ImmortalJamaican

Once my meeting with Alison and Fabian ended I went to a sandwich shop and got some lunch. It's been two years since I've had a New York Pastrami on Rye with mustard, and I ain't passing it up.

An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 A Boat Made out of Scraps

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Commented

Fking lame

"I'll choose the Sharpshooter class."

The Hunter's Guide to Monsters

Games · Jin_Daoran

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Posted

hope this book gets added back, it was really interesting....................................................................................

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Posted

I don't know if I'm not paying attention when reading but things keep popping up in chapters that weren't even mentioned before. The MC would get skills, equipment or would interact with someone out of nowhere without any mention in the previous chapters. if it's not me alone experiencing this then this novel is a joke.

Digging to Survive: I Can See Hints

Sci-fi · Sword Old Wolf

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Posted

it's a good novel to read but there are three problems. One, grammar isn't consistently good. Two a lot of chapters repeat themselves. Three the update of chapters is really slow.

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Commented

was hoping he would use a spear since that's what I saw on the cover pic.

Sword Technique

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Commented

why these people so pathetic after betrayal.

He had once been betrayed by people he trusted from the bottom of his heart in the past. At that time, he had felt as if his world had collapsed before his eyes and he no longer felt like doing anything; even leaving his room was a challenge every day... In the midst of all that sadness, pain, and desolation, his family was there for him; just as they had always been but he hadn't noticed.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Posted

It's frustrating to read this book. You can never figure out what's going on with the MC and his beasts. Every other chapter the name of the beast and their moves changes and the MC level is always fluctuating. You can never tell if he is in one level or the next. If you just want to waste time and don't really care about consistency of the novel go ahead an read it.

World of Beasts: I Can See Their Hidden Stats!

Fantasy · Darn You

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Commented

would appreciate it if you read your book while writing it. just saying

ch 29 Three Great Battle Beasts, Advancement To Silver-tier

World of Beasts: I Can See Their Hidden Stats!

Fantasy · Darn You

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Commented

To each his own but I really hate fanfics that takes powers that make you OP right away and being able to use powers from a whole different verse.

ch 0 1 1. Transmigrated

Ah really?

Anime & Comics · Ryan_Colman

ImmortalJamaican

2yr

Commented

She really creamed in the middle of a fight smh

Her eyes turned bloodshot as she glared at David. "I will kill you!" She creamed adm pointed towards him, sending the remaining two green vines after him after she had jumped down from the one she had been standing on.