Ayer52

2mth

Commented

Please don’t follow canon and have Thalia end up as a tree. With Lucian there, he should be able to prevent anything bad like that from happening.

ch 40 Chapter 40

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Ayer52

3mth

Commented

I hope Tiamat doesn’t end up with Bahamut. I’m not a fan of when the MC is being manipulated, so I want him to reject Tiamat completely.

ch 0 7 [Chapter 6: Aerios and Tiamat]

DxD: Red Dragon Dominates the Omniverse

Anime & Comics · GodOfPride_z

Ayer52

4mth

Commented

I get that you are introducing new characters and showing that despite his power increase he is still weak, but be careful of having characters show up too much that completely overpower your MC. It can get annoying if the MC is looked down on too much and he can’t do anything about it yet. Other than that I’m enjoying the story and the growth he Cao Cao is showing.

ch 0 5 Woes Of A Spear Boy

Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story

Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1

Ayer52

6mth

Commented

Is it just me or is the story now moving at a snails pace? Each chapter lately has been mostly filled with inner dialogue or over explanations that don’t move the story forward.

ch 130 We are gentle and kind

Riser Phenex isn't a villain

Anime & Comics · akikan40

Ayer52

8mth

Replied to MrEnigma

I feel the same way, the story has been slowing down a great deal. Then again I’m not a fan of story arcs where the MC hides his identity so maybe it’s just me.

ch 438 438. Marineford War

Transcended as Lord Buggy

Anime & Comics · Capt_mermain1

Ayer52

8mth

Commented

Even though it was part of his plans, they should fuck over Frozen Cloud. I never liked them in the original story

ch 0 8 Plan Succeeded, Awakening of Divine Veins

I am in ATG, I have a Chat Group

Anime & Comics · Kaoski

Ayer52

9mth

Commented

I really enjoyed this chapter, I like that you showed the perspective of Koujou and his family. I hope you continue showing his perspective as they finally arrive in the Land of Grass and how they feel about finding hope for their family.

ch 57 CH - 57 Success!

Naruto - Leader of Kusagakure

Anime & Comics · Kaiszer

Ayer52

9mth

Commented

I’ve been enjoying the story so far but the development with Fleur seems pretty rushed to me. Though I may have a bias because I’m not a fan of Fleur. Other than that, it’s an entertaining story

ch 71 Chapter 71: Leaving France

HP: The Gray Sorcerer

Anime & Comics · Abyssuit

Ayer52

9mth

Commented

Too much drama these past few chapters. Also when you throw in Kai’s personality, I can no longer continue this story. You made Kai a very unlikeable character, let alone an MC.

ch 46 Afraid

Laid-back Highschooler In Bleach (With Soul Cube)

Anime & Comics · IWriteFanfic

Ayer52

11mth

Commented

End the fight, too many authors drag fights out. It gets boring and repetitive to read long fight sequences

ch 15 The Battle Starts

Fate/DxD: Karna

Anime & Comics · Indian_Rake

Ayer52

11mth

Commented

Is Whitebeard going to get de-aged like Francisco so he can join the battle and spend more time with his crew?

ch 186 Progress, New World and Invitations

One Piece: Reborn as Enel

Anime & Comics · VeganMaster

Ayer52

1yr

Commented

Another Summer POV would be entertaining to read! Reading the POV of customers and the changes that are brought to their world that occur from what they buy/learn from the shop is always a great time.

ch 19 Gacha

Multiversal: The Shop

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Ayer52

1yr

Posted

Typical neglect background where Kushina and Minato somehow forget that they have another son, but this time he turns out to be inheriting the legacy of Ace from One Piece, who has been given a new Naruto-style background. Chapters lack progression so the story is overly drawn out and it becomes a chore to read through and is boring and feels repetitive at times.

Naruto : The Fire Fist Ninja

Anime & Comics · Creative_Factory0

Ayer52

1yr

Commented

Yeah this chapter was really annoying. Like James has killed Grendel, beat down Sirzechs, and then defeated Crom Cruach and then got him as a familiar, yet Odin still underestimates him? Doesn’t make any sense.

ch 255 Priceless

High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms

Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029

Ayer52

1yr

Commented

Pretty interesting so far, the only problem is the occasional mixing up of the female and male pronouns.

ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The Truth

DXD : Kraken

Anime & Comics · SSasuketamin

Ayer52

1yr

Commented

Hopefully with this the Yang Chen drama can start to recede. It’s been a bit too much these last few chapters and I’m ready to move past the drama and continue the plot.

ch 63 God of War & Goddess of Wisdom

A Vampire in My Wife is a Beautiful CEO

Anime & Comics · Photosphere

Ayer52

1yr

Commented

I’m hoping for Rukia, Rangiku and Yoruichi for the harem

ch 12 Chapter: 12

God of Contract

Anime & Comics · meatball_san

Ayer52

1yr

Commented

Great chapter, would love to see more chill chapters with Wilhelm and the guys

ch 272 Chapter 254

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Ayer52

1yr

Commented

No matter how much sense it makes to kick her out of the harem (I’m fully on board for that, screw Sakura) the author most likely won’t do that. He’ll probably just punish Sakura sexually and the betrayal will just be forgotten, which I find disappointing.

ch 107 Meeting Tsunade

A Superhero Harem? Their love makes me stronger (MHA, OPM, Naruto, OP)

Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker

Ayer52

1yr

Posted

An interesting premise that is ruined by the MC. The MC is a warlord of the sea that is trained by Zephyr and Garp but is still a major simp and pushover for everyone.

I am a Rich Second-Generation in One Piece

Anime & Comics · Rysangel

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Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

DxD: Red Dragon Dominates the Omniverse

Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story

Riser Phenex isn't a villain

Transcended as Lord Buggy

I am in ATG, I have a Chat Group

Naruto - Leader of Kusagakure

HP: The Gray Sorcerer

Laid-back Highschooler In Bleach (With Soul Cube)

Fate/DxD: Karna

One Piece: Reborn as Enel

Multiversal: The Shop

Naruto : The Fire Fist Ninja

High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms

DXD : Kraken

A Vampire in My Wife is a Beautiful CEO

God of Contract

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Superhero Harem? Their love makes me stronger (MHA, OPM, Naruto, OP)

I am a Rich Second-Generation in One Piece

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