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CapGrizzlyBear1203: Stop, why? Why the hell is he speaking like a cultivator? "Shatter the heavens" he should be speaking like a knight, pirate or a king, not some flimsy cultivator that speaks of his goals aloud.

Targaryen Who Turned Dragon (Against The Gods) · C13
2 weeks ago

fatjesus1993: Also why can’t he continue to age? Wouldn’t it make more sense for him to stop aging after reaching maturity?

That way he would be looking like a 20-25 year old for eternity.

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe ! · C8
2 weeks ago

aleksandar2003: Can you make him a man again it was completely irrelevant to the story

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe ! · C8
2 weeks ago

TianYa: Dropping this. With a girlish voice

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe ! · C7
2 weeks ago

ArchieElite: I completely understand that he’s young and has a higher pitched voice, but it’s just slightly annoying how you bring up his girly voice in almost every dialogue.

WTF I am in the Marvel Universe ! · C7
2 weeks ago
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Djabilong: It's the deepest lore of SY. Truly, a masterpiece of the generation.

Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C199
2 weeks ago

GGMissFortune: Trash fic trash system very keng die below average MC who needs to put in exponentially more effort to get similar gains as others
Pathetic attempts at humour

Life With A System
2 weeks ago

pandabanana: That earnest skill. That’s bull**** on every single level. Leveling probably on a generous amount gives you lets say 20 stat points right? So if you level up to 20 and come back to murder level one trash mobs you can become god. I like quick novels, but all the curses just make him seem like a absolute fucking retard. He played the game for 7 years and he still fails to be calm, and still acts like an immature little *****. No fucking wonder his team only made it to c-rank. Any rational human being who has a brain of any sort can make a better team with his resources. So make him an actual veteran or make him a retard choose one not both.

The Immortal Player
2 weeks ago

Azusa_Aikawa: Mc is a coward who bullied on his school, but peak player VRMMO, but now he try playing new games Dungeon core online.
He is choosen as a dungeon master or just become normal player by government, he choose dungeon master.
But what made me angry is after he become DM his AI/pixie (for helping DM) is a B1TCH, but from what i read MC must ask question to AI before she started to answer the question, what this mean? If you did not pay attention on your question, you will not get 100% information from the b1tch...
Another thing i hate the most is mc bullied on RL but after he play DCO he is bullied again by his FUKING AI/Pixie. Not what i expect he become godly gamer like weed, grid, ye xiu.

Dungeon Core Online
2 weeks ago

ahdamnit: This story is so bad. The MC is a useless idiot who gets bullied by a guild leader in to joining after making an enemy of the king for a stupid reason and not working for him. I could not read many chapters before having to give up.

The Achievement Junkie
2 weeks ago

Just_a_person: Bad mc attitude. Very arrogant

King: “Can you really help us?” Tries to clarify if the legends are true and if he’s really worth it.

Mc: “Wtf man, I just need all this stuff and I’ll solve your problems ok?” Doesn’t provide any info at all and leaves once the king showed hesitation.

The Achievement Junkie
2 weeks ago

Sanguine: I'm going to be real, I would love to read this novel, but the webnovel logo int he bottom left tells me this is sponsored by them and therefore later in the story we are going to get ss blocked from chapters so i'm not going to waste my time.

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
2 weeks ago

EveningSong: This novel was struck by the curse of the failure rabbit. It was quite good until the female love interest became a harem in training. Then all the interesting bits was buried under a pile of boring and the novel died.

Dropped as of chapter 80. Thanks for about 30 good chapters Mr. Author. I might check back in 6 months or so to see what happens.

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
2 weeks ago

Skyrixz: I just want to say that your intro and starting of the novel was great and all until you reach chapter 44
..the mc meets a girl and becomes flipping retarded by giving in to a girl just because she is pretty...the mc was just about to get op but noooooo! The freaking author just had to ruin it by doing this crappy character development. Manipulative, and controlling females? Not my cup of tea. Sorry but im dropping this novel. Was great while it lasted.

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
2 weeks ago
😂😂😂 Sorry that your novel's never last long especially how you make a new one every month View More

GhostyZ: Look at how dead your novels are. You never finish anything as well. Not like it would matter anyways.

Naruto Resurrection · C20
3 weeks ago
Just give up man you never finish anything View More
Naruto Resurrection · C20
3 weeks ago

Blackwater: I'm realy conflicted about this story it starts good but around ch. 10 it starts to get confusing.
All this * misterie* that is drop in the story makes it just more confusing and adds unnecessary layers opon layers to the plot.

While the Interaktion of the people is good, I always think that the system is wastet in the hands of the Mc, for all his intelligence that he sometimes shows he makes little of the possibility that the system offers.

He has a clear goal but is own training in comparison to the other side characters falls short because he helps them and is more of a teacher to them.

Overall the story is nice but I would have preferred a Mc that is more focused on his goals and a Mc that is intelligent or dumb but not kind of both at the same time.

I would give it about 4 stars

The Gamer - Naruto World
3 weeks ago

FBI_B1TCH: I didn't understand a word of what you said. Should you really be criticizing someone else over a poor explanation considering your own writing is illegible?

Mystic Demon Slayer · C1
3 weeks ago
Thanks for the insight View More

Djabilong: That's in the poopy animoo adaptation (which rarely goes well when VN is used as a sourse material). In the original visual novel everything is properly divided into separate routes for each heroine.

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C3
3 weeks ago
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The Pokemon Dream · C9
3 weeks ago
😂😂😂 alright have a good day View More

naven: Your first reply made you seem like a chill dude, and i respected that, however I don’t appreciate this reply.. I sunno why you replied again JAKDJSDKJSDHAJ each to their own:) live your fullest life ❤️

Omniscient Reader
3 weeks ago
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naven: HAHAHAHA THE STRAIGHT TOXIC FRAGILE MASCULINITY REALLY SHONE THROUGH HAHAHAHAHA thats just like saying no lgbtqa+ humans want to read a story about hetero love, but alas unfortunately it was forced onto every SINGLE one of us growing up, and sometimes we just want a little spotlight onto other forms of love because, being narrow minded hardly helps anyone imo.. but again, maybe you’re right maybe you’re wrong because as a HOMOsexual i absolutely HATE straight love And MUST HAVE A WARNING BEFORE READING A NOVEL THAT I MIGHT waStE my PreCiOUs SpiriTs stOnEs beCaUSe a BoY anD gIRL miGht fLiRt ☠️☠️🤡 just incase this gets misinterpreted, I’m not saying you’re completely wrong, I’m just saying that the way you worded this is suggesting that straight “dudes” are to small minded and can’t accept that a fictional character may have a different sexual orientation to themselves and would be repulsed by it, thereby needing a warning in the tags so they don’t waste their “spirit stones”, of which you get several free.. daily (unless you spend money on them of course..), and would completely deter them from reading an otherwise potentially amazing novel.. but again oh well, different people, different lives, different views:) ❤️🏳️‍🌈❤️

Omniscient Reader
3 weeks ago
Man you really need to stop with abcdedghikjkl type **** and relax at the fact that I don't want to read about a homosexual relationship and that people have different opinions on what they like to read, plus who the **** still reads premium novels. View More

naven: HAHAHAHA THE STRAIGHT TOXIC FRAGILE MASCULINITY REALLY SHONE THROUGH HAHAHAHAHA thats just like saying no lgbtqa+ humans want to read a story about hetero love, but alas unfortunately it was forced onto every SINGLE one of us growing up, and sometimes we just want a little spotlight onto other forms of love because, being narrow minded hardly helps anyone imo.. but again, maybe you’re right maybe you’re wrong because as a HOMOsexual i absolutely HATE straight love And MUST HAVE A WARNING BEFORE READING A NOVEL THAT I MIGHT waStE my PreCiOUs SpiriTs stOnEs beCaUSe a BoY anD gIRL miGht fLiRt ☠️☠️🤡 just incase this gets misinterpreted, I’m not saying you’re completely wrong, I’m just saying that the way you worded this is suggesting that straight “dudes” are to small minded and can’t accept that a fictional character may have a different sexual orientation to themselves and would be repulsed by it, thereby needing a warning in the tags so they don’t waste their “spirit stones”, of which you get several free.. daily (unless you spend money on them of course..), and would completely deter them from reading an otherwise potentially amazing novel.. but again oh well, different people, different lives, different views:) ❤️🏳️‍🌈❤️

Omniscient Reader
3 weeks ago
Uh ok cool I wasn't trying to say some deep ass ****, I was just saying some us don't really like read about homo relationships. I don't got a problem with homos, lol you looked way to deep into my comment. View More

naven: HAHAHAHA THE STRAIGHT TOXIC FRAGILE MASCULINITY REALLY SHONE THROUGH HAHAHAHAHA thats just like saying no lgbtqa+ humans want to read a story about hetero love, but alas unfortunately it was forced onto every SINGLE one of us growing up, and sometimes we just want a little spotlight onto other forms of love because, being narrow minded hardly helps anyone imo.. but again, maybe you’re right maybe you’re wrong because as a HOMOsexual i absolutely HATE straight love And MUST HAVE A WARNING BEFORE READING A NOVEL THAT I MIGHT waStE my PreCiOUs SpiriTs stOnEs beCaUSe a BoY anD gIRL miGht fLiRt ☠️☠️🤡 just incase this gets misinterpreted, I’m not saying you’re completely wrong, I’m just saying that the way you worded this is suggesting that straight “dudes” are to small minded and can’t accept that a fictional character may have a different sexual orientation to themselves and would be repulsed by it, thereby needing a warning in the tags so they don’t waste their “spirit stones”, of which you get several free.. daily (unless you spend money on them of course..), and would completely deter them from reading an otherwise potentially amazing novel.. but again oh well, different people, different lives, different views:) ❤️🏳️‍🌈❤️

Omniscient Reader
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C4
The dude basically shows some girl all of his power's when she just shows up randomly. Doesn't know her one bit and then he says you will be my biggest enemy if you tell anybody, god the mc is a dumbass who didnt even try to be secretive. The girls was catwomen so when she gets paralyzed who would she guess could do that ? Oh the only dude who is stupid enough to show his powers like a dumbass. View More
Batman Reborn
3 weeks ago

DaoistMasterJohn: Hm, I will probably drop it here.

I am disappointed in the MC.

First he says and plans to raise his stats (apart from LCK) through hard work and put his stat points into LCK, the next moment he pours nearly all his status points into every stat, just to make them even.
Sure, I also like numbers even, but I wouldn't waste valuable stat points for that... especially at the beginning... when they could be raised any moment randomly again due some action, making them uneven again...

And don't even get me started on the whole music from the previous chapter... the horror...

The Walking Dead's Gamer · C4
3 weeks ago

DaoistMasterJohn: I don't understand why the author has to annoy us with the lyrics... or why the MC has to hear to annoying music in the first place. It's his first fucking life and death situation! It's dumb and annoying to hear some distracting music during this!

The Walking Dead's Gamer · C3
3 weeks ago

subhi: The music is annoying stop this

The Walking Dead's Gamer · C3
3 weeks ago

HellSingFang: the music is really annoying. It disrupts the flow so bad, that I didn't enjoy reading this. I'm considering dropping this novel now.

The Walking Dead's Gamer · C3
3 weeks ago

Tarhanis: Grammar at the level of a kid, it not like a lot of free Software wich can easily correct the bigger mistakes exist. .. Like Gramarly. Lol don t spend your time writing a story if you do not bother to spend 5min to correct the grammar. .

Sorry can t read this and can t understand there is so much good review when a kid can do better than that ..

Lord Of The Blood Emeron
3 weeks ago
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