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Rauwynt

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2018-05-06 Joined Global

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First of all thanks for the chapters! Corresponding to your question, i enjoy your story very much and am always happy seeing you uploading a new chapter. In terms of your grammar i can‘t say much, because most of the time i skim over mistakes, while it definitely feels like there are less mistakes, you still make similar ones. I myself aren‘t a native english speaker, nor did i lern english professionally except school, so i am no expert, but one thing you do often and is probably one of the most disturbing things in your story, are missing articles like „the“ or missing auxiliary(sometimes main) verbs „am, is, are, was, were“(the different forms of the verb „[to] be“) there are many more „easy“ mistakes and probably some more not so easy(which i could also do wrong), if you want some help, you could reply this comment with your discord name and then i can try and help you with some basic things.
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