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  • The King's Crest *On Hold*

    The King's Crest *On Hold*

    Fantasy

    In the beginning, there was war and deceit and darkness. Then the gods stepped forward and gifted a few noble souls Crests. These Crests gave them the ability to rule over the people of Carinthia justly, and command authority and even magic against their foes. From these Crests emerged a leader, one whose Crest stood above all others, he was called King, and his successors have ruled prosperously since with their powerful Crest. Now, the King is dead. The Heir is missing. Those with Crests have fallen to war to be rewarded the King's Crest. Those without Crests can only hope that the victor is just and fair. From the ashes, the King's Crest shall rise once more. *Suspended for the foreseeable future*

  • The Masks We Wear *Discontinued*

    The Masks We Wear *Discontinued*

    Romance

    DISCONTINUED

  • The Monster Inside: The First Vampire

    The Monster Inside: The First Vampire

    Fantasy Vampire

    4.6

    Despite appearances, there was once a time where monsters did not exist. Where peace and prosperity reigned over all life. But those sinful and demonic forces that had hidden themselves in the shadows just couldn't help themselves could they? They wanted a peice of that prosperity too. They wanted to taint it, corrupt it, revel in its dark side. This is the story of a boy who was tainted. Of a boy who unintentionally bore a seed of sin and who in his naivety let it out. This is the story of how that boy was shamed and disgraced. Of how he was outcast for simply being. This is the story of how that boy learned to embrace the darkness that made him different. A darkness that would later make him known as the Lord of Night. *Updates 5 chapters a week Tuesday-Saturday. Following the release of Vol.2, Premium chapters will be available on chaptail.com for those who wish to show their support for the novel and get benefits for doing so.* *This story involves an MC who has to go through a lot of hardship before he changes his moral standing to become better and stronger. As such, please don't judge him too harshly until he makes it through this hard period, i.e. the first volume. Other than that enjoy!* *Credit goes to @Dionaea for the cover. Thanks for your hard work!* *To connect with me or see random updates for any of my current works, check out my Twitter @JeliMaxwell, or join my Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TkSxZQR. Would love to hear from you too! Whether it be fanart, predictions or just to say hi*

  • The Adjustment Project

    The Adjustment Project

    Romance

    Oh how cruel fate can be... For as long as she can remember, Mia has been stuck in the gilded cage of her rich family struggling to find a way out of the spotlight. For as long as she can remember, Jules has just wanted to find peace away from the ever increasing burdens of her orphaned life. Who would have thought they could somehow be each other's solution? But as it turns out, they can. When Mia and Jules discover that they are long lost twin sisters, Mia proposes a plan that might just change both their lives for the better... Why not just switch places? As the two of them grow closer together by living each others' lives, they can't help but find that in some ways, they fit better in the life that was not originally theirs. But who drew the two of them together in the first place? And what exactly do they hope to achieve through the sisters' reunion? And perhaps most concerning...what happens when someone discovers the twins' deception? *** *Releases are SLOW. 1 chapter a week on Friday.* *I do not own the Cover. Looking for volunteers to create one if possible*

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Ksbleek: This is an excellent story that I have enjoyed tremendously. You can feel that this was not written haphazardly but instead with care and passion that the writer had for the characters and story. I gave the story 4 stars for world development only because this is still the beginning of the story and I feel like there is still so much out there left to tell us. I hope you keep up the good work and dont let us wait to long to see how you continue to polish the characters and reveal to us the gems they become.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 week ago
Some of it has changed a little bit. The only major change I was making though was that Aegin's story was going to change slightly in the beginning to make where his story ended up more clear in terms of character arcs. That's not to say that minor changes won't effect the overall tone of the story as well. You'll just have to judge for yourself as I obviously can't put it all into this little reply box. View More

Chaoticmike: Is editing chapter has some type of different ending towards the last chapter or it just ends the same but more detail?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 week ago
Busy rewriting and editing first volume. Just over halfway done. The chapters with the * symbol are edited. You can reread over those to pass the time as there are changes to some aspects. But will release something in about a weekish depending on my writing speed. Thanks for your support😉 View More

Chaoticmike: Is it because of writing block or busy life issues?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 weeks ago
Well it's getting closer. More info soon View More

Chaoticmike: Nice picture change, though the last picture help me decide on how the mc would be looking like. But since you changed it does that mean your ready for more awesome release of your chapters from your novel?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 weeks ago
Thankyou for your support, I'm very happy has had such an impact on you. As for quidan...it's not really anything bad, they made an offer, the contract wasn't something I liked so I said I'd be willing to sign the contract if they changed tlpoints a, b & c. They verbally told me these points were leniant or didn't happen but didn't put it in a new contract so I refused to sign. Only thing I really lost from that was an income, but for someone whose dream it is to be an author, I get a lot more from the comments and reviews like this that tell me i'm doing a good job, so thanks again. View More

Darkquestion: For your information I'm 20 years old and its not that easy to woo me with any old book.


With that being said this is the best I've read...you know overlord? Well it got me just as invested in the main character and world development as that.


The first book is out(91 chapters) the chapters are long but go by fast because everything thats happening has you so absorbed.


Also, my guess is that the only reason the authors book isn't more well known and advertised on the site is to do with the fact that though quidan made some kind of offer to the author, I believe the author had turned them down after reading through the contract.

~(the author in the later chapters only politely mentioned that she had some small disagreements on the offer being put forth~everything else is my speculation)~

But trust me its one of the best books I've read, if I believe otherwise then let me be cursed! 

As for why I've rated it so perfectely? Well perhaps there are flaws but for a book to fully absorb me and have me loving it so much that I dont even notice them..what more could you ask for? There are no flaws that I've noticed, I enjoyed myself the whole way!

Thanks Author!

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
3 weeks ago

Darkquestion: For your information I'm 20 years old and its not that easy to woo me with any old book.


With that being said this is the best I've read...you know overlord? Well it got me just as invested in the main character and world development as that.


The first book is out(91 chapters) the chapters are long but go by fast because everything thats happening has you so absorbed.


Also, my guess is that the only reason the authors book isn't more well known and advertised on the site is to do with the fact that though quidan made some kind of offer to the author, I believe the author had turned them down after reading through the contract.

~(the author in the later chapters only politely mentioned that she had some small disagreements on the offer being put forth~everything else is my speculation)~

But trust me its one of the best books I've read, if I believe otherwise then let me be cursed! 

As for why I've rated it so perfectely? Well perhaps there are flaws but for a book to fully absorb me and have me loving it so much that I dont even notice them..what more could you ask for? There are no flaws that I've noticed, I enjoyed myself the whole way!

Thanks Author!

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
3 weeks ago
Hey. I admit I didn't see your previous message, but I am interested in a new platform like the one you describe. I read over the chapter on the link you gave me and while I would be interested I currently have 2 issues. The first is that I have no new chapters written as I'm in the middle of editing this first volume and have a fair bit of real world stuff going on at the moment which means there won't be any new chapters until about a month after you premium release date. I can release the current chapters but nothing more for a while. The other is that I was hoping to get a new cover, but haven't had the chance to look into it at the moment. View More

Sacredwisp: Hey ^-^, just wanted to let you know that I’ve released a platform for publishing novels online. I know I messaged you about a month ago so I hope I'm not too spammy. The platform is basically like WN except geared more towards the authors. It also has a built-in system to offer advanced chapters that’s somewhat of a cross between Patreon and Webnovel’s system, but it’s not mandatory, so you can just post regular chapters as well. There’s a little too much to explain here, so you can read about it over here if you’re interested https://chaptail.com/Novel/cqrAklLGQX4paGs9ESrn/Chapter/1. If you have any questions or comments, don’t hesitate to contact me, either by replying to this comment or by messaging @Dionaea#3402 on discord.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C24
1 month ago
Nah, the picture was something I found on the internet and I drew inspiration from it. Rassa has dark hair and eyes, but the rest of the look is pretty similar to how I imagine him View More

uudydhi: Sorry about this dumb question but are you telling me that the cover of this novel Is Rassa with bat wings and white hair.......For if it is I just have to give a tums up to your artist

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C83
1 month ago
Exception as its part of the unsealing. The part that was ripped off earlier isn't healed, just the damage done by the wings as they burst forth. View More

Whatareyoulooking: FINALLY GOD DAMM!
Werent the life lines impossible or really difficult to heal? Then why is he healing like its nothing? Someone clear my doubts pls.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C83
1 month ago
well she died, will fix in edit if there is something wrong View More

Chaoticmike: But it said she was critically injured

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C78
1 month ago
she did View More

Chaoticmike: But isn't the women suppose to die from it not live?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C78
1 month ago
It did. That's what I meant by 'foetus found a more direct route out of its womb' View More

Chaoticmike: Aren’t dhampir suppose to rip out the women’s stomach when they are about to be born?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C78
1 month ago
I've never claimed that. I'm doing my best but this is a first draft. When I go back and edit before releasing vol.2 I'll make improvements as much as I can. View More

bringthenight: Author claims to provide good character development, this has not happened, if anything he has degraded

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C48
1 month ago
Just turned 16 in this chap. Next chap will cover a 2 year time skip to just before he is unsealed. View More

Roguehunter: How old is he at the moment and how long till his awakening.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C76
1 month ago
Fair enough. View More

Phipsi: Yes it does. Thanks very much. That spin was just something spontaneous. I wrote it while i took the subway didn’t think too much just that I thought Rassa should have been able to learn scheming and as you wrote in the chapter he knew that he won’t be able to fight forever. I thought he would try to help himself in some way that may show success. Repeat: as he knows fighting won’t be successful.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C75
1 month ago
His feet are chained too View More

hadiex: Chapter 76 and still naive, why he didn't kill the girl.... Even at weak state and mask, he still have foot to strike the girl head.... If the mc stay this way you need "naive mc" and "tragedy" tag for this novel

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C76
1 month ago
Just with their own species, much easier with a human. Sorry if that wasn't clear before, will fix in editing. View More

AbyssalDragonKing: Is she is pregnant I will be extremely pissed....wait dont vampire have a hard time procreating or is that just with their own species?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C76
1 month ago
Rassa's are. It's different for every individual though View More

MagicGod: Umm, just to be clear, are all life lines located at their backs?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C14
1 month ago
It's just not what I imagine Rassa or Zaroth doing. It's like a really tense scene that you've interrupted and they seemed to just pause in their own bubble and go 'hey, let's make a deal'. As characters that I've made, I know that Zaroth is not in the least bit interested in making a deal, he just takes what he wants without regard for anyone else. Rassa knows this as well after all he's been through, so he knows the only way he's going to get out is by fighting. While what Rassa says to make the deal also makes logical sense, half of it is stuff that Zaorth isn't even aware of and Rassa is under no obligation nor desire to tell him. So in conclusion, it kind of sounds a little ridiculous that this scene would actually take place and hence comedic, though I'm sure if you wrote it with this in mind and added a little more detail towards Rassa's reasoning behind telling Zaroth or Zaroth reasoning for taking the deal then it might fit in better to the ******* I was trying to evoke in the scene. Hope that makes sense. View More

Phipsi: It doesn’t at all. I’m happy you take your time. I just can’t really understand what you mean with comedic. If you could eloberate on that pls.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C75
1 month ago
Not bad, not bad. Certainly impresses me that you took the time to include all the minute details. However, in my opinion, a little too comedic feeling for the current storyline. If I was taking that route though, it probably would have been somewhat similar. Thanks for your support (sorry if this offends you, it was not meant too, I really do appreciate your take) View More

Phipsi: Hy i made my own LITTLE spin on today’s chapter. I would be happy if you could read it.

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I imagine something along the lines like this:

After killing the mage. Rassa stood still and spoke:
„Wait! Lets make a deal!“
„You are in no Position to make a Deal!“ the doc laughed.
„Oh! I am! There can only come so many people through the door. I can kill them all! And if you starve me. I won’t be in a condition to have some fun. Hehe“
The doc was visibly frustrated.
„So what do you propose?“

„I make you a child with that who re and you won’t wake me up. I have to remind you I’m no longer human so what you will get will be a halfling. As a show of good will I tell you the name of the halfling race. It’s called a Dhampire. They grow up faster then normal humans. He will wake me up once he is an adult. A decade should be enough.“

„Tell me what do you gain by staying in that vegative state?“
„I won’t lose my sanity living in this whole for a decade.“
„It sounds like you think you ever get out of here“

„Obviously. I don’t grow while I’m sleeping as such my son will surpass me and he won’t fear me as his potential is just as high as mine.
Also it does pain me if I want I can deny my blood consumption and while I’m in sleep I’m dry as a sponge so you won’t get anymore of my blood.

And i don’t fear you killing me. Because what will happen if he catches a illness you can’t cure. You will need me. We are immune to light magic. So light magic can’t cure him. You will always need me! Hahahahaha“

While the doc was seriously thinking Rassa was laughing in his mind:
(„ the day he will be an adult will be the day he troughs the kingdom into anarchy and it will be the day I will get out of here! Hahahahahahaha!!!“)

„I will have to think about it.“
„No stress contact the duke and the king I have time.
But one thing I will promise you each way. That whore will die painfully during the birth. Hahaha!“


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Hy. This is my spin on today’s chapter. I thought that through all the time spent around the political memories he should have become a bit more clever and shimming.
While I do also know he doesn’t support anarchy. He is clever enough to know he won’t be able to stop them from reaching their traget of getting a heir And what it means to have a Dhampir on the throne.

But he should try to make the best out of this situation.


PLS TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF MY SPIN ON THE CHAPTER
and thanks as always for the daily chapter.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C75
1 month ago
Sorry about confusion. Rassa has just turned 16 here. If I mentioned 3 years I meant 3 years since his imprisonment at Jerrics which happened just after he turned 13 (end of Eldovian Era 1705, which means its now coming to the end of 1708). Sorry for confusion, will fix in edits. View More

Chaoticmike: 3 years left a big plot hole in the story unless he can explain certain things to cover up this story

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C71
1 month ago
18, when he turns 18. He is 14 in this chapter. Mostly time skips from now on View More

K1ra12066099: He doesn't have magic, he is just seeing through the memories how the other vampires used their magic, it is implied that he is 'sealed' right now and so he can't use magic but when he is 'unsealed' he will be able to use the magic. I think that is when he turns 15 years old.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C65
1 month ago

92424: This is what I've been waiting for keep it up

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C65
2 months ago
Pfft!🤭 Nah dude. Neither. Thanks for the laugh though 😉 View More

Genard: Yeah yeah tempering 😒... For me its just abuse. Or is the author/mc masochistic?😁✌️

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C65
2 months ago
See my comment in chp.64 View More

Sri101: How long will this arc last?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C65
2 months ago
I don't understand that either, but hey, I can't make everyone happy. This is the story that I'm writing, and unfortunately I imagined Rassa going through some dark sh*t before he really starts his life as a Vampire. A happy, positive thinking kid who is loved by all doesn't just become a Lord of Night spontaneously. But, like I said, can't please everyone. View More

PayDay: So far I'm disliking this arc purely out of disgust for child torture. I don't understand how it can be thought that Rassa is a Bch just because he can't fight back.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C65
2 months ago

Nourah1999: It's a nice novel . I like it's development and the plot is great. I've read the chapters at least twice and I enjoyed reading it even on the second time . 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😍😍😍😍😍

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 months ago
The volume will end in just over 30 more chapters disclosed over the next 4-5 weeks or so. By "dark" arc I'm assuming you mean his imprisonment...That does not last that whole time View More

Salexez: Thanks for the chapter! Could I persuade you to disclose how long this "dark" arc will be? Think I might have to gather the chapters together so I can read them all at once.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C64
2 months ago
Rassa wasn't in the Guild. He was in Arita's private lab on the outskirts of the city (outside the wall). The only one in the Guild besides Arita who knew of Rassa's presence there was the Guildmaster. View More

Legion20: ikr, but consider that so far his "secrets" are ill kept. I doubt that the emperor will have probs stealing the data from the mages, since they clearly lack security. I mean, common humans managed to sneak up inside the guild and kidnap rassa unimpeded.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C60
2 months ago
Yeah I figured, will fix when I edit whole book. Thanks for your edit comments by the way. Leaves me less work when I edit later. :) View More

Legion20: yes it does, thank you for the explanations. it's the "And even before you've truly done anything to me, I know." part that sounded unclear to me.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C60
2 months ago
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