Quidanstealsnovels - Profile

Pace is so slow Im going to fall asleep. So much detail and background about characters that will be forgotten when he actually cultivates. Speaking of cultivation? where? he's learning all this boring stuff, stuck at this boring moral city, doing literally nothing but 'training' moral stuff. Im honestly to the point where I skip entire chapters.

Grow up. Its pathetic.

Its very generic for this type of story. Theres no cool stat system or magic system. The actual mechanics of the game aren't fleshed out. Damage, items, stats etc... all boil down to deal X% of hp dmg to enemy which makes every type of fight super generic and boring. Is he getting stronger? no idea. Characters, main characters is ok. Likeable I guess but doesn't stand out. Side characters may as well not exist they're barely mentioned and up to now have barely any personality. Im 100 chapters in and theres no actual development at all. The quality is not good, the writing format reminds me of reading a wiki than an actual story. Its very copy and paste. There are entire chapters where literally nothing happens but the author copy and pastes the same 'fight' 5 times to show the main character killed 5 mobs. Its so boring to read, i actually just skip most of them now. MC dodges and hits deals X% of hp dmg, fatal strike, critical strike etc.... Game doesn't even explain what they actually mean because the power of attacks arent explained and the system does not make sense. The story itself follows clichés, generic stuff for this type of novel. Nothing really special about it. Honestly the novel is very mid at most. Wouldn't really recommend especially because its a paid novel. There are much better novels of this genre out there, which much more interesting characters and world building.

Thanks i'll give it a miss then.

Im sorry the writing is horrible. Its unreadable. Is this even English? It doesn't read at all. Couldn't get through more than a few chapters. Never seen such horrible flow in a story before.