Jelim

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  • The King's Crest *On Hold*

    The King's Crest *On Hold*

    Fantasy

    In the beginning, there was war and deceit and darkness. Then the gods stepped forward and gifted a few noble souls Crests. These Crests gave them the ability to rule over the people of Carinthia justly, and command authority and even magic against their foes. From these Crests emerged a leader, one whose Crest stood above all others, he was called King, and his successors have ruled prosperously since with their powerful Crest. Now, the King is dead. The Heir is missing. Those with Crests have fallen to war to be rewarded the King's Crest. Those without Crests can only hope that the victor is just and fair. From the ashes, the King's Crest shall rise once more. *Suspended for the foreseeable future*

  • The Masks We Wear *Discontinued*

    The Masks We Wear *Discontinued*

    Romance

    DISCONTINUED

  • The Monster Inside: The First Vampire

    The Monster Inside: The First Vampire

    Fantasy Vampire

    4.5

    Despite appearances, there was once a time where monsters did not exist. Where peace and prosperity reigned over all life. But those sinful and demonic forces that had hidden themselves in the shadows just couldn't help themselves could they? They wanted a peice of that prosperity too. They wanted to taint it, corrupt it, revel in its dark side. This is the story of a boy who was tainted. Of a boy who unintentionally bore a seed of sin and who in his naivety let it out. This is the story of how that boy was shamed and disgraced. Of how he was outcast for simply being. This is the story of how that boy learned to embrace the darkness that made him different. A darkness that would later make him known as the Lord of Night. *Updates 5 chapters a week Tuesday-Saturday. Following the release of Vol.2, Premium chapters will be available on chaptail.com for those who wish to show their support for the novel and get benefits for doing so.* *This story involves an MC who has to go through a lot of hardship before he changes his moral standing to become better and stronger. As such, please don't judge him too harshly until he makes it through this hard period, i.e. the first volume. Other than that enjoy!* *Credit goes to @Dionaea for the cover. Thanks for your hard work!* *To connect with me or see random updates for any of my current works, check out my Twitter @JeliMaxwell, or join my Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TkSxZQR. Would love to hear from you too! Whether it be fanart, predictions or just to say hi*

  • The Adjustment Project

    The Adjustment Project

    Romance

    Oh how cruel fate can be... For as long as she can remember, Mia has been stuck in the gilded cage of her rich family struggling to find a way out of the spotlight. For as long as she can remember, Jules has just wanted to find peace away from the ever increasing burdens of her orphaned life. Who would have thought they could somehow be each other's solution? But as it turns out, they can. When Mia and Jules discover that they are long lost twin sisters, Mia proposes a plan that might just change both their lives for the better... Why not just switch places? As the two of them grow closer together by living each others' lives, they can't help but find that in some ways, they fit better in the life that was not originally theirs. But who drew the two of them together in the first place? And what exactly do they hope to achieve through the sisters' reunion? And perhaps most concerning...what happens when someone discovers the twins' deception? *** *Releases are SLOW. 1 chapter a week on Friday.* *I do not own the Cover. Looking for volunteers to create one if possible*

Moments

Thanks for the pick up. 'Thankyou' is in fact a word, but I often get it confused with its verb counter part 'thank you'. Will do my best to fix it in future. View More

LiZhu: Um... Jelim... thank and you are two different words, I noticed you made this mistake a few times in the chapters too. There is no such word as thankyou. It needs a space.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C104
1 week ago
Naaw, you make me blush! Thanks so much for your support! View More

NozukaVan4: I love this book. It's wonderful and has a way of capturing the attention of anyone reading it. I'm always looking forwards to the next chapter. This novel is in my top ten books ever written. Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work, we all love you Jelim.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C124
1 week ago
thanks for the pick up. Hopefully fixed now View More

twistedmumbler: You switched the pronouns for ebony a few times in the first couple paragraphs

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C118
2 weeks ago

Hibbedidap: I am sorry to hear that you have had to put up with alot of toxic ppl and just wanted you to know that I really appreciate your work. Please keep up the amazing work and dont let the toxic ones discourage you or take their words as the oppinion of all the other readers, of which some are quiet, but nevertheless appreatiating readers.

Hope you dont get discouraged by evil minds and continue to create this amazing story for us to relish in.
May Chaos guide you ;)

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C108
3 weeks ago

Grimmypoo: I just binged this entire thing today after it was sitting in my library for months and boy was I an idiot. This novel so good my dude.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C105
1 month ago

RedsFables: And is is amazing what you have written! This novel is a fave of mine. You just keep writing it as you please. Your writing style is fantastic!!!

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C104
1 month ago
Thankyou very much for the compliment.😊 View More

epion: I truly enjoy your story and I'm not trying to discourage you or hate on your story. Honestly all my complaints could totally be personal preference. Despite my complaints I'm still constantly checking for a new chapter. I just really want to see mc to rise above and grow some backbone. And in all fairness that could be what your going for and you might want your story to just be about that struggle. Your a talented writer and it's your story and you really shouldn't let me or anyone else deter you from writing how you want. Anyway thank you for your time and effort.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C104
1 month ago
Fair enough. I suppose I don't like my books to be too action heavy because I feel like I have to one up myself every time I write an action scene, hence the more weight on dialogue and world building. Anyway, I appreciate ur support and hopefully I don't disappoint in future. View More

epion: Really really like you story but I need to just let chapters build. The first story was extremely frustrating for like 80 out of the 100 chapters because of the choices of the mc were painfully stupid most of the time. I thought ok ok it's character building that's fair he's a dumb kid learning who the real monsters are (humans). So I thought it was all building to something.. like some epic purging of corrupt nobles (his family). But all we got was a small fight, then the book ended. I was like ok the next book will be awesome, he's awakened he's powerful he knows what's up now. But all these chapters have been so slow and boring.. working at the docks characters conversing that I could care less about.. again I like your story and get world building and all that. I just hoped we'd finally have all the awesomeness that the first book was building too. But it seems like it might just be another 80 chapters of frustrations. I still vote the chapters 4 or 5 stars and give you power stones when you release and I really don't want to discourage your writing cause your definitely talented I just can't wait for the action or even some kind of development.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C104
1 month ago
refer to my other comment on this chapter. Can't answer your question outright but hopefully that other comment gives an explanation. View More

Chaoticmike: Weird what brought up a filler chapter?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C103
1 month ago
No offence taken, but just to clarify why the pace of the book has slowed in terms of storyline:
This is a sequel to the first volume (obviously), but Rassa has essentially left nearly everything he knows in his old life behind, hence, the world around him needs to be rebuilt and/or shifted and his character arc needs to be established anew. It took me nearly 30 chapters to do that in the first volume, so while I don't intend to take that long this time around, I would recommend stacking chapters for a couple of weeks if you can't stand the slow pace.
Thanks for your comment and support! View More

Aevril: Disclaimers: This is my personal opinion, don't get offended by it.

I really liked this novel, but recently it feels like every chapter is an filler and nothing is really happening. The pace was slow to begin with, but it has slowed down so much. The last two weeks of chapters could have been written into one.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C103
1 month ago

Crystal2012: I love how you put part 1 and part 2 in the same book not a lot of people would do that tbh it makes it easier to read and to go back if needed so much easier as well. Your doing a great job keep up the good work. The only thing I don't like is waiting for new chapters lol but that's only cuz the book it sooooo good.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 month ago
So it was, apologies, I had another book I was writing that had a Vincent in it. My bad View More

Triorchan: Sorry, but who is Vincent?
I remember that this souls teacher was named Victor. Have it be changed be u Author?

Thx for chapter, O(*^*o)

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C99
1 month ago
Different person View More

Phipsi: In the End it was written Aaron. But the Person described is a Sailor Not somebody living in the Port.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C97
1 month ago
Where abouts? View More

Phipsi: Is that a mistake with the Names or do they have the same Name?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C97
1 month ago

parade: I enjoy this novel very much and I hope you will post more chapters of this novel, I very please to say that if this novel is continue as it is, it will become one of the best novel.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 month ago

uudydhi: This is among the most underestimated novel I have ever read but it goes to show the talent of the author. Honestly this should be how vampire novel/movies should go

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 month ago

Veronica_Sanchez: Its a geat novel, its one of the most interesting things i have read in a while , i love it i hust cant get enough , its great work honestly man good work , i really like the way you made the characters

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 month ago

Ruderalis: This novel is extremely enjoyable. The author knows where he wants to go with his characters and you can feel it. While some complained about the MC at the beginning, I feel like it's necessary for him to be like this so that we can observe his transformation. The world describes appears to be quite interesting and I can't wait to discover it along with you. Anyway, keep up the good work, you're really good at it.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 month ago

Nedric: Love this story, a really refreshing take on the vampire 'formula?' and its great.

Best original I've found on the site since Jay Aslan stopped getting posts.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 month ago

trash_can_1754: If you are looking for a dark fantasy story that does not deal with reincarnation, look no further. Dropping this review to support the author. + second volume coming soon! Read now while it's hot!

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 month ago

Nidson: Dropping this review right here to show my love and support for this novel.
By far the best novel I've read in this site.Story is insanely good I would recommend to anyone looking for something a bit dark.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 month ago

Ksbleek: This is an excellent story that I have enjoyed tremendously. You can feel that this was not written haphazardly but instead with care and passion that the writer had for the characters and story. I gave the story 4 stars for world development only because this is still the beginning of the story and I feel like there is still so much out there left to tell us. I hope you keep up the good work and dont let us wait to long to see how you continue to polish the characters and reveal to us the gems they become.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 months ago
Some of it has changed a little bit. The only major change I was making though was that Aegin's story was going to change slightly in the beginning to make where his story ended up more clear in terms of character arcs. That's not to say that minor changes won't effect the overall tone of the story as well. You'll just have to judge for yourself as I obviously can't put it all into this little reply box. View More

Chaoticmike: Is editing chapter has some type of different ending towards the last chapter or it just ends the same but more detail?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 months ago
Busy rewriting and editing first volume. Just over halfway done. The chapters with the * symbol are edited. You can reread over those to pass the time as there are changes to some aspects. But will release something in about a weekish depending on my writing speed. Thanks for your support😉 View More

Chaoticmike: Is it because of writing block or busy life issues?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 months ago
Well it's getting closer. More info soon View More

Chaoticmike: Nice picture change, though the last picture help me decide on how the mc would be looking like. But since you changed it does that mean your ready for more awesome release of your chapters from your novel?

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 months ago
Thankyou for your support, I'm very happy has had such an impact on you. As for quidan...it's not really anything bad, they made an offer, the contract wasn't something I liked so I said I'd be willing to sign the contract if they changed tlpoints a, b & c. They verbally told me these points were leniant or didn't happen but didn't put it in a new contract so I refused to sign. Only thing I really lost from that was an income, but for someone whose dream it is to be an author, I get a lot more from the comments and reviews like this that tell me i'm doing a good job, so thanks again. View More

Darkquestion: For your information I'm 20 years old and its not that easy to woo me with any old book.


With that being said this is the best I've read...you know overlord? Well it got me just as invested in the main character and world development as that.


The first book is out(91 chapters) the chapters are long but go by fast because everything thats happening has you so absorbed.


Also, my guess is that the only reason the authors book isn't more well known and advertised on the site is to do with the fact that though quidan made some kind of offer to the author, I believe the author had turned them down after reading through the contract.

~(the author in the later chapters only politely mentioned that she had some small disagreements on the offer being put forth~everything else is my speculation)~

But trust me its one of the best books I've read, if I believe otherwise then let me be cursed! 

As for why I've rated it so perfectely? Well perhaps there are flaws but for a book to fully absorb me and have me loving it so much that I dont even notice them..what more could you ask for? There are no flaws that I've noticed, I enjoyed myself the whole way!

Thanks Author!

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 months ago

Darkquestion: For your information I'm 20 years old and its not that easy to woo me with any old book.


With that being said this is the best I've read...you know overlord? Well it got me just as invested in the main character and world development as that.


The first book is out(91 chapters) the chapters are long but go by fast because everything thats happening has you so absorbed.


Also, my guess is that the only reason the authors book isn't more well known and advertised on the site is to do with the fact that though quidan made some kind of offer to the author, I believe the author had turned them down after reading through the contract.

~(the author in the later chapters only politely mentioned that she had some small disagreements on the offer being put forth~everything else is my speculation)~

But trust me its one of the best books I've read, if I believe otherwise then let me be cursed! 

As for why I've rated it so perfectely? Well perhaps there are flaws but for a book to fully absorb me and have me loving it so much that I dont even notice them..what more could you ask for? There are no flaws that I've noticed, I enjoyed myself the whole way!

Thanks Author!

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
2 months ago
Hey. I admit I didn't see your previous message, but I am interested in a new platform like the one you describe. I read over the chapter on the link you gave me and while I would be interested I currently have 2 issues. The first is that I have no new chapters written as I'm in the middle of editing this first volume and have a fair bit of real world stuff going on at the moment which means there won't be any new chapters until about a month after you premium release date. I can release the current chapters but nothing more for a while. The other is that I was hoping to get a new cover, but haven't had the chance to look into it at the moment. View More

Sacredwisp: Hey ^-^, just wanted to let you know that I’ve released a platform for publishing novels online. I know I messaged you about a month ago so I hope I'm not too spammy. The platform is basically like WN except geared more towards the authors. It also has a built-in system to offer advanced chapters that’s somewhat of a cross between Patreon and Webnovel’s system, but it’s not mandatory, so you can just post regular chapters as well. There’s a little too much to explain here, so you can read about it over here if you’re interested https://chaptail.com/Novel/cqrAklLGQX4paGs9ESrn/Chapter/1. If you have any questions or comments, don’t hesitate to contact me, either by replying to this comment or by messaging @Dionaea#3402 on discord.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C24
3 months ago
Nah, the picture was something I found on the internet and I drew inspiration from it. Rassa has dark hair and eyes, but the rest of the look is pretty similar to how I imagine him View More

uudydhi: Sorry about this dumb question but are you telling me that the cover of this novel Is Rassa with bat wings and white hair.......For if it is I just have to give a tums up to your artist

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C83
3 months ago
Exception as its part of the unsealing. The part that was ripped off earlier isn't healed, just the damage done by the wings as they burst forth. View More

Whatareyoulooking: FINALLY GOD DAMM!
Werent the life lines impossible or really difficult to heal? Then why is he healing like its nothing? Someone clear my doubts pls.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire · C83
3 months ago
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