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Maybe don't just have him drop his clothes and have them ****? At least have some interaction?

If you wanna go the mindless sex route, sure but it feels like you want an ***** story right? Not just a smut story? A story with actually plot and "plot" mixed together.

If that's the case, my suggestion would be not to just have him randomly drop his clothes in the middle of a rural village and suddenly have two women **** him like it's normal? At the very least I dunno have him help there village in some way, talk to them for information and slowly have his pheromones take action? Again, these are just suggestions, I just thought that was a bit iffy, I guess?

As in a bit too unbelievable? Anyway, keep it up, author. View More
Rebirth of A Dragon God · C26
6 hours ago
Acheron trained to the limits in Archery when he rescued Helen. He may have died a bunch getting to her as well, we just didn't see it. He's basically immortal after all. View More
The Immortal Mutant Teen · C41
11 hours ago
You sound like a fascist. Lmao, "screw anyone who doesn't agree".

He could just make his own force/village or even clan. Then make all of them strong. He doesn't need to throw them out to potential enemies in the long run. View More

AlucardDi: first of all of beast kin are oppressed by humans them yeah he needs to hand out cultivation techniques to other beasts he can trust. Screw anyone who doesn't agree

Golden Fox with System · C16
1 day ago

MastersgtJames: Yuki turns out to be..... HIS WIFE!

Golden Fox with System · C12
1 day ago
I don't care if he isn't losing, yet the way you say he's basically completely immune to any damage cause he;s one cultivation realm above them? I'm doubting it. A wolf is already naturally stronger and bigger than a Fox, so I think racial advantages would take play here too. View More
Golden Fox with System · C7
1 day ago
I never said doing it everywhere though, plus, it would not end in a world war. You just escalated that **** so much.

If killing people ended up in world war, every murderer in existence would have caused a world war by now. At most it'd be a war in the backgrounds. Outside the public eye as long as they can keep it there. Killing one dude does not become the equivalent of a world war, the heck.

Not to mention Acheron loves killing anyway, he'll probably thrive in causing chaos. View More

MapleHound: Killing a family with a lot of influence right in the public eye. although killing 1 wont do anything if he continues doing it everywhere he goes it will end in a literal world war.

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C36
6 days ago
How is that going to war with the world? He's killing one idiot. You're saying the government is stupid enough to declare war on a family that is like 1000x more powerful than Poisons family? Not to mention, Acheron isn't anywhere near mentally stable. He's literally an immortal caveman.

I highly doubt he has any of the moral barriers preventing him. The government would not declare war on a family that is capable of destroying probably the entirety of the countries economy over a stupid kid. View More

MapleHound: That is the literal equivalent of going to war against the entire world. The Belau family might be powerful but only 1 of them is immortal. And as awesomely op as Acheron is. I seriously doubt he can protect his family of 14 from over 7,000,000,000 people.

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C36
6 days ago

NRplayer: That's because the spirits are supposed to be childish or child-like, I purposely made then that way and that would actually be explained in the future. Because of their eternal lives spirits end up having a very small or short span of attention and eventually start regressing into a child-like state and if you know some mythology you probably already heard that spirits are mischievous and playful creatures.

The reason why the mc acts that way despite having skills that should power up his intellectual is that those skills can't all integrate his mind or brain at once otherwise he wouldn't handle it and even though he would be fine the skills efficiency would be way lower, so those skills are slowly integrating with him and that's also one of the reasons he has low control over his skills. Not forgetting his unreasonable strong spr that makes it harder for the skills to merge with him because his soul is too dense.

I don't mind you being honest, I'm just saying what I feel you ended up misunderstanding because of my poor writing.

My name is Kios, Kios Niftalia and I’m a slime.
1 week ago
My bad if I come across as trying to flame or anything, I just try and be as honest as possible.

The idea of the story is good, I'd have probably enjoyed it if everything else was worked upon properly. I say the character should have been smart simply because, the character has like 4-5 S-SSS rank skills that increase his cognitive abilities. If I remember correctly, he had the skill to think a whole lot faster than normal people, correct? Even if he's not smart originally, he'd still be a heck of a lot smarter than most people with that ability, simply because he can think through everything at like, 10-100x the speed of others?

Of course, most of that would be my own assumption, I did read the story yesterday and to be honest, I didn't bother to read the entire status lmao, it's a bit long after a while.

I simply called everyone an idiot, because that's how they came across. When he interacted with the "spirits" it came across as a bunch of children talking to each other, I'm not saying it as an insult either, It genuinely reminded me of such a thing.

However, all of my opinions aside, I'm sure some people will like your story, just isn't for me pal. Good luck with your stories and improvement. :) View More

NRplayer: Thanks for your opinion but what chapter did you stop at? Also I never tried to make the main-character super smart, he’s just a slightly cautious person that’s all. And calling everyone an idiot isn’t exactly the correct way to proceed they are more of too happy. Sorry about my bad grammar on that point I can’t say anything as I’m aware that my grammar isn’t the best.

About the seriousness of the story, I actually started this with the purpose of it being a comedy but turns out I’m not funny so I turned it Into a fantasy.

But once again I understand you’re point of view and thanks for reading until now.

My name is Kios, Kios Niftalia and I’m a slime.
1 week ago

NRplayer: Thanks for your opinion but what chapter did you stop at? Also I never tried to make the main-character super smart, he’s just a slightly cautious person that’s all. And calling everyone an idiot isn’t exactly the correct way to proceed they are more of too happy. Sorry about my bad grammar on that point I can’t say anything as I’m aware that my grammar isn’t the best.

About the seriousness of the story, I actually started this with the purpose of it being a comedy but turns out I’m not funny so I turned it Into a fantasy.

But once again I understand you’re point of view and thanks for reading until now.

My name is Kios, Kios Niftalia and I’m a slime.
1 week ago
Reading Status: C3
Not gonna lie, his story is pretty bad.

I highly suggest the author doesn't try to write a supposedly super intelligent character without being able to make it convincing.

The main character is an idiot, the other characters are idiots. He got labelled an idiot, the moment he admits to being tricked by a trap dungeon. It wouldn't be a very good trap dungeon if it DIDN'T trick you.

With all due respect, continue writing your story, however my opinion probably won't change. The grammar is seriously bad, the character interaction is literally more like a bunch of children than someone with a massive amount of OP skills that should make the MC a lot more intelligent than he's acting.

So sorry, I'm out. The story is just bad. View More
My name is Kios, Kios Niftalia and I’m a slime.
1 week ago

SamStrike: I dont want a psycopath, but if the MC isnt willing to kill someone that tried to kill him because she is a girl or has a bad past then it sucks. Doesnt matter what past the enemy had, she/he tried to kill you and if the MC would have been weaker he would have died

Endless Journey: Infinite Realms
1 week ago

asmosam: excellent
When the previous novel stopped, I was very frustrated
Now I expect a lot from your novel
excellent
When the previous novel stopped, I was very frustrated
Now I expect a lot from your novel

What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes?
1 week ago

Cliff_Slayer: someone please give this gentleman a cookie.

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C36
1 week ago

dracosage14: Do this Idea this is a good one

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C36
1 week ago
"Issei went into a daze seeing her face." I think you mean Yun Che, right? So just pointing out a typo.

Also, it might be just me personally but I don't like Yun Che, I think you should take little aunt as well, like maybe Issei saves her somehow? I dunno. Also, Don't forget the Little Demon Empress! She's one of the best waifu's of this world arc. View More
The Wish of the Dragon · C104
1 week ago
Make sure you actually kill him, please? Don't do some nonsense cliche where he's spared.

It'll be a good chance to show off the power of the Belau too, how there mere family name can make the government turn a blind eye in fear, so even if he killed a few morons here and there, they don't mess with him and his family. View More
The Immortal Mutant Teen · C36
1 week ago
Well, he probably went through many stages in his immortal life and this is one of them. View More

AbsoluteYinYang: He doesn't strike me as the person to keep his Immortality from someone he loves

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C29
2 weeks ago
Yeah, it's a lot more preferable than spending 10 chapters with a character like, "Oh, I wonder who reincarnated me, how is this possible!?" it also gives him a good reason for staying calm and reasonable.

The whole giving the mom a system thing honestly surprised me in a good way too. My first time seeing it happen where the main character gives someone a system. Keep it up. ;) View More

ImSith: Right, I've read and jerked my gherkin to alot of novels on here and was trying to find a way to make the story somewhat "unique." What better way than to give him control of his next life rather than a more powerful entity?

Rebirth of A Dragon God · C2
2 weeks ago

ImSith: Right, I've read and jerked my gherkin to alot of novels on here and was trying to find a way to make the story somewhat "unique." What better way than to give him control of his next life rather than a more powerful entity?

Rebirth of A Dragon God · C2
2 weeks ago
Self Reincarnation? View More
Rebirth of A Dragon God · C2
2 weeks ago

MotivatedSloth: Well, the answer is both yes and no. There is only one real love interest and real partner, but there will be a lot of fun stuff going on. I don't want to say anything more cuz it would spoil the story hard. Anyway, thanks for the support and I hope you will have a good read! (The system will play a great role in... forcing MC into certain situations and decisions, that I can say :D )

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
2 weeks ago
Can I assume from the title this is a harem or? I don't mind either way, just wondering since it's important information for some people.

Maybe it's just a dude going around, creating "plot" with otherwise cliche protagonist heroines and then moving on to the next one and never seeing the previous one again or?

I'll read it anyhow, just thought I'd ask. View More

MotivatedSloth: Hello guys, Author here!

While this is my meme novel, I find a lot of joy writing it.
While you might find it cliche, this was my entire purpose for writing it. I want to combine all most selling points in WN, and create a great parody of it while keeping a good plot and funny action enact!

I hope you will enjoy the read!

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
2 weeks ago

Abordoaj: same

Battle Royale of the Sinners · C99
3 weeks ago

Abordoaj: Im just copying this guy because i feel the same with AwronZizao. This is kind of annoying, Liu Ping needs to eat a loss already. Everything is somehow going his way, which is weird. Just because he might have awakened to how retarded he was previously doesn't mean you suddenly become intelligent enough to puppeteer legendary fucking warlords and tyrants.

Battle Royale of the Sinners · C99
3 weeks ago

Arcibo: Do you think it could be the system?

Battle Royale of the Sinners · C86
3 weeks ago

Mr_parsa: PLOT ARMOR:"You underestimate my power"

Entering the World of HSDxD · C32
3 weeks ago
I'm actually finding this interesting as f.uck, so I hope you keep this up.

Gonna pile up chapters for now and then bulldoze them later. View More
The Immortal Mutant Teen · C26
3 weeks ago
You get PhDs in universities. View More

DRAWBLACK: He says he has tons of PhDs but has also said that he’s never gone to school before

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C23
3 weeks ago
kys View More

Nobelsky: No harem please...
Just give Erina to Soma...
only Soma can handle that 'Tsun' kind of personality of her...While Alex will found it troublesome..

Food Wars: The Golden Hands · C34
3 weeks ago
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