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U dun get it, m8. Mark is MC and everyone else is just NPC. ;D They are there to make his adventure cool. View More

PettyOfficer: There are like 20 reviews from two people giving this 5 stars and I have to put my foot down.

I’ve read up to chapter 18 and I want to blow my brains out. Wanna know why?

It’s not lacking chapters. It’s not the decent grammar or the general narrative style.

It’s the overuse of clichés, emphasis of “plans,” and useless characters. Also, the dreadful POV shifts.

For clichés, we got MC Mark, a “badass” anti-hero/hero mix. We got a random mother and daughter burden for escort. Then there’s the strong and uncooperative love interest with her friend. Oh, and I almost forgot! There’s the unnamed male employee as the servant.

Some bus is in an accident and then zombies come out from it. It’s the apocalypse and somehow, the zombies have hacks that allow them to bypass crowds and kill any good guy with a gun. No police or guards! No phone service, so you can’t call for help!

That means everyone is getting slaughtered! MC steps in to lead everyone to safety! Oh no! Someone needs help, so he goes to save them with his badass one-handed shotgunning skills! He got it from a zombie guard that happened to attack him!

But he can’t just save them without showing how all other guys are trash! A mom gets grabbed by dying man! How she is still alive when running from zombies with her daughter? Who cares! Love interest shows she can fight, but MC saves her because he must be better!

Oh? A rich fatty goes crazy and holds everyone hostage in his base? He locks out MC and kills someone with a gun? Guess it’s detour time for MC to go save them because they’re helpless without him! No need to try and reason with the fatty.

Don’t worry! It’s all according to “plan!” MC loots a place and makes the path secure. Oh, a detour to the detour? Oh, it’s time to save a new love interest? Oh, we have to get the hero a heroic entrance instead of assassinating the gangsters. We’ll have the MC talk to the Boss as he r*pes the girl because this is the “plan!”

What!? The Boss has a gun? No worries! MC knew and wanted to make sure by talking to the gangsters! He just wanted to get a better shot. What? He only shot off the Boss’s arm and kicked a gangster’s balls? What “plan” is this?

How will he survive now? Oh? It was instant KO? As expected of MC, the other gangsters run away since they luckily don’t have guns. Now the MC is the hero. Let’s have TWO chapters of FLASHBACKS to show this pampered and beautiful love interest having a hard time with her family, friends, and fiancé.

Don’t worry! Literally disarming the Boss was part of the plan! He’s bleeding out, but don’t worry! MC must have a moment with his love interest! Oh, the Boss died? Time for a new “plan!” The fleeing gangsters attracted the zombies away? As expected of the “plan!” They never could have lured them back! Even if they did, MC had “plans” for it!

Ignore that his people had to kill zombies attracted by his gunshot! Hey, that mom can come over here and clean up the love interest. That gangster Boss r*ped her all over just by himself! She’s coated in his slimy seed!

Great! We’re ready to move on! Ignore how the daughter keeps up. Man-servant has been carrying the injured mother the whole time!

Do you understand how tedious and discomforting that is? It’s a droll format. It relies on cliché encounters to build up a harem team because the author doesn’t want to have MC alone. We go back and forth between characters only so the MC is no longer the focus of the story.

It’s fractured but whole, like a fractured butt hole. Incomplete, but complete; empty, but full.

Mutagen
20 hours ago

PettyOfficer: There are like 20 reviews from two people giving this 5 stars and I have to put my foot down.

I’ve read up to chapter 18 and I want to blow my brains out. Wanna know why?

It’s not lacking chapters. It’s not the decent grammar or the general narrative style.

It’s the overuse of clichés, emphasis of “plans,” and useless characters. Also, the dreadful POV shifts.

For clichés, we got MC Mark, a “badass” anti-hero/hero mix. We got a random mother and daughter burden for escort. Then there’s the strong and uncooperative love interest with her friend. Oh, and I almost forgot! There’s the unnamed male employee as the servant.

Some bus is in an accident and then zombies come out from it. It’s the apocalypse and somehow, the zombies have hacks that allow them to bypass crowds and kill any good guy with a gun. No police or guards! No phone service, so you can’t call for help!

That means everyone is getting slaughtered! MC steps in to lead everyone to safety! Oh no! Someone needs help, so he goes to save them with his badass one-handed shotgunning skills! He got it from a zombie guard that happened to attack him!

But he can’t just save them without showing how all other guys are trash! A mom gets grabbed by dying man! How she is still alive when running from zombies with her daughter? Who cares! Love interest shows she can fight, but MC saves her because he must be better!

Oh? A rich fatty goes crazy and holds everyone hostage in his base? He locks out MC and kills someone with a gun? Guess it’s detour time for MC to go save them because they’re helpless without him! No need to try and reason with the fatty.

Don’t worry! It’s all according to “plan!” MC loots a place and makes the path secure. Oh, a detour to the detour? Oh, it’s time to save a new love interest? Oh, we have to get the hero a heroic entrance instead of assassinating the gangsters. We’ll have the MC talk to the Boss as he r*pes the girl because this is the “plan!”

What!? The Boss has a gun? No worries! MC knew and wanted to make sure by talking to the gangsters! He just wanted to get a better shot. What? He only shot off the Boss’s arm and kicked a gangster’s balls? What “plan” is this?

How will he survive now? Oh? It was instant KO? As expected of MC, the other gangsters run away since they luckily don’t have guns. Now the MC is the hero. Let’s have TWO chapters of FLASHBACKS to show this pampered and beautiful love interest having a hard time with her family, friends, and fiancé.

Don’t worry! Literally disarming the Boss was part of the plan! He’s bleeding out, but don’t worry! MC must have a moment with his love interest! Oh, the Boss died? Time for a new “plan!” The fleeing gangsters attracted the zombies away? As expected of the “plan!” They never could have lured them back! Even if they did, MC had “plans” for it!

Ignore that his people had to kill zombies attracted by his gunshot! Hey, that mom can come over here and clean up the love interest. That gangster Boss r*ped her all over just by himself! She’s coated in his slimy seed!

Great! We’re ready to move on! Ignore how the daughter keeps up. Man-servant has been carrying the injured mother the whole time!

Do you understand how tedious and discomforting that is? It’s a droll format. It relies on cliché encounters to build up a harem team because the author doesn’t want to have MC alone. We go back and forth between characters only so the MC is no longer the focus of the story.

It’s fractured but whole, like a fractured butt hole. Incomplete, but complete; empty, but full.

Mutagen
20 hours ago
Yep. Choose your poison among 3 equally bland magical swordsmen. Typical China LN. I voted for girlies last week, just to avoid this cancer. View More

MagikLord: There where 3 shi/t novels to vote. So one sh** or another sh** ... its will be sh** anyway

Nine Yang Sword Saint
20 hours ago

SorcererCat: Who voted for this crap? The synopsis alone makes it sound like crap. SUPER WISH fulfillment garbage... Saved a POWERFUL old man as a weak noob, somehow. Is made his disciple and joins #1 best sect ever and gets the #1 hottest girl around. And gets some awesome meridians that don't sound that awesome since they come around once every 1000 years. Wow weee big deal! Cultivators lived for thousands of years if not millions of years and you want to hype up some crappy meridians that come around once ever 1000 years. Sheesh what a head-knocker.

Nine Yang Sword Saint
20 hours ago
I can't believe he just set all stats to average 10, what a noob, my god. Clearly, if you are a cheater you don't have skill or brain. View More
Reincarnation of the Cheater · C2
20 hours ago

RagNarok: Yikes very unlikable attitude from the get go.

The Achievement Junkie · C2
21 hours ago

CaptainBoyHole: Whoa what's with that arrogant and stuck up attitude? He doesn't know wtf is going on. Acting like that is one way of getting himself enslaved with a magic collar, killed, or betrayed.

The Achievement Junkie · C2
21 hours ago
Nah, it is a clear misdirection by wiz, for draaammaaa. The Vile King has an S-rank head of a faction on his leash, why would he switch for a random girl he never heard of before? The Vile King is a man with a plan, not just some petty troll. View More

xcares: It's possible Sophia can't even be infected due to her special type of power.
Thanks for the great chapter once more!

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 2 · C75
4 days ago
Dang right! I wanted to learn about Meditation too, but End-Of-Chapter-sama blocked me, Q_Q View More

Silakai: I need a mass release. The story is really good, but it's never enough. I need more.

Warlock Apprentice · C20
5 days ago

Silakai: I need a mass release. The story is really good, but it's never enough. I need more.

Warlock Apprentice · C20
5 days ago
It is my understanding that 0-08 has some sort of autonomy, so it will scribe parts of the narrative on its own, and the user is adding his influence in-between those. As such, if somebody is using the pen, he will gain control over some events but give up control over others. View More

LongSongGolden: I'm really hoping Ince dies soon, because at this point it's just the author writing themself into the novel and using that as an excuse for this reverse Deus Ex Machina, not solving any problem but randomly causing them instead (how does he even know where people are or what they are doing? All the pen does, so far as it's been explained, is let him change things, not see the effects of those changes)

Lord of the Mysteries · C472
1 week ago
Yes, just happened. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ View More
Lord of the Mysteries · C471
2 weeks ago
Sample size of one is better than sample size of zero, that is since we have no _other_ instances to judge by, it is absolutely logical to go with the only example we have.

Unless evidence will point otherwise, the assumption of the plot continuing the way it was going before (i.e. Klein vs Evil Gods) is totally reasonable to have. View More

Lumosz: Are you sure about that?
Your logic is inherently flawed as you are trying to make a conjecture based on a sample size of one. This is why you are likely to be wrong unless you have read ahead somewhere.

Lord of the Mysteries · C470
2 weeks ago

LingXian02: maybe jack is blasphemer! because blasphemer have the power of time right.. and maybe the demon hunter leader almost killed jack then time was rewind?

Lord of the Mysteries · C458
2 weeks ago
wikipaedia is blocked in china, what do you want? :D The author probably knows the guns from videogames only. View More

Stompai: Well not much to say here.... kidding

- S&W m500 was designed and produced in 2003 (how can it appear here in 1984 ?)
- Franchi SPAS 15 was designed and produced in 1986
- It's dangerous (and stupid) to put a silencer on a S&W 500 for a lot of reason (check on google).

Please author, it take 2 seconds to check those infos, stop writing impossible things, even if we are in a novel and it doesn't matter. You choose 1984 as your setting for the first world so respect it.

The Ultimate Evolution · C14
3 weeks ago

Stompai: Author need to realise that he set this story (for now) in america and not in china. I know there is a lot of scam in china (based on novels I read), selling fake goods, downgrading, etc... But gun sales in america have government managing behind them.
Weapons company sell their guns to shop which then sell the guns to people with (I guess) many checkpoints between these 2 entity.

If a shop want to downgrade a gun (why would they actually do this ? they are just the selling location of guns, not the ones fabricating it)
it would actually involve more cost and time than selling it as it is.

The gun company could actually downgrade a gun, in order to reduce fabrication cost
but then It could create HUGE problems for them if government was to discover this. And beside,
gun market in america is so huge (partnership with millitary, police, international exportation etc) that they don't even need to think about reducing cost.

It's actually on the black market where you have more chance to find counterfeit guns of low quality, best solution for mc would be to buy official guns from an official distributor to be sure of quality rather than betting on the black market

The Ultimate Evolution · C13
3 weeks ago
his perception is high, but his intelligence is only of a regular human. So, the battle logs don't include formulaes to not overload his brain. View More

Stompai: I'm confused, isn't there a "basic defense" stat which reduce damage using % from a math formula beside his inate ability ? why wasn't it included in the damage calculation ?

The Ultimate Evolution · C11
3 weeks ago
How many is "couple chapters"? I mean, I don't have anything againts bandit stories and vigilantes but I was promised a fiction book. View More

akuma06: I actually like it, it has more depth. When you think the number of chapters in a CN novel is huge, having a couple as a prologue is not that long.

The Ultimate Evolution · C6
3 weeks ago

Ketthan: This is so dam boring till this point, I'm forcing myself to pass through all this bill.sh.it to see is the novel is good or not
. Till now I hate it

The Ultimate Evolution · C6
3 weeks ago
Got shot in the chest - walk it off... View More
The Ultimate Evolution · C5
3 weeks ago

dtzjfcgbn: Human bite force is about 750N(75kg) with molars and about a third of that with incisors.

The Ultimate Evolution · C4
3 weeks ago
Honestly, the novel's synopsis is so meh I was passing this novel over again and again. But now your review prompted me to give it a try. Better it be good, Ansible, or else! View More

Ansible: Maybe, when you see my review rating(s), you would think that I am just too lazy or just a braindead fan of Ultimate Evolution. But bear with me for a (few) minute(s) because I have a very solid reason for my ratings.

First of all, we have read (or at least me) far, far, far too much the usual cliche MC and story. Furthermore, the so called non-Cliche MC (like the calculative cold one and so on) has became another type of cliche MC. This story, in my opinion, choose a different approach to depict the MC.

Why? Because our MC is so frikin' normal and act just like how a normal (yet with a decent brain processor) would act in the situation. Not to bash any other review, such as the one who said that the hero lacks any kind of drive whatsoever and have no purpose. Or the one that said that the hero doesn't have any emotion. Oh, how could they be so wrong. Probably, they have read far too many cliche and mainstream LN which usually deliberately spoons all the emotion to the readers mouths. Our hero is sad! Our hero is so heart broken. Our hero has been humiliated! The brow of our MC twitched! It is so disgusting that I barely able to bear with it.

Now, to the review proper, let as adjourn!

I. Translation Quality 5/5
I have been following UE since the very beginning of the translation. I must say that the translator did a hella good job. Typo is rarely seen. The Translators interact quite well and put some of their opinions in the TN. A solid job, I must say.

II. Updating Stability
It is nearly reach the stability of World of Cultivation (who has not yet broken the 1 chapter a day for the entire series translated). Expect a few hitch here and there but the translator always pay back the late chapter.

III. Story Development
This is amazing. Oh my. Just the sheer imagination of the author about "What could have been" to many of the famous stories that we are all familiar with. The story development always conclude nicely, albeit tad slow. The sense of achievement is gradual but real. When you read the usual cultivating LN, we can't even understand how the MC work with his build. They suddenly met an ancient golly holly luck whatever and got a whole different skill set. It is different with our MC in UE. He put a very decent consideration to every stats point and skill point that he got and the most important thing is the stats actually MEANT something, not just some random number the author throws at us just to give a sense of "Oh, our MC has improved". Indeed, our Hero lack the common "Drive" that force him to progress forward, but maybe we have became so numb of all the cultivation novel that we think "Our MC must have a revenge or something". The fact is, he has a drive! Which is to frikin damn survive and have a decent life! He is the epitome of most of us! Imagine yourself to be trapped in an endless game of death. Would you like think "Oh I am going to be so OP and wipe everybody asses". Nope, the story progress really well.

Also, the subtle jokes and analogy tho. The author is really good with this.

IV. Character Design
Our hero, we must say, is bland. But damn he is really smart. It is like we watch detective conan or kindaichi but instead of solving mysteries our MC play a mind game with the enemies!. He is not OP at all. He has a very clear weakness and he understand his shortcomings. But yet from time to time he miscalculate and must pay a dear price for it. There is no sudden power up. The progress is gradual and towards a clear purpose. Our MC make a Tank Build! And he did a decent job at it.

V. World Background
I must say that the author imagination is wild.

~~Spoiler~~
Like what the hell who would think to bring a zerg queen into avatar world?
~~Spoiler~

So, overall, I love this LN. I do hope that the TL team release more chapter tho.

The Ultimate Evolution
3 weeks ago

Ansible: Maybe, when you see my review rating(s), you would think that I am just too lazy or just a braindead fan of Ultimate Evolution. But bear with me for a (few) minute(s) because I have a very solid reason for my ratings.

First of all, we have read (or at least me) far, far, far too much the usual cliche MC and story. Furthermore, the so called non-Cliche MC (like the calculative cold one and so on) has became another type of cliche MC. This story, in my opinion, choose a different approach to depict the MC.

Why? Because our MC is so frikin' normal and act just like how a normal (yet with a decent brain processor) would act in the situation. Not to bash any other review, such as the one who said that the hero lacks any kind of drive whatsoever and have no purpose. Or the one that said that the hero doesn't have any emotion. Oh, how could they be so wrong. Probably, they have read far too many cliche and mainstream LN which usually deliberately spoons all the emotion to the readers mouths. Our hero is sad! Our hero is so heart broken. Our hero has been humiliated! The brow of our MC twitched! It is so disgusting that I barely able to bear with it.

Now, to the review proper, let as adjourn!

I. Translation Quality 5/5
I have been following UE since the very beginning of the translation. I must say that the translator did a hella good job. Typo is rarely seen. The Translators interact quite well and put some of their opinions in the TN. A solid job, I must say.

II. Updating Stability
It is nearly reach the stability of World of Cultivation (who has not yet broken the 1 chapter a day for the entire series translated). Expect a few hitch here and there but the translator always pay back the late chapter.

III. Story Development
This is amazing. Oh my. Just the sheer imagination of the author about "What could have been" to many of the famous stories that we are all familiar with. The story development always conclude nicely, albeit tad slow. The sense of achievement is gradual but real. When you read the usual cultivating LN, we can't even understand how the MC work with his build. They suddenly met an ancient golly holly luck whatever and got a whole different skill set. It is different with our MC in UE. He put a very decent consideration to every stats point and skill point that he got and the most important thing is the stats actually MEANT something, not just some random number the author throws at us just to give a sense of "Oh, our MC has improved". Indeed, our Hero lack the common "Drive" that force him to progress forward, but maybe we have became so numb of all the cultivation novel that we think "Our MC must have a revenge or something". The fact is, he has a drive! Which is to frikin damn survive and have a decent life! He is the epitome of most of us! Imagine yourself to be trapped in an endless game of death. Would you like think "Oh I am going to be so OP and wipe everybody asses". Nope, the story progress really well.

Also, the subtle jokes and analogy tho. The author is really good with this.

IV. Character Design
Our hero, we must say, is bland. But damn he is really smart. It is like we watch detective conan or kindaichi but instead of solving mysteries our MC play a mind game with the enemies!. He is not OP at all. He has a very clear weakness and he understand his shortcomings. But yet from time to time he miscalculate and must pay a dear price for it. There is no sudden power up. The progress is gradual and towards a clear purpose. Our MC make a Tank Build! And he did a decent job at it.

V. World Background
I must say that the author imagination is wild.

~~Spoiler~~
Like what the hell who would think to bring a zerg queen into avatar world?
~~Spoiler~

So, overall, I love this LN. I do hope that the TL team release more chapter tho.

The Ultimate Evolution
3 weeks ago

ResidentialPsycho: ....That is the creepiest description of an evil temple I have ever read.

Lord of the Mysteries · C455
3 weeks ago

CuntEmperor: The translation is NOT good in any sense of the word

Cthulhu Gonfalon
3 weeks ago

Azunyan: WTF... Why is a story that was dropped being picked up again??? And why the heck were we voting on it if it was a story that had been dropped and picked up again.

Cthulhu Gonfalon
3 weeks ago
Translator, you are an uneducated dog. "Gailun" -> Garen (champion from a game League of Legends, known for his battlecry "Demacia", making umbushes in tall grass and his signature move - spinning attack) View More
Cthulhu Gonfalon · C10
3 weeks ago

WindReader: This is basically plant VS zombie

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C8
3 weeks ago

kugguj: That ONE SENTENCE seems an awful lot like 2 sentences

Lord of the Mysteries · C437
1 month ago
Man, really? You need everything spelled out to you in excruciating details, aren't you? Their "future interactions" could as well go off-screen, we don't need it in text, its irrelevant to the general plotline. We, from the exposition given to us, could *reasonably infer* that the course of history is now changed and the two factions no longer will be at war, but united. Just as planned by our hero.

Don't assign me things I did not say, never did I claim that both geniuses should or would just vanish from the political scene and, I dunno, grow cabbages for the rest of the book series. What I said is that their conflict was due to mostly bad timing and rash judgement and lack of an opportunities to communicate - and now that it is "fixed", they will NATURALLY form an amicable relationship. No contradictions.

Its only a contradiction if you for some reason believe that the world stops existing outside of our field of view, and if we don't read about something in text - it must've never happened and is a plot hole. View More

sani1242: What you said here contradicts your previous comment. Earlier you claimed that it wasn’t necessary to focus on these two characters: “who cares about those losers” and now you’re saying that further interaction between the two is necessary to clear up the misunderstanding and help the two realize they “share the same ideals and goals”. Lel.

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 2 · C62
1 month ago
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