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The novel was decent and then it abruptly ends at 795. It is not actually completed, the Author drops the novel and finishes it with one chapter.

Yes lol. The only thing saving this mtl is the editor. This editor is putting in a lot of work, but that only makes it bearable, not good.

Review after chapter 217. Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks. Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance? Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech. Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion. This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!

I mean, it's weird, but not that bad. Truly a weird thing to do unless the main character and his family are not portrayed as very evil though.

I'm confused. What even was the name?

This was my sentiment after quitting at 512. I stayed much longer than I should have tbh. Waiting over 500 chapters for a glimpse is really not enough satisfaction. I can understand people liking it for the regression vrmmo side, but for the people that came in for the interaction with the real world, I'm assuming they were heavily disappointed.

Honestly, I just posted a review saying about the same thing. Scenes are drawn out for no reason; it's truly difficult to read until chapter 100 even when skimming. The first 80 chapters can probably be edited to end up being 30. This is something you should really consider doing but I doubt it will happen. On the note about drawing out scenes to make the MC look awesome, it actually just makes him look incompetent. Being awesome would be handling problems quickly and efficiently.

The story is a chore to read. So much unnecessary text that just ruins every single paragraph. Details are added that really offer nothing to the story. The flow of the story is also awful. For example,, extended back stories for simple things. There was a 6 chapter backstory about a situation that only needed 50 words within the first 60 chapters. Imagine how insane that is, 1/10 of the picture on a backstop that does not matter... Those chapters would have been better off used for info dumps or world building. My suggestion is to skim read because there is a lot of filler and the climaxes so far have been pretty lackluster. The grammar is decent, can definitely do with some work though. There are a lot of chapters though, so the author probably updates often and is consistent.

The English errors in the synopsis had me worried though. Have not read a chapter yet. How is the grammar looking?

Telling the parents is dumb, but I definitely get the rest of the point. At most you feel guilt, it makes no sense to meet random strangers and try to become their son as a grown man. Why would you even feel a need to do that unless you are really starved of love.

What is the name of the other novel?

Well put

Nothing is explained. The author just adds random stuff and assumes you will find a way to justify it. Especially the fight scenes; they make no sense. Descriptions of scenarios are lacking and then the author says something you know is impossible in the scenario and throws any image you had created or rationalized out the window.