Qion

3yr

Commented

That's fine author. I just hope that you do not loose your motivation as I see great potential in this story.

ch 69 Not a chapter , just info

Mcu inhumain : Izel l'eternal (english)

Movies · olihanFR

Qion

3yr

Commented

The mc is too brash. Nikolai buffed and this arc is getting too long.

ch 72 A Game of Hide and Seek

Qion

3yr

Commented

The mc is too brash. Nikolai buffed and this arc is getting too long.

ch 72 A Game of Hide and Seek

Qion

3yr

Commented

Guardians or Dawn guards

ch 20 Chapter 20

Qion

3yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 30 28 . Awakening of the aura

Mcu inhumain : Izel l'eternal (english)

Movies · olihanFR

Qion

3yr

Commented

He might as well get a power up from the ritual but on the good side since he has healing/nature affinities. Regarding content, after escaping he can get Asgard's attention and later help them out with their rebellions etc. Then proceed to other worlds for more experience. You are free to add as many content in this period in the MCU.

ch 28 No chapter just a short explanation :)

Mcu inhumain : Izel l'eternal (english)

Movies · olihanFR

Qion

3yr

Commented

Great potential. Consider him earning skills point every x lvls to make it easier for him to learn more skills.

ch 0 6 Long-awaited revenge!

The Wizard in the Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · Olejka_Avtor

Qion

3yr

Commented

Great story so far. I also think a time skip is in order. Well done.

ch 0 9 Chapter 9

Qion

3yr

Commented

His poison resistance should be higher.

ch 0 8 Childhood Pt. 5

Qion

3yr

Commented

Great chapter

ch 54 Testing her powers

HIATUS: The Inheritance of the 3 sannins

Movies · King_Disturb

Qion

3yr

Replied to Lord_lucky

Not necessarily since she's force sensitive. She can become a great help to the MC once she trains in the force.

ch 12 Not a Chapter

Qion

3yr

Commented

Now the MC is getting arrogant. That was totally unnecessary. Author the personality of your MC is important.

ch 38 You're Just A Nuisance

Qion

3yr

Commented

It's good to have this back. Thanks for the chapter.

ch 107 Hornet aka bumblebee vs Iron King

The online game version of marvel

Movies · Over_Lord_9904

Qion

3yr

Commented

Great chapter.

ch 31 Priestess of Black

Marvel: Starting from the Bottom

Movies · ToothlessS

Qion

3yr

Commented

Good so far. Has a lot of potential.

ch 0 8 8 - The Determination of the Free

Into The Elder Scrolls: Skyrim

Video Games · Loyal_Hunter

Qion

3yr

Commented

I seriously doubt his low-key policy.

'Damn! That Danzo and Hiruzen are inspecting me. What should I do now? How to explain this to me?... Hmm.. maybe I should feign ignorance for now and how a kid is supposed to know about such stuff? But I should be wary from now on and try to never catch the eyes of Danzo. Remaining calm and low-key is the way to go until I gain enough strength. After that, I will pay back to them multifold and willfully demonstrate my strength.'