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Frankl: I like this not dense MC!

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C76
1 week ago

esa123: well i had a feeling that he wouldnt surpass the previous author

A God in Percy Jackson Redux · C6
1 week ago

XMike: 👎(for dropping). 👍(for reason)

Mortal to Omnipotent · C19
1 month ago
What is cdg? Love ur review btw View More

BookCurator: All my reviews are truthful (The way I review originals and translations are different), I'm not going to try and inflate anyone's egos if the book doesn't justify it.

Writing Quality 4/5: The transitions are pretty smooth, nothing much to say here. (There are naturally your occasional grammar mistakes, but I'm not going to nit-pick something so miniscule. These occasional bumps in the writing have no major effect on the actual flow of the writing, which is really good for an ******* writer on WN; where english isn't the first language for many of the readers/writers.) E.g, In this novel you get your occasional use of 'Superfluous Commas', (where the writer uses a comma before because even though it is not necessary.)

Examples of the types of minor errors I'm talking about,

Unlike his demon family who only respected him, because of his power

(Now, your typical extremely minor mistakes.)

Kretos tried to speak, but was unable to. It would seem that his body wasn't develop enough to do such a thing.

- Let's be honest here, we all know that it should be 'developed' and our eyes would auto-correct it pretty quickly anyway.

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It was at this point in time, Kretos lifted his arms he finally noticed that his arms were small and dainty.

This was not the arm of the supreme overlord, this was the arms of a baby.

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(Alright, it doesn't take a genius to recognize that these two sentences aren't perfect. Yet, we as your average readers can easily understand the general plot and direction the author is heading with.)

Stability of Updates 5/5: The updates appear punctual (good to see)

Story Development: The story is primarily about the MC progressing to become more 'human', he enjoys the warm feeling of love and care from a paternal family which is progress.

Character Design: So far I can say that reading only 10 chapters, the MC has character. I admired the way he greeted his son's betrayal, even though it's not very 'realistic' in human terms I still enjoyed reading it nevertheless. Perhaps I've grown tired of the common trope, 'You, a haughty young master stared at my girl? Prepare for the nine familial exterminations.' Yet, this is also the character's double-edged sword. (You get the feeling that since he can greet death so casually, why won't he just do the same in his next life? — This may just be my own personal agenda against tropes like these, many readers would enjoy this type of MC though, so no massive complaints here.)

The writer is able to give a seperate and unique personality to his main cast, so it doesn't feel like that we the readers are reading 2D cardboard cut-outs.

So here's my conclusion, if you enjoy the magical world of 'elves', 'demons' etc you will probably enjoy this novel. Personally, it's not my cup of tea, the novels I enjoy are less main-stream. (The types of MC I admire also differ to this type of MC portrayed by the writer, but I can't comment on 'Writing Quality' in the review due to my personal preferences.)

Overall Review: 4/5 (For an original it's definitely above average, but would I compare it to the likes of a novel like CCG, or perhaps even the averagely translated Shadow Hack? No fucking way.)

My personal recommendations: Doomed To Be Cannon Fodder, Transmigator Meets Reincarnator, EMHS, Lord Xue Ying

If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing.

(I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)

Demon Lord's Reincarnation
1 month ago
Please no harem View More

Niyali: Well, author, I like your novels, and I know I'll like this one, I know it's boring to ask, but I want to know if it Harem?
Hope so. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Sword Art Online: Red's Path
1 month ago
Best thing I’ve read on the site View More
A Time Traveller's Guide to Feudal Japan · C78
2 months ago
This. Is fuckin amazing View More
A Time Traveller's Guide to Feudal Japan · C70
2 months ago

Daoist591682: Gracias por el capitulo, me gustó mucho.

Aquí empiezan las guerras de poder entre Dumbledore y Ron, quien hará más daño en los próximos enfrentamientos me tiene intrigado.

Después de todo uno de los dos se volverá el peón del otro, ya sea de forma consciente o inconsciente.

Me gustaría que Ron deje de descuidar a Daphne, después de todo, según el pensamiento de Ron: se debe mantener a la "vaca" dando leche hasta que ya no pueda.

Aunque como dijo Ron, porqué ser conformista. Me gustaría que no se conforme únicamente con Daphne, cuando puede tener más.

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C45
2 months ago

a_man_has_no_body: YES

Asgardian Sword God · C28
3 months ago

a_man_has_no_body: AYE

Asgardian Sword God · C28
3 months ago
I fully understand and agree with how some of your word choice/ speech patterns don’t really make sense in terms of helping with immersion. But I think it’s something that wouldn’t be too difficult to be fixed. View More

Piggy: The story is fantastic overall, a good read but the grammar needs fixing around and the way you interpret how asgardians talk. I dont think asgardians would say "no way". The way you make them speak is like how people in the 21st century would speaks and not ancient like(dont know how to describe it). Idk, the way you interpret how they speak really bothers me.

Asgardian Sword God
3 months ago

AlucardDCLXVI: Writing Quality: Great, very very few errors, if any
Stability of Updates: Good
Story Development: A realy enjoyable read
Character Design: Fan-fic, but aside from that, the characters feel real (as much as they do in the anime/manga)
World Background: fan-fic

Playing with other Supernaturals
3 months ago
I always appreciate these. Thanks man View More

AlucardDCLXVI: Writing Quality: Great, very very few errors, if any
Stability of Updates: Good
Story Development: A realy enjoyable read
Character Design: Fan-fic, but aside from that, the characters feel real (as much as they do in the anime/manga)
World Background: fan-fic

Playing with other Supernaturals
3 months ago
his YouTube numbers are not high at all it kinda messes it up View More
Immaculate Spirit · C29
4 months ago

royalmurder: Hahahahahahaaha
Isn’t that a little hypocritical? 10/10

Lilim Heritage Online · C1
4 months ago

NineDeaths: Trap is fine, but please notify us if he is, or will be gay. f/f is something I can withstand(in fiction), but m/m isn't.

Lilim Heritage Online · C1
4 months ago

PatriarchExplosion: Novels like these are the reason qidian needs to give us a preview chapter in the voting system. So basically this seemed like a cool new cultivation/western fantasy from just reading the synopsis however after first 12 chapters I can tell you it is a rushed pile of sh*t.

So we start of with some random mages being described and then straight to our protagonist who is apparently from some fallen clan, typical beggining stuff not great not too bad.

And from then the story goes downhill, cultivation is handled poorly we are not showed how did he feel or do his first casting of a spell, which is told of in a one sentence.
Next comes a timeskip and before even fully describing what happened author does another timeskip. After that more time is spent with stupid dialogues about rule of the jungle than basic world building.
I will not describe everything but these first 12 chapters were simply unimpressive, which is weird since author should show the vision for his novel in early chapters. This story might get better but i doubt it, however the translation quality is good and as for update stablity it is too early to judge.

Badge in Azure
5 months ago
And travel alone plz View More
Uchiha Sasuke : Through the Multiverse · C0
5 months ago
Rakudai kishi definitely. I just dont think shinmai maou would take his story to a good direction View More
Uchiha Sasuke : Through the Multiverse · C0
5 months ago

Darkness235: Nope, that spider must die who the **** wants a car sized spider skittering around #nope****thisburnitwithnapalm

Divine Beast Adventures · C163
6 months ago
I love er gen’s novels. His novels actually make me feel emotion View More
A World Worth Protecting · C67
6 months ago

Will5010: 4th :):)
Why did release go down to one?

Divine Beast Adventures · C104
7 months ago
A NEW CHAPTER TY AUTHOR!!!!! View More
Marvels Strongest Father · C10
7 months ago
Updates? Author please dont do us like this View More
Marvels Strongest Father · C9
7 months ago
More likely to be that qidian is chinese owner chinese brand so ofc they would give more priority and more advantages to chinese novels View More

Daoist_of_the_Hood: It's because Qidian's audience was built on Chinese novels so they think we only want that.

12 Hours After
7 months ago

ErozothDraeor: I started reading the main work from author and I much prefer this one.

Marvels Strongest Father · C9
7 months ago
Reading Status: C9
Absolutely amazing. Would love if author made this their main novel instead of the other. This is something I would be willing to spend spirit stones on. View More
Marvels Strongest Father
7 months ago
Reading Status: C32
Decent. But all im going to say is this author’s marvel universe fanfiction is so frigging good its so amazing please update that one more instead of this plz. Thanks View More
Juvenile Entertainer
7 months ago
I love this start its so fricking good View More
Marvels Strongest Father · C9
7 months ago

StygianNyx: So here's the thing he said that he could only write one chapter a day as he was still preparing to move into another house...

Zhanye Black - [Being rewritten] · C0
8 months ago
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