Patoverone

1mth

Commented

i think you mean to enlighten satoru, cause he is the one talking with sakumo, not itachi

Sakumo continued to enlighten Itachi.

Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother

Anime & Comics · Yeye_Qiu

Patoverone

2mth

Commented

I believe its the right choice, you have to understand that the protagonist also has a life beside work and video games, you have to explore more slice of life topics, and elaborate independent arcs

(I believe the novel is progressing too quickly, so I thought about slowing down a bit. Let me know if you have any objections.)

Patoverone

1yr

Commented

Hands up in the air Argentina

Quinn West - MC - I like to tango.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Patoverone

2yr

Commented

you have repeat the "looking" word here.

"He knew," said Amelia. "There wasn't a single word of chatter about the attack or even a peep anywhere that the Death Eaters were about to do something, and we have been looking actively looking for them since the carnival," he eyes turned sharp, "but he knew that You-Know-Who was going to attack me, and he came barging in.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Patoverone

2yr

Posted

I have to say, one of the best things to read in webnovel. Keep up the good work. I hope that when you finish this fanfic you could continue the kuroko no basket fiction. Thnx

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Patoverone

2yr

Posted

Its one of the only fictions in webnovel which is consistent in uploading content, and has a stock of chapters plenty for anyone to pass the time reading. The grammar quality of them is bit lacking sometimes, but it doesnt bother you in the long term. I assume that with a good editor it could be solved.

Monster Integration

Fantasy · AnWan

Patoverone

3yr

Commented

"Don't get angry Luffy, stretch your hand, and grab ZORO as he has fallen into the water. Luffy nods at this and does so, grabbing Zoro and pulling him out of the salty waters.