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grootsroots: "I have to go back I've got to atleast* save some of the idiots like my brother.

"I'll call you before my flight tomorrow if you're* still awake that is.

"She still needed* to pack all of her belongings.

"A shiver crawled up Lilly's spine as she took* a shortcut.

Revenge of the Lily · C1
1 month ago

grootsroots: "I have to go back I've got to atleast* save some of the idiots like my brother.

"I'll call you before my flight tomorrow if you're* still awake that is.

"She still needed* to pack all of her belongings.

"A shiver crawled up Lilly's spine as she took* a shortcut.

Revenge of the Lily · C1
1 month ago
Can you point out the spelling errors for me? It will drive me nuts if I can't fix them. Also thanks so much for the feedback I really appreciate it! View More

grootsroots: Albeit having some spelling errors I think if you use and refer back to it as a traumatic and defining moment it'll work out.

Revenge of the Lily · C1
1 month ago

grootsroots: Albeit having some spelling errors I think if you use and refer back to it as a traumatic and defining moment it'll work out.

Revenge of the Lily · C1
1 month ago

Kaizer_Vermilion: I'm worried Zhao Feng might become Danzo from Naruto xD

King of Gods · C1078
3 months ago
I sincerely hope not, kind of attached to the snake now. View More

MistDemon: The black snake will die fighting the falcon Ruler? It seems like the situation should be somewhat like that

Versatile Mage · C382
5 months ago
If the snake dies, I'ma be really sad. View More
Versatile Mage · C382
5 months ago

Lancron: The death toll in this story is too darn high

Versatile Mage · C382
5 months ago
Double chapter cause I've been slacking! View More
It's Prehistoric Baby · C7
5 months ago
Also from the same book
" But Juveniles were probably faster as they had longer shinbones compared with their thighbones, and the proportionately longer the shinbone is, the better suited an animal is to sprinting." - Dinosaurs The Grand Tour, by Keiron Pim pg 323 paragraph 6 View More
It's Prehistoric Baby · C6
5 months ago

Lady_Serpent: This story caught my attention quick!! I love it! It’s different from usual stories! Please update more chapters! I honestly love where the story is headed and it’s ingenious!

It's Prehistoric Baby
6 months ago

Amygdalusnana: This is a pretty unique time/space travel with an unruly FL. She's got an obedient PET T-REX named KITTY! 😂😆 It's still just beginning, but it got a good start.

It's Prehistoric Baby
6 months ago

Luna1998: Nice start😀

It's Prehistoric Baby · C1
6 months ago
Actually I accidentally posted an incomplete chapter with like 5 sentences and then quickly deleted it. So It may have been that. Sorry! View More

Amygdalusnana: I thought I saw a blue dot next to this just now, was it only my wishful imagination? :(

It's Prehistoric Baby · C4
6 months ago

Amygdalusnana: I really like your novel. 😊 It's very different from the usual time/space travel, going to a place with dinosaurs. Hoping to read more of it in the future. 😀

It's Prehistoric Baby · C4
6 months ago

Amygdalusnana: I thought I saw a blue dot next to this just now, was it only my wishful imagination? :(

It's Prehistoric Baby · C4
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Perfect Secret Love: The Bad New Wife is a Little Sweet · C957
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
My Master Disconnected Yet Again · C17
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
My Master Disconnected Yet Again · C17
6 months ago

Draconax: THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT.

IF YOU WANT TO GET TO THE REVIEW, SKIP THIS PARAGRAPH. First, I would like to say that this novel deserves a higher rating than it currently has. Why? Because several people have left one-star reviews, claiming that the other novel in the "What's Next" section had more reviews. This is not true! Also, the original novel is NOT DROPPED. These rumors have been propagated by one single user who has also been leaving hate comments and abuse. Now, onto business.

Overall Summary: I've only read to chapter 10, the latest chapter released, but it seems pretty good so far. The basic premise is that there is a character, named Lin Yun, living during the apocalypse. It's a magic world, but they used up all of the mana, and now there is none left, and their world is ravaged by disasters. The main character is originally from Earth. However, this seems unneeded as it is not relevant to the story in any way as far as I can tell. Lin Yun is struck by a mysterious phenomenon, causing them to transmigrate into the body of one Mafa Merlin, a 9th Rank Magic Apprentice. Mafa belongs to a trading company called the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce, and is very wealthy. However, his father was with their fleet of ships transporting several extremely valuable goods when a storm struck and sunk the fleet, killing his father and bankrupting the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce. Artemis Fowl, anyone? Now, creditors are coming to collect, but Mafa has no money to give them. Lin Yun, however, retains the knowledge of his two past lives, and is aware of several advanced techniques that would not exist for centuries, allowing him to advance into a 1st Rank Mage. And I can't reveal any more without spoilers! Yay!

Translation Quality: 5/5: Not much to say here. Good grammar, slightly odd sentence structure, but that could be more due to the original style than the translator's style. Thanks for translating this, Shiraishi!

Stability of Updates: 5/5: This one I can't really judge, since we haven't had any updates, but the original mass release (10 chapters) was enough to get a basic idea of the storyline, and apparently there will be 14/Chapters per Week, or 2/Chapters per Day. Thanks for translating, again, Shiraishi!

Story Development: 2/5: Unfortunately, I'm going to have to give this one a 2/5. Why? Because there's not really a plot. Yes, I am perfectly aware that I have only read 10 chapters and that there is probably an actual plot. Here's the problem. The MC is insanely OP. He's aware of advanced techniques, looks like an alchemy genius, and so forth. That's the problem with so much future knowledge. Additionally, there is so much FACE-SLAPPING! Like, so much of it. It's the equivalent of... let's imagine you're in a technology competition. There's a really rich kid competing with you who has gotten this far on money alone. But now, he has to compete based solely on his skill... and he produces the technology needed to go faster than lightspeed. This is through no fault of your own, the problem is that the kid is from the future and knows how to build stuff that comes in several centuries. Do you see the problem? Now, let's say the... government wants his stuff. Unfortunately, the kid can also build giant mechas, plasma cannons, interstellar ships, and even technology that can stop a nuke. That's what the equivalent of this is. There's not going to be much of a plot because the MC is just THAT OP.

Character Design: 4/5: This one's a bit hard to judge, since we've only seen about five different characters, including the MC. The MC himself is not that well-developed so far, but it's sort of funny to watch him drool over really common items since they don't exist far into the future. Going back to our earlier example, it's like the kid drooling over seeing a piece of wood. Maybe trees don't exist in the far future! Then, we have Raymond, the son of the old caretaker/housekeeper. He's a 5th Rank Mage who gets face-slapped by the MC. Then, Raymond is all, OMG, you're amazing, I'm gonna follow you around. He ends up getting amazing (to him) rewards from the MC, but the sad part is that the MC doesn't even notice... next comes the "uncle." Have you ever seen that trope where the family relative tries to take the MC's stuff after the parents die? Yeah. That's him, and he's the main reason that Character Design is losing a star.

World Background: 5/5: Again, not much so far, but it's pretty well developed. It's a world called Noscent, and personally, I think the whole, "running out of mana" thing is very interesting. The ranking system goes like this: Magic Apprentice --> Mage --> Great Mage --> High Mage --> Archmage. They have something similar for other jobs as well, like Alchemist. In the beginning, we also get some fun background info about what wrecked the world, and later in the book, about other cities and countries, and so forth.

Overall, this is pretty good, but there is likely to be a lot of face-slapping and MC being OP, so if you don't like this sort of thing, don't read it! I can't speak as to romance because we haven't even seen any female characters yet, so I don't know if there is romance. Also, Shiraishi is a very good translator! Thanks! I personally am going to keep reading this. Upvote this comment if you liked it so that more people can get ACTUAL reviews and not just random five-star or one-star reviews.

End of the Magic Era
6 months ago
This cliff hanger literally hurt me, I'ma go cry now. The addiction has grown too much View More
Zombie Sister Strategy · C198
7 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Rebirth of the Female Antagonist: XUANRONG · C76
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Rebirth of the Female Antagonist: XUANRONG · C72
8 months ago

YingFingerMusa: Lol nah it's still evolving....one day it will become a true blue dragon !!!

Zombie Sister Strategy · C146
8 months ago

minmin26: And then another animal comes after the turtle.. hahaa

Zombie Sister Strategy · C146
8 months ago
Carp with legs.... Magikarp has reach its final form! View More
Zombie Sister Strategy · C146
8 months ago

Zwei90: Let's get down to business, to defeat the Guards
Did they send me True Lords, when I asked for Gods?
You're the saddest bunch I ever met
But you can bet before we're through
Mister, I'll make a God out of you

King of Gods · C623
8 months ago
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It's Prehistoric Baby · C1
9 months ago
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It's Prehistoric Baby · C1
9 months ago
Reading Status: C72
Honestly one of my favorite books so far, extremely interesting and exciting to read! The main character is amazing, I can't wait for future chapters ! View More
Zombie Sister Strategy
9 months ago
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