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Exodian: Couldn't finish the second chapter. This feels sooooo primitive. Even among fanfiction. While this, judging by reviews, can be among the best HP fics on webnovel, doesn't mean it being good. It means that there are few to no good HP fics on this site. Trust me, I've read some very good ones, and there are very good ones. But, maybe, not here.
This having a score of 4.7 only tells me personally, that scores of webnovel absolutely can't be trusted.Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
BadKrow: Imagine by the time the protagonist comes out the war with the hunters is already over.Paragon of Destruction · C288
A New Wolf in Twilight · C0
MightyHeart: How hard is it to find an editor man... God damnAbsolute Stealing · C2
Absolute Stealing · C2
Absolute Stealing · C1
Alex_Vhler: I hadn't seen the last two avengers movies and I just spoiled
always avoiding memes and anything related to spoiler and I just screwed myselfAbsolute Stealing · C1
The New Issei · C1
Touji: Great history.. Mc is cool (last chaps) Recommended :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-))Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows
Dosithee: I admire anyone who has the courage and ability to write and encourage them to continue. That said, I couldn’t continue reading this and wouldn’t recommend it to others. I hope the author will continue to write and improve or just enjoy the process. Hot he idea behind the story isn’t bad, however every other part of it seems like it was done with little effort and skill. The characters, dialogue, fight scenes, training, world building, system, etc. we’re all flimsy and have have a long way to go before this story is worth reading in my eyes. The grammar and word choice make this seem like it’s machine translated, though it’s not. I’m not a snob, and read my fair share of web novels and ln, but this isn’t even to that standard. I have no idea how this got to be in first place and I hope this isn’t the standard for original stories on here. Lord Of Hell, still of poor quality, is much better than this in my opinion. I encourage the author to keep writing though since many enjoy this story, but i would wan the potential reader not to expect much.Last Wish System
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VicenZa: This is the first Naruto fanfic that is not Konoha centered as far as I know. So I'm really looking forward to it. and I hope this novel won't be dropped too. :)Gaara
IamSpecial: Useless idiot trash author only know how to delete people review just to keep rating. Fine I will just do it everytime you delete it. Idiot author, dont know how to receive criticsmReborn as Neji Hyuga with a system
Tensei_Rigan: Criticism? If you want to "XP XP XP" with 1-star review, go somewhere else idiot...Reborn as Neji Hyuga with a system
trekt: Stupid thing too say, the review system is there for a reason, so people can get a picture of the story before reading it.
He wrote it, so he has to be open for critic, even if he dislikes it.
Also I could like the story and still say that it is objectivly bad.
It wouldnt change anything.Reborn as Neji Hyuga with a system
trekt: No its not.
Start deleting all these nonsense reviews that give you 5/5 stars, then we can talk.
But you won't because you need these for your ego.
As much as you like good reviews, the novel won't be better because of it nor does it show the reality.Reborn as Neji Hyuga with a system
Supreme Magus · C112
BLazeEzio: Author please use some paragraphs....Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C2
Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C2
Pertiest2: The final reason to drop this novel... going premium....😢Supreme Magus · C98
Supreme Magus · C98
DaoistLeftNut: I feel that the people who gave this five stars are either bots or people who have a poor understanding of the english language. This novel does not deserve more than 2.5 stars. For it to have more than 4 is actually just astounding. The synopsis is a giant f**king run-on sentence that is repetitive, and so is the entire story. I know that almost every user created novel on this site has more than 4 stars and deserves less than 3, but I decided to check this one out, so it will receive my hate and criticism. The actual coherence of the novel isn't entirely unreadable, but the formatting and repetition and everything else grammar-wise needs improving. It is difficult to care about character and world-building when it takes conscious though to understand what the author is saying. Yes, you can applaud that they are putting out a chapter a day, but who cares when that daily chapter is a piece of s**t.Journey Towards Greatness
DandK: I'm at 29 chapter. Too much explaining, not enough world building, things are described as a big house, some things appear out of nowhere like sect is apperently surrounded by city, which was mention as a thing that everyone knew,,but I was reading it first time. Much explaining agian. There are some stupid paragraphs, some ideas stretched for too long, author hold readers hand too much, he doesn't let read to imagine stuff what they read and goes to another point and this happens for a few chapters straight (reading it I felt like a cat that is chasing laser dot, what's around me is not important just the dot). Author likes to tell what other characters think (well only one character I haven't read much), I'm not interested what that c think I'm interested in interaction between Mc and c. If you enjoyed my review like, share and subscribea. Don't forget to press little bell notification button too 😂Last Wish System
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