DeJeL
Lv 5- Joined Apr 2018
- United States
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I really enjoy Isekai (In Another World) and similar stories.;,;. Author of "What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world".;,;.
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What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
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One day Dawson Sen was in a hurry to get to school and was nearly hit by a bus. However, when he looks to see the bus that almost hit him there was no bus, rather it was a rift in spacetime which appeared in its place. An entrance to another dimension, without being given a chance to investigate he is pulled into the portal. On the other side of the portal was... ---------- Chat with the author and get sneak previews: http://tiny.cc/DJLWNC (DJL=DeJeL... WN=WebNovel... C=Chat) A shout out to my cover's creator: yaoyueyi-Author of Power Up, Artist Yang! https://www.webnovel.com/book/11701767605489305/Power-Up%2C-Artist-Yang! A shout out to a fellow author who gave me a shout out in her synopsis: Ballisti-Author of God's and Glory https://www.webnovel.com/book/11206156105298305/Gods-and-Glory
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A Webnovel Poem Anthology
I decided to post some poems I've written and also will post most poems given by anyone, to find out how, read "Anthology Expectations" Please have fun reading these poems.;,;. __ Thank you silentscarlettt for the cover. Please check out her books: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11134602906265805/The-Wheel-of-Transmigration __ To chat with DeJeL and find other novels by DeJeL: tiny.cc/DJLWNC
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The Book of Many Authors
_ To help in the creation of this novel, read BOMA Explained chapter and go to https://tiny.cc/BOMA _ To chat with DeJeL and for a list of all novels by DeJeLr: http://tiny.cc/DJLWNC
Moments
And if I ever do drop this novel, replying to any comment I have sent letting me know that you are continuing it will get me to add it back into my list :-) View More
I Didn't Even Want to Live, But God Forced Me to Reincarnate! · C159
My Way To You · C0
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world. · C14
adamaefitch: Bloom where you are planted, and if it is within His perfect will and timing, you may be transplanted.
A Webnovel Poem Anthology · C39
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world. · C29
Hyowha: are you back now =)?
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world. · C25
lynerparel: good luck job hunting. :)
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world. · C25
GrandMooftiPubar: You make someone like me really happy to read something like this I haven’t read a book so detailed and beautifully placed and spaced out you make me so happy and I do the same I read this in class so I can get sent out just to read it I really care about this book and I hope it never ends it is such a great book and if this gets published like an actual book I will buy it hands down don’t care how much it is thank you sooooo much for making this book and again good luck
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world. · C25
ImBloo: Good luck
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world. · C25
Scarlettbunny: Ariana. I had it gifted to me 😀
My Way To You · C109
ursus010: Yes you are right. This was the classic definition of White Verse. I meant that it was prose in pose. There is such a genre. Something like - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetry.
New, interesting.A Webnovel Poem Anthology · C1
FleetingClouds: writing exams until the end of february, soo ... wait until then for more :)
How to Survive in a Isekai World [On Break] · C29
Technomancer: Genesis · C132
Sorcha Knight in the City · C51
Dejel(@)myself(.)com (remove the parentheses) View More
Godgiven: Your time and hard work is highly appreciated.
I think am gonna write something about my land too. Thanks for your inspirationA Webnovel Poem Anthology · C39
Godgiven: Your time and hard work is highly appreciated.
I think am gonna write something about my land too. Thanks for your inspirationA Webnovel Poem Anthology · C39
ursus010: Blank verse is a literary device defined as un-rhyming verse written in iambic pentameter. In poetry and prose, it has a consistent meter with 10 syllables in each line (pentameter); where, unstressed syllables are followed by stressed ones, five of which are stressed but do not rhyme. It is also known as “un-rhymed iambic pentameter.” - https://literarydevices.net/blank-verse/
A Webnovel Poem Anthology · C1
Objective complements: I saw no errors, in the little bit I saw the characters felt well-defined.
Constructive criticism: some would say it is to be expected, but I know what seems like absolutely nothing about the world yet. it is best to have some, even if it's very small, explanation of how the world works within the first few chapters. Multiple points of view Early in a story commonly kills the story, as it stands so far you're not an exception to this, one would likely have to be willing to read further in to possibly latch onto this story. I would suggest starting out for the first eight or so chapters with just one point of view, then only adding one extra point of you that you will use every three to five chapters until you have all the points of you you want.
Personal preference: either this is not an isekai or it is not showing to be an isekai as of yet, and has not for any other reason drawing my interest, so I will not be continuing to read this story.
Rating: SD 3/5 WB 4/5 Rest 5/5 View More
The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
At least the ones I call true friends :-) View More
williana96: I wish I have a besfriend like that
My Way To You · C99
Scarlettbunny: Yes. Actually working on it now. Hoping to start editing soon but it will come out today
My Way To You · C97
I don't know how it messed up like that. View More
DeJeL: OMG, I honestly forgot that was a flashback, to know that you're back to the extra story I remember what I was actually reading, LMAO :-)
Duality · C35
Duality · C35
Sorcha Knight in the City · C51
Dream Stage · C16
A traveler that changes the world · C32
existing: *draws circles in the corner* 😅😅 hahaha well, thank you for not dropping this!
White Queen Ascending · C22
