbie?

Games · I'm Nine Barrel

Galdaen
Commented
where's the "could not help but" counter?

As he read through the notifications, Valyr could not help but let out a light chuckle. "I guess I have no choice but to stick with this spear for real. As long as I get to the 3rd bond level, the fact that it's a basic wooden spear wouldn't even matter more."

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

Games · TrueDawn

Galdaen
Commented
this roundabout way of talking is so dumb. it almost feels like its an insult to the readers. hopefully this changes.

"It's the only thing she can do aside from leveling up and upgrade her skills." Valyr nodded, a light smile appearing on his face.

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

Games · TrueDawn

Galdaen
Commented
He should have assigned all points to INT. Lord knows he needs it.

"Since the variant class needs me to both have a high DEX and INT, then it's no surprise as to how I'm allocating," Valyr muttered as he allocated five points each to both stats. Soon, he opened up his status screen in his peripheral vision, whistling in admiration as he subconsciously hastened his pace from excitement.

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

Games · TrueDawn

Galdaen
Galdaen
Galdaen
Galdaen
Replied to Sable_Vitae
look at the paragraph between this one, and the paragraph that says slightly less then 8. it says "after reaching 8"

Max exhaled the breath he was holding in. He was satisfied with his result as his affinity turned out to be higher than the rest of the successors. But at the same time, he was a little disappointed as it couldn't reach eight meters.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

Galdaen
Replied to CannotSayNo
watch how well that works out for him

And that would not be all. More importantly, he'd have to reveal the reason how his abilities had increased by so much that he could fell a Golem like that.

Solo Leveling(Only I Level Up)

Solo Leveling(Only I Level Up)

Urban · 추공 (Chugong)

Galdaen
Galdaen
Commented
that's a flag bro. keep your mouth shut

After all, it was not as if he had not read thousands of cultivation novels in his previous life. Every time the main character went to the Scripture Storage Pavilion, the treasure vault, or even the garbage dump, there would definitely be good stuff hidden in places like this.

Cultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited Duration

Cultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited Duration

Eastern · Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope

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