Webnovel Author: LonelyChili - Novel Collection

Writing quality - It's fine, It's readable for me. Stability of Updates - Pending Story Development - So far, for me I like it, specially the prologue, it's interesting. Here's my two cents, I feel a vague tinge of hundreds of webnovels having a similar beginning like your story, Like MC facing a scenario or going into a "gate" with certain specific missions that he needs to do, we all know he is going to pass and complete that mission 90% sure, 10 percent is he is going to fail and suffer a specific penalty that is crucial plot to the plot. I still enjoyed it nonethless, I am waiting for the next chap to see. Character design - I can the type of MC who is a former douchebag who wants to redeem himself, not going to lie, I like this kind of MC, it reminds me of the second coming of gluttony, If done right, we will love the mc, if not, we might be more pissed at him because of the "shitty actions he did." and yes, I love fcking angst. AHAHAHAHA As for the second significant character that I remember is the Mad Plotter, He seems villainy but I feel like he's not. Just a thought. World background - I can see the influence korean webnovels. I like it, although I want for the author to explore the world more because I feel it's still empty. I know Author will deliver as long he continue writing. Here is my honest review. I don't mean to offend you in anyway, I added the story to my collection, hoping to see your progress as well.

I am giving myself 4 star because I think the last deserves to be given by readers. Anyhow, Author here, I am Lonelychili, I would like to offer gratitude to anyone going to read this webnovel, whenever if you liked this story or not, thank you for reading if you did ever read it. I would really appreciate if anyone commented, offered reviews even if it's critical. It would be helpful for my improvement as a writer. Once again, I shall offer a short summary of the direction of this story. An immortal guy created a species, that species will be the focus of the first volume, and every action of the immortal guy impacts the story, changing. You will notice as time goes, MC's involvement in the story will lessen because I believe that his character by itself literally the plot. Many characters will be introduced, some might die, some might even be forgetting, but all those characters will be linked to the MC is some way or form. You can say it's like Low Dimensional game and since the main inspiration of this story is literally Low dimensional game and the author's other works "I am God." thank you once again, have a nice day.