WaveringMoon

4h

Commented

honestly, you already pushed the chineese cultivation trope pretty hard.

Some of you are asking if the novel will move towards, cultivation, Chinese like novel. No, it won't.

WaveringMoon

5h

Commented

terrestarlize electric and balloon = laugh as opponet roars in frustration

Shedinja's ability 'Wonder guard' was a very good ability. With this ability, Shedinja was immune to any attacks that were not super effective.

WaveringMoon

1d

Commented

to be honest, her fate with minatobis... not good.

Kirito glanced at her, unlike what he remembered; she really had grown up. Become a beautiful girl with more charm. Because of this, it is of course impossible for Kushina to be with Namikaze Minato like the original.

After signing in for Ten years, Uchiha begged me to come out .

Anime & Comics · Sumit_Bhamer

WaveringMoon

5d

Commented

Cedric continued, "Only if the underground bunker gets broken into and you have no choice, will you fight. However, no need to be worried. The situation will never become that bad. Our defence lines will stay strong.

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972

WaveringMoon

8d

Commented

if you thought so. why you make mc pick torchic first?

Also, Mudkip is the best starter of all time. Don't even try to complain. Look at its adorable eyes and tell me there's a better starter than it.

Reincarnated as Brendan in Pokemon

Video Games · Delb

WaveringMoon

10d

Commented

when did you ever treat sev like a son?

"I'm your father, you damn Master! Release me immediately, otherwise…" Tobias shouted with extreme anger.

Good or Bad, Does it matter? (Harry Potter Fanfic)[TN]

Book&Literature · Lucifer09

WaveringMoon

15d

Commented

the first truthful statement he has said.

At this point, Professor Lockhart returned to center stage, and he gave a spirited speech, "It looks like the demonstration went very well, and I think you can't wait to - gosh, to cast spells as smoothly as the three professors, but don't be overly ambitious, you're nowhere near that level! You're not even close to that level!"

Harry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)

Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat

WaveringMoon

18d

Commented

honestly find these beginner gift packs to be overused.

System: "First as I told you my system is based on the original Pib boy setting but a little more powerful and for the beginner gift pack you got 20 S.P.E.C.I.A.L stats, 1000 caps, and 2 beginner skills of your choice."

Fallout 4: Rebirth At Vault 81

Video Games · Tang12

WaveringMoon

21d

Commented

for those saything this is dumb, do consider how many David's are there in the world. try finding the right david from among millions.

"What should be my username... meh, let's keep it David only."

VRMMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Necromancer

Games · AstridStorm

WaveringMoon

23d

Commented

yeah this is the lazy way to do it.

skip

Harry Potter: The combat instructor

Anime & Comics · AssClappicus

WaveringMoon

26d

Posted

will edit later, but first impressions is that the mc cannot stop his internal dialouge which seems to be endless.. ore interaction with other characters would be appreciated instead of reading a unending monolouge.

Harry Potter : Reborn as Hagrid

Book&Literature · Demonun

WaveringMoon

29d

Commented

this made Sherlock feel the need to be

This made Sherlock might need to be wary of Dumbledore.

(HP) I'm Only A Defense Against The Dark Arts Professor

Anime & Comics · Poka_Poka

WaveringMoon

1mth

Replied to H_Savariya

I agree, the pacing is very slow. that said the writing quality and continuity are both very good. such a relief to read something that is not mtl quality for once. at some point I think the author will speed up some things but this is a build up to a pretty critical turning point right now. that said, he is rehashing certain things over again a bit too much.

ch 66 Chapter 66: "Dumbledore's Recollection Part - 2"

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Book&Literature · TalesByJaz

WaveringMoon

1mth

Commented

"No, I'm busy!" Holly hid behind Harry.

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

WaveringMoon

1mth

Commented

and now author should make a second fanfic of this harry specifically

ch 153 Chapter 153: An unexpected gain

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

WaveringMoon

1mth

Commented

systems can be fun when they are done right. however most do not get it right and actively harm the story. I personally think systemless books are not only more interesting to read, they also have more staying power as well. too often I see with a system is that the mc becomes op super quickly. such as kage level before 10. which makes no real sense imo.

ch 0 2 The Great Bread Run

Naruto: Suna's Shinigami

Anime & Comics · Yrmynoodlescold

WaveringMoon

1mth

Commented

not taijustsu. too many people do this.

What kind of compact style should Kane focus on in the future? Jutsu, Close Combat, Genjutsu, Weapons?

NARUTO, Kushina's Brother

Anime & Comics · Cole_Bromley

WaveringMoon

1mth

Commented

the cloak isn't soundproof?

The Death Cloak does not just grant invinsibility. It eliminated sound and shut down any magical aura trapped within. This thing could trick even Death itself a couple of Goblin guards stood no chance at spotting me. I could literally twerk while singing the national anthem, and they would be none the wiser. I had no plans on doing so as that was ridiculous. Not to mention I would have to kill them if they did catch me in such a compromising position. Again, my fragile male ego just could not handle it.