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This really needs more game aspects. It doesn't feel like a game and is he ever going to cook? View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C32
6 hours ago
The off screen wonder is getting tedious. He's amazing, we get it. View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C31
6 hours ago
Wait, there is no way she is a player in Master mode and only in Master mode can you make your own spells so what is happening? View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C26
7 hours ago
Why is he going on quests? I thought he wanted to do his profession finally. View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C25
7 hours ago
NPCs is this game suck. So rude and mellow dramatic. I hope this game is like Ultima, you can kill anyone. View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C25
7 hours ago
This game would stress me out. View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C24
7 hours ago

Alvi101: He just need to cook that is it. He already has the bosses corps

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C22
8 hours ago

captainawesome: I hope author has him go back even powerful enough to punish that a$$. Give him a thorough beating, or hell, just kill the guy outright, reap what you sow😏😈 him and that village chief

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C22
8 hours ago
Why keep playing this game? I'd just quit after all this crap its inflicting. There are tons of games out there. View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C22
8 hours ago
Elderly should be Elder. View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C22
8 hours ago
Uhm, there are still lots of mistakes in this. View More

KaiserXIII: Well done, author! Also, props to proofreader-bro for cleaning things up! You guys rock!

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C21
8 hours ago
Uhm I am confused didn't he get a great sword from the Orc King? View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C19
8 hours ago

Mas_Toro: Well, why would mc learn about the game world? He had been living the same (similar) world. He had much more information about this game world than anyone else, maybe even the game developer.

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C18
8 hours ago
What is wrong with his play style? Its a game, if you are enjoying it you are doing it correctly. View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C18
8 hours ago
Whew, Nex acted in time. The boy will grow up strong now instead of weak like the rest of us. View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C17
8 hours ago
Our author really loves tentacles. I am a little worried about this story if it becomes an anime. lol View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C16
8 hours ago
Just out of curiosity where are you finding American based MCs? I don't think I have ever encountered one. View More

Mistborn: This is an excellent mashup of reincarnation/apocalypse genre. The main character is very relatable and you understand his motivations and goals clearly. The story is based in Indonesia, Bali and it’s very refreshing to see something other than American based for a change. So far there is no hyper nationalistic attitudes of thinking their ppl are somehow superior to every other nation with the urge to enslave everyone from other countries or something crazy like that. No misogyny or gratuitous violence / gore / r@pe etc. The main character is not over powered and just has an edge on others because of his experience. He is a family man and I doubt this will go down the route of him building a herem empire where he’s drowning in boooobs (thank heavens for that). I’ve seen people criticizing the novel for being slow, but I don’t agree. The author takes a valid amount of chapters to flesh out the characters and get the ball rolling. It’s called World building.
Over all the grammar is the only weak point in this novel. Taking into account that English is not the authors first language, it’s still pretty good and doesn’t take away anything from enjoying this novel. There’s a decent number of chapters already out and seems like author is quite regular at giving us new chapters. The story, character and world background is fleshed out enough and more would be revealed as the story unfolds. The novel deserves more love and recognition than it currently has gotten. I would highly Highly recommended this novel to others.

Doomsday Pillars
1 day ago

TheEnd: To be honest I expected this story to be terrible or for the grammar and plot to be all over the place. And for that I do apologize I did not expect for it to be a hidden gem. As of chapter 9 where you have written up to for us readers to enjoy the story is flowing very smoothly and while there are a lot of cliches, they are put in such a way that even though we know them they are actually enjoyable to read. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you if you are serious about this story and don't drop it or start to rush your chapters and give us half baked nonsense. Then this is looking to be a new favorite of mine. I saw you had no reviews and since I've never reviewed a story I thought hey why not do a first for the both of us. You have a great story here and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Have fun and for anyone reading this I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.

A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO
1 day ago

FlyingDutchman7: I wrote this story because there's a lack of good LitRPG stories about crafters. Authors come up with these great worlds then only focus on a single charter and quest line who spends most of his time out in the world raiding various dungeons while ignoring most of the game world.

I wanted to create a story where the focus is on the MC's crafting profession and how he uses it to gain power rather than him getting some epic rare quest and wandering off to magically became a fighter. I want the other guilds and players to have their own motivations and be more than just names who's only goal seems to be to capture or kill the MC.

I want this story to be about farming and guild politics rather than high-adventure. It'll take a while to hit it's stride but I hope everyone will be happy when it does.

Farming For Gold
1 day ago

thestatsguy: Website : qidian china
Views : 7.80million
Rating : 9.1(724)
Chapters : 900+approx
Status :completed
Word count : 2.73million
author level : lv5
No of works : 7
Disscussion : 1817
Year started : 2011
Chinese title : 网游之射破苍穹

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I know many of you might be hesitating cuz it's Ye Fei Ye novel! I can understand that! But I promise you it's a very cute and prolly the funniest novel with like zero heart wrenching moments! Give it a try guys!

MC is very different and also super surprising thing is ML isn't a complete jerk!

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MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks
1 day ago

DJason: Stop trashing this novel when you havent even read it. Author and translators deserve more smh.













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MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks
1 day ago

Shalllou: I must say I'm one of those people who vote for books without even looking at them just so I can get it stones.
But why does everyone have the novel so bad!?!? I perfectly understand everyone has their panties in a wod because this novel was picked before another one and I have also been on the receiving end of this, but what does that have to do with the book? Smh. Sometimes I feel quidian is better disabling the Review section cause 9/10 people don’t even use it to leave a TRUE review not just their salty comments.

MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks
1 day ago

DodgeChance: I would first like to write that for some reason some words in this review keep getting censored for no reason even though most of them are not even bad words... Regardless, try your best to fill the gaps when necessary.

This novel isn't bad so far and for fans of this kind of genre i would recommend it but i cannot see where the 5/5 stars are coming from, especially since many of the reviews i have seen hadn't even reached over chapter 100 before reviewing. I will go over some of the key reasons for my overall score of about 3.5, which i think is very fair for this novel at the moment.

Translation quality. The translation is littered with small mistakes and grammatical errors, which although alone do not make any significant difference, pile up overtime to make it into a bit of a problem. The reason it’s a problem is that small misunderstandings can cause bigger problems in a mystery style story, which this one seems to have turned into after the first beginner dungeon. Each dungeon (a bit of a stretch to call them dungeons) at this point are 'solve a mystery in a certain time' missions and therefore to follow along with the mystery an excellent translation is essential so that you get all the details. Another problem is that i think some of the words aren't translated exactly to their correct meaning or at least some of the meaning from the original Chinese is missing. Now, i am unable to read Chinese and cannot confirm this so i may be wrong and it could just be bad writing, but either way it would lower my score. An example of this happening would be during chapter 71: Venture In, where the MC enters his first team dungeon. He reads the background which says "Alcatraz Prison has been experiencing some mysterious incidents lately. Your special expert team has been hired to solve the mysteries". And from this he says, "Terms like "mysteries" and "special expert" made Kieran think of paranormal activity or something along that line" and then goes onto state how it must be ghosts that cannot be killed by regular means before even getting to the island. How does this make sense? Since when has special expert or mysteries instantly meant that it must be ghosts or paranormal? Of course, he ends up being correct (because the writer obviously already knows what he will make happen) but him ****** random claims like that is either bad writing, the MC is retarded, or some meaning has been lost. At least in English mystery certainly does not mean it must be a ghost, which means that the translation is missing some information somewhere or the writer is just bad. Which could be either as i will explain.

Story development. The story develops in a way that might trick you into thinking that it and the MC are smart, but neither actually are. Why? Because for it to be smart stuff actually has to make sense with clues given to the reader, things that can actually be picked up on if you're careful. If **** pops up out of nowhere, that isn't a twist or an amazing reveal in a mystery... it’s just bad writing and feels cheap as ****. And this happens in all 3 of the 'solve this mystery dungeons' (the animal one isn't as bad). Example of this poor writing. During the MC's second dungeon where the MAIN MISSION is to find a girl, he only finds her by coincidence at the end whilst completing a side mission. Now, maybe i just missed some masterfully hidden secrets and we should have known she would be with the gangster dude hiding in a coffin underground, but to me it just seems like a bull**** way to wrap up the mission because he felt like it was about time to end that arc. Just randomly bringing in characters out of nowhere isn't a twist, it's cheap. Another thing in the same mission is that the Duke dude is introduced literally right at the end... Who thought that's a clever idea? Introduce a brand-new character out of nowhere at the end. Again, not an enjoying mystery to read if it is literally impossible to try and figure out who the bad guy is. If **** just pops out of nowhere then what’s the point of following along? I thought the writer would trick us by ****** it a character that has already been established and has been trying to trick the MC, like Carl. Such as he was manipulating from behind the scenes, acting the fool but in reality, was in control. A kind of the mantis stalks the cicada, unaware of the oriole behind sort of twist. After-all, i thought to myself, he won't just add a new character in out of nowhere at the end of the mission, will he? But then this Duke dude shows up with some of his goons and a captured police chief. Sure you sort of knew there was an army dude but him just showing up isn’t interesting at all. The story after the first dungeon turns into a solve this mystery game written by a guy who can't write a very good and compelling mystery story. You can put that down to lack of experience, poor translation or limited time due to it being set in a ‘dungeon’ but whatever the reason the mystery aspect doesn’t feel very fleshed out which is important for it to be enjoyable.

Now about the MC not actually being smart. Perhaps that is unfair because he can say some reasonable stuff, especially near the beginning imo. But, some other stuff just doesn’t make sense and is similar to how he jumped to conclusions about ghosts and such mentioned previously (assuming that the meaning was translated correctly). He goes to Nobian’s place after killing him and sees a blackboard with 5 names on it with 4 of them crossed out, his name is also on the list but hasn’t been crossed out. Lawless comes and says that he knows the guy called Gibbon, saying he was strong. All that they know is that Nobian must have worked together with someone because even in ambush he couldn’t have taken Gibbon alone. They also say, for some reason, that “He seemed to be quite familiar with my information, something a man alone could not have achieved.” Which doesn’t make much sense. Why could a man alone not find out his information? It doesn’t seem difficult to ask around, purchase the information or simply watch the MC himself. But that’s fine because we have already established that he has accomplices anyway. So what information do we have. We know he has accomplices and killed four other players… Then the MC jumps to the conclusion “There must be a killer organization founded by a couple of players, an organization unknown to the public”. How does he conclude that with the information he was just given? It even states that Nobian might have been a psychopath, so he might have just been doing it for the sake of it. Or he and some people he knows might just PK together for extra loot, after all it was known that the MC was loaded, and so must Gibbon have been if he was a veteran. It doesn’t seem to make much logical sense to instantly say with so much certainty that it just must be some sort of secret underground killer organisation. Perhaps the translation has something to do with it, but I think it’s more likely that the writer doesn’t really know how to make a character solve mysteries and seem smart, so he just basically gives them the ability to see into the future instead. It would have made much more sense if the MC said that It MIGHT be an underground organisation instead of instantly being certain of it as if he already knew the answer when he couldn’t have. There are other examples of this too where the MC, with very little or no evidence, will say **** that doesn’t make much logical sense with the information given, but still ends up being correct because the writer obviously wants him to be.
Another problem is the dumping of weapon stats when the MC doesn’t even use the weapon. It feels like a waste of time and seems to be there for no reason. It adds nothing to the story at all. I think it would be much better to only give detailed item breakdowns for stuff the MC will use or important items and enemies.

Also, I don’t know if this is an issue with character design or story development, I think a bit of both, but the MC’s motivation and pressure of curing his illness is solved a bit too quickly imo. After his second dungeon you can already see how much money he can potentially make so any and all pressure about trying to save cash to cure himself is down the drain. It removes a certain amount of pressure for me because at this point he is ****** so much from a single ‘dungeon’ that he can pretty much cure himself easily. The beginning dungeon in this regard was my favourite because he was still weak, had to strategize more and the pressure of his illness was still looming over him.

Another problem I have is that by ****** the ‘dungeon’ areas into these mysteries it handicaps character development in a sense. This is because mysteries are made good by interesting characters, thought provoking goings on and clues that you can follow along with the character. But by ****** dungeon missions into mysteries instead of what traditional dungeons are like it means that new characters must be made each time, ****** it hard to become interested in these characters, because you know they will be gone by the end of the story. This in turn makes me even less engaged in the mystery mission and is also part of way I liked the starting dungeon a bit more than the other dungeons. Trying to write an intriguing mystery is very difficult in the kind of style and format the writer is using. This is also why the fights are much more intriguing to read and is why I wish we would put some more focus on those instead.

I also would have liked some more variety in the main missions given. More solve this mystery started to get tedious.

I could go on and on about more issues I have but by then I will probably end up with 3-4 thousand words, so I will stop here with the criticism.
Now you might be thinking that I must fucking hate this novel… but I don’t hate it, as can be seen from by score. I think a 3/5 is more than fair because despite all of the issues I could name if I wanted to the premise is still somewhat interesting and this story does appeal to a certain niche of reader. It isn’t terrible but is by no means revolutionary. I would say give it a read because if you can ignore some of the holes in the translation and story it can be enjoyable at parts.

The Devil's Cage
1 day ago

thestatsguy: Website : qidian china
Views : 1.26 million
Rating : 8.5(338)
Chapters : 1399
Status : ongoing
Word count : 3.04 million
author rank : lv5

The Devil's Cage
1 day ago
Although the reader comments in here are even scarier since they are real people. View More

bavieca: I have read well past what is translated.

If you like MC's that only need the barest of excuses to kidnap and rape as many women as he wants, then this story is for you. Kingdom building with DBZ style power up fights. Expect some fights to take several chapters as the MC and his opponent power up over and over again until everyone else is just left to stare and watch as he fights. Story had a lot of good concepts and I was looking forward to seeing where it went, but frankly, i don't like reading about an unabashed rapist and I stopped enjoying DBZ years ago.

Translation quality is decent even though he takes some liberties at parts. The translator is consistent. But in the end I have no rape fantasies and kingdom building is meaningless because of the individually overpowered MC to this degree.

The Lord’s Empire
1 day ago
Thanks for the warning. I'll be sure to avoid another story about how great it is to rape women. View More

bavieca: I have read well past what is translated.

If you like MC's that only need the barest of excuses to kidnap and rape as many women as he wants, then this story is for you. Kingdom building with DBZ style power up fights. Expect some fights to take several chapters as the MC and his opponent power up over and over again until everyone else is just left to stare and watch as he fights. Story had a lot of good concepts and I was looking forward to seeing where it went, but frankly, i don't like reading about an unabashed rapist and I stopped enjoying DBZ years ago.

Translation quality is decent even though he takes some liberties at parts. The translator is consistent. But in the end I have no rape fantasies and kingdom building is meaningless because of the individually overpowered MC to this degree.

The Lord’s Empire
1 day ago

bavieca: unless the translater is editing them out, the moment you get to the chapter where it happens, will you feel like an idiot then?

The Lord’s Empire
1 day ago

bavieca: I have read well past what is translated.

If you like MC's that only need the barest of excuses to kidnap and rape as many women as he wants, then this story is for you. Kingdom building with DBZ style power up fights. Expect some fights to take several chapters as the MC and his opponent power up over and over again until everyone else is just left to stare and watch as he fights. Story had a lot of good concepts and I was looking forward to seeing where it went, but frankly, i don't like reading about an unabashed rapist and I stopped enjoying DBZ years ago.

Translation quality is decent even though he takes some liberties at parts. The translator is consistent. But in the end I have no rape fantasies and kingdom building is meaningless because of the individually overpowered MC to this degree.

The Lord’s Empire
1 day ago

inuekiba24: There are only two books that makes me go back to gravitytales everyday. One is The Lord's Empire and the other is The Records of the Human Emperor. One is constantly updating while the other rarely updates. I love the story. I do hope that once it gets transferred here that it wouldn't cost too much..hehehe.. The story gets more interesting as the story comes along. It has game-elements, history, rebirth, revenge, a bit of romance here and there ( not too much, subtle) and a good story-line. Definitely a good read.

The Lord’s Empire
1 day ago

Neveryoumindme: I endured such a sacrifice so that pure minds like yours wouldn't have to face it... i'm weeping in sadness, my efforts were in vain... i couldn't save you...

The world turned into a game after I woke up
1 day ago
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